User talk:WikiBen104/sandbox

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Mazt2 in topic Peer Review.

Peer Review.

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This is a very complex topic that has been successfully described in a clear way. The article has a clear content structure with a proper flow through sections of the article that seem necessary for the understanding of the topic. The content is portrayed neutrally and focuses on facts and reliable information without including the author perspective on the topic. The most important information is included and summarized in an appropriate way. In terms of improvements it would be useful to link every possible world that can be complicated to understand to another page if it's available. And lastly, it would be very interesting to see a more detailed information about the function of the Kenyon Cells, and it would also balanced the amount of contents as other sections have more information.Mazt2 (talk) 01:23, 27 November 2016 (UTC)Reply