Your submission at Articles for creation: Blood & Iron (February 16)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dan arndt was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Dan arndt (talk) 05:34, 16 February 2021 (UTC)Reply
 
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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Blood & Iron

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Blood & Iron, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Your Blood and iron draft

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Hi - first of all, I'm working on the assumption that you have zero connection to the game, and are just a fan? If you have any connection to the subject, you need to read WP:COI and WP:PAID, and take the necessary steps.

Now, having looked at the draft, I can see why it was declined; I can also see why someone put a speedy deletion tag on it - I don't think it meets the criteria, but it needs a lot of work before it's publishable. Here are some tips:

  • You need to demonstrate that the subject is notable, as we define the term here. The simplest way to explain this is to ask you to read WP:GNG. You need multiple sources, which are reliable, secondary and independent of the subject, writing about the subject in significant detail, in order to establish that we should host an article about that. All your draft has at present are links to the Roblox website, which is an affiliated source and so not independent. Blogs won't help, you need established gaming publications writing decent-length reviews of it, that sort of thing.
  • We don't address the reader in the second person (you), write in the third person. (Eg: A group of between 2 and 40 players vote...)
  • Make sure all your prose is neutrally written and factual.
  • Take a look at WP:FIRST.

I hope that's all clear, best GirthSummit (blether) 10:03, 16 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

I see from the notice below this one that you submitted that draft again. If you want that draft to be published, you will need to take the following steps:
  • Find some sources which are independent of the subject, secondary and reliable. Wikia websites are user-generated, and inherently unreliable. An example of such a source would be an in-depth review in a respected gaming magazine.
  • Get rid of the second person references - you removed one, but they are scattered throughout the text. You basically shouldn't use the word 'you' anywhere in the aritcle.
  • Cut any information in the article that is from your personal knowledge of the game. If it isn't mentioned in your reliable sources, leave it out.
The long and short of it is that Wikipedia isn't Wikia. We don't write what we know, we write what we can verify; we don't write about whatever we like, we write about stuff that we can show to be notable. Please don't submit the draft again for review without taking the steps above - this is a volunteer project, and reviewing drafts that are clearly unpublishable is a waste of our resources. GirthSummit (blether) 11:04, 17 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Blood & Iron (February 17)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Devonian Wombat was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Devonian Wombat (talk) 02:57, 17 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Phantom Forces (Roblox) (February 17)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
KylieTastic (talk) 14:56, 17 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Blood & Iron (February 18)

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Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by JalenFolf was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: No coverage in reliable independent sources. Fandom wikis are unreliable per WP:UGC.
Jalen Folf (talk) 01:41, 18 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Phantom Forces (Roblox) (February 18)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by JalenFolf were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Jalen Folf (talk) 05:23, 18 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Merville, Parañaque has been accepted

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Merville, Parañaque, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

GirthSummit (blether) 11:32, 19 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Moonwalk, Parañaque moved to draftspace

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An article you recently created, Moonwalk, Parañaque, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. — Amkgp 💬 11:04, 20 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Nomination of The End Poem for deletion

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The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/The End Poem until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

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theinstantmatrix (talk) 04:46, 6 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Nomination of The Armchair Historian for deletion

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A discussion is taking place as to whether the article The Armchair Historian is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/The Armchair Historian until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article.

theinstantmatrix (talk) 13:59, 6 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Candon → Candon, Ilocos

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@Wikidoorman: Please read MOS:PHIL#Cities. —hueman1 (talk contributions) 09:02, 22 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Ipon Challenge moved to draftspace

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An article you recently created, Ipon Challenge, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Mccapra (talk) 21:19, 31 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Concern regarding Draft:Ipon Challenge

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  Hello, Wikidoorman. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Ipon Challenge, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 22:01, 31 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Ipon Challenge

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Hello, Wikidoorman. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Ipon Challenge".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 23:09, 30 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Elemental (film) (November 23)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
KylieTastic (talk) 10:20, 23 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Elemental (film) (December 4)

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Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Jovanmilic97 was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: Nothing has changed since the decline, the draft was resubmitted without any improvements.
Jovanmilic97 (talk) 11:02, 4 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

MfD nomination of Draft:Elemental (film)

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  Draft:Elemental (film), a page which you created or substantially contributed to, has been nominated for deletion. Your opinions on the matter are welcome; you may participate in the discussion by adding your comments at Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Draft:Elemental (film) and please be sure to sign your comments with four tildes (~~~~). You are free to edit the content of Draft:Elemental (film) during the discussion but should not remove the miscellany for deletion template from the top of the page; such a removal will not end the deletion discussion. Thank you. Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 13:32, 2 March 2023 (UTC)Reply