"All treatment options in the HMR Program include lifestyle education to teach participants how to make lifestyle changes to balance energy or calories. HMR emphasizes three specific lifestyle changes: physical activity, vegetable and fruit intake, and use of meal replacements. The HMR Program includes simple record-keeping forms to help participants track and monitor these changes." NawlinWiki (talk) 17:57, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
- In particular, the line about the "simple" forms, intimating that the HMR program is desirable because it's easy to use. NawlinWiki (talk) 18:21, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
- Before we decide whether this is an advertisement, I have another question for you. The article is supported by multiple references - but all of these, on reflection, seem to be either about obesity, weight loss, or studies of the efficacy of weight loss programs. The article, however, is about a company, HMR. Do any of the sources demonstrate that HMR itself is notable per WP:CORP? NawlinWiki (talk) 18:48, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
- I changed the ad tag to a notability tag. You said that the first two sources discuss HMR. The first one is a 14-year-old brochure with no link, so I can't verify the claim. The second source is to HMR's own website, so it's not independent. What reliable, independent, verifiable sources can you cite to me that demonstrate HMR's notability per WP:CORP? NawlinWiki (talk) 14:54, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- If you add the additional sources, feel free to remove the notability tag. Thanks, NawlinWiki (talk) 17:12, 30 July 2010 (UTC)