Vbam25

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:16, 28 August 2020 (UTC)

Hi Vbam25, Thanks for your feedback on my draft! I will definitely take your suggestions into account when I fix my edits. --EndlessSummer19 (talk) 16:18, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hi Vbam25!, Overall, the lead was improved so that it provided more information. This information helped to explain the overall theme of the article. The structure is also very clear, as it leads directly into the next section. The content added is also neutral with no biased opinions, only displaying the facts. The addition of the image also helped me to understand the article. I believe that there could be some improvement with the image, in regards to placement and the grammatical issues in the caption. I also think that improvements could be made to the sources, as I was not able to access the original sources. All in all, the contributions to this article has helped to improve my understanding of the topic.

Tyingmyshiu (talk) 21:17, 4 November 2020 (UTC)