User talk:Whitneygeorge/sandbox

Hi. Daniel Stanley here doing a peer review. As I understood it, you're adding the publication and receptions sections for your final assignment, so that's what I looked at. Seems like the first paragraph of publication, when it talks about the success the book had selling, could go underneath reception. At least some of the info. Maybe you could even incorporate everything in publication into reception, just using sub-headings? All of reception is well written, but there is a typo in the word "address" on the last line. Feel like the last line of the first paragraph ("Numerous attacks . . . ) could go in the next paragraph. Where it is, it seems to lack a citation, and though it introduces the next paragraph, I think it would fit better as the first sentence. Dstanley16 (talk) 23:08, 8 June 2017 (UTC)