VenturaHighway

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Hi

I have copyedited the first couple of sections. Please tell me what you think.

The rest of the sections are a little US oriented still. Normally we would put them into alphabetical order rather than US and then "the rest of the world". Here, in particular, they were developed in the Netherlands and so would not warrant a "US first made them" the rest followed.

Similarly the section on "US legal questions ..." - I have retitled as Legal questions ..." and put the rest into a "United States" subsection.

The piece is pretty well written, to be honest anything would be better than what was already there!

Chaosdruid (talk) 21:28, 28 June 2011 (UTC)

Hi, and thanks for the note! I've looked at your edits so far and they look fine to me. I think you should go ahead and use what I've done to make the article as good as you think it can be and then if you're ready, replace as much as you like. And you are right, the current version is very bad. I'm glad you agree it should be fixed. --VenturaHighway (talk) 22:04, 28 June 2011 (UTC)

I have added some more section headers and begun a section for the UK. I have to go offline for a while, have another look please :¬) and I will get back on it asap! Chaosdruid (talk) 22:28, 28 June 2011 (UTC)