User talk:Werickson.31/Mahamat Déby
Peer Review
editI really enjoyed how this article included the perspectives of many actors, describing the opinions of the French government, the FACT rebels, and protesters. Furthermore, you describe their opinions, while keeping a neutral stance and dedicating relatively equal article space to each perspective. One thing you could do to improve the section on French support is to make a connection to the colonial past, so that readers that are unaware of the history can be informed. It would also be interesting to include a section on the public's present support for Mahamat Déby and whether protests/resistance are still ongoing.
The sources cited are also mostly newspapers and media websites, which although reliable, a larger variety of sources and more academic journals/books would benefit the article.
A lead section that summarizes the additions you have made to the article would also be a good improvement for the article. Marialobatograbowsky (talk) 18:28, 15 April 2023 (UTC)