WanderingScallop55

Felton family

I have left a comment on the Felton family draft that gives some advice to improve your draft. I think that this will improve your chances of having it accepted later; I didn't decline it yet because there is a lot of potential here and I can tell you put a lot of work into this. UserMemer (chat) Tribs 22:27, 14 November 2024 (UTC)

Thanks so much! Sorry if it's a bit messy it's my first time, have updated some citations now, and will do more tomorrow. WanderingScallop55 (talk) 00:23, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

No problem. I've reviewed many submissions, and this one's very comprehensive compared to many other ones I've reviewed. Also, if you want it to look neater, you can take a look at the Manual of Style, but you don't have to for your draft to be accepted. Good luck! UserMemer (chat) Tribs 14:00, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

Ah ok will do! Does it look okay now do you reckon? WanderingScallop55 (talk) 15:32, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

I'd say it looks pretty good. The topic is certainly notable, but you should make sure all sources are reliable. Citing universities is good, but just to be sure all sources are reliable, check the non ".edu" sources for reliability. If they are all found to be reliable, this article will be accepted. Also, instead of saying for his Wikipedia article, click here, you could use the more widely used {{Main article}} template. For example, {{main article|Dog}} yields the following:

Main article: Dog

You've done a good job and I think your draft is on its way to the mainspace.

Post script: For checking reliability, see this page that shows consensus on the reliability of sources. Press Ctrl+F on a computer to search for your source. If you can't find it there, look at the tiers of reliability to make sure the best sources are used. UserMemer (chat) Tribs 17:12, 15 November 2024 (UTC)