Varuasofsaurav

Your submission at Articles for creation: Parli(short film) (June 22)

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Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 08:34, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Hello! Varuasofsaurav, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 08:34, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

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Please take a few moments to read and review Wikipedia's policies regarding conflicts of interest, especially those pertaining to neutral point of view, sourcing and autobiographies. Thank you. Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 08:35, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Parli(short film)

A tag has been placed on Parli(short film) requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done for the following reason:

non-notable film per WP:NOTFILM

Under the criteria for speedy deletion, pages that meet certain criteria may be deleted at any time.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator, or if you have already done so, you can place a request here. GSS (talk) 10:54, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Nomination of Parli(short film) for deletion

A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Parli(short film) is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Parli(short film) until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. GSS (talk) 07:20, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Notability for films and self promotion

I've deleted the article you created in the mainspace. I had declined your article at AfC, as it did not pass WP:NFILM. If an article is declined at AfC it is a very bad idea to then try to create it in the mainspace, especially since you did not address the issues that caused the decline.

Here are the reasons why I declined the article and why I deleted the one you created in the mainspace:

The articles did not have any sort of coverage in independent and reliable sources that would pass WP:RS and establish notability - the notability being one of the key features. You sourced it to two websites, only one of which contained content, and a g-mail address. You cannot use an e-mail address as a source and it should not be on the article at all. Not only is this not a reliable source per Wikipedia's guidelines, but it also causes the article to seem promotional and also looks like you're exerting WP:OWNERSHIP over the page, neither of which are things you want on a Wikipedia entry. This might have been unintentional, but you still need to watch out for this. Of the only website that contained content, it looks to be a blog that did not mention the film offhand. Since it looks to be the website for the production company you formed for the film it's OK to list to a certain degree, but it cannot be used to back up anything in the article unless it specifically mentions the film. Even then it can only be used as a WP:PRIMARY source, which cannot show notability. Notability must absolutely be established in an article in order for it to pass NFILM. While I think it's admirable that teenagers are creating a film, this in itself does not mean that the film passes guidelines, nor is the film automatically notable because WP:ITEXISTS or will at some point in time.

I also note that the article contained a lot of information that is essentially unsourced. While none of it is particularly an issue (ie, no large and grandiose claims), this would all still need to be backed up by some sort of sourcing to be included. You can accomplish this via a primary source, but ideally you'll want a secondary source (newspapers, film review websites and the like) because at some point you still need to establish notability. One other note about the content - avoid terms like "innovative" since they're seen as very promotional on Wikipedia and you'll want to avoid that on here. This likely wasn't your intent, so just be careful about that.

I know that this might sound harsh and it isn't meant to be - I just want to explain why the page was declined and deleted. Ultimately it's extremely difficult to establish notability for films in general, but especially short independent films that are published online. It might end up that the film doesn't get any sort of coverage when it releases in September, so if this happens then don't feel discouraged. Very few film workers gain coverage for their work right away. Most of them won't get coverage until they're well into their career. What I recommend is that you look into working on a site like Wikia, where you can create your own wiki, as that site's rules are far looser than they are here.

I'm going to try to clean up the article some in order to make it fit the basic editing style on here. It doesn't mean that the article can be moved to the mainspace, but I did want to help give you an example of the writing and editing style on Wikipedia. You can continue to work on the AfC draft, however you should not move it to the mainspace before another, independent editor accepts it. Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 09:13, 27 June 2016 (UTC)