User talk:Vickeroodle/SandboxSeaSpray

Sea Spray Peer Review

• I think your introductory paragraph should talk about why we care about sea spray.
• You don't have much linked, and I think it could be cool to link certain concepts (if you can) such as "Sea Spray Aerosols"
• Make a references header and link your references
• Make sure you cite every sentence
• I would break up your larger sections into ones to have subsections, esp. with the formation section
• Link words or phrases instead of putting them in parentheses (see: sensible heat and latent heat)
• Doesn't seem to be an order of significance here. Is climate interaction arguably more important than ecology? I'm, not sure but if you think it is I would put it before ecology
• I think if you keep talking about SSA it might be useful to spell it out when put in various sections.

• Very interesting topic! Nice work.

KirstenSteinke (talk) 23:19, 19 November 2018 (UTC)KirstenSteinke