User talk:Waterhouset/sandbox

Article Evaluation

Some descriptions of various conditions could be improved upon for clarity including the definition of DCD in the first paragraph. There could be added information under the classification section describing criteria that allows this disorder to be classified under the section. An added section that discusses various treatments including speech, occupational, physical therapy, social work as well as possible psychological interventions could be described. There article feels very general and vague which could benefit from a little more detail on the page itself to allow people a larger more in depth view of this disorder without having to hop to numerous pages to navigate through definitions. Waterhouset (talk) 15:56, 15 September 2017 (UTC)

suggestions

Article looks good. I think rewriting the proposed sections will be a good addition to the present article. Maybe check the references to see of there could be some updated articles or even adding some PT treatments. Ianbauersfeld (talk) 21:55, 14 October 2017 (UTC)