User talk:William.hirsch/sandbox

The current wikipedia article on Edna Fischel Gellhorn is quite similar to a "lead section." However, it is almost too vague to even be considered that. The article has no subheadings and although it does mention rather significant points and accomplishments, it fails to go into detail about them. For example, Gellhorn was best known for her work with the League of Women Voters, yet the current article only has about two to three sentences involving her work with the league. When improving the existing article, I will look to go into further detail to better explain and give praise to the accomplishments of Edna Fischel Gellhorn and the impact that she had on women. Gellhorn also served as a civil rights' activist, which I hope to go into further detail about as well. I plan to expand the article by adding a biography section which will include her early life, St. Louis and Missouri State Equal Suffrage Leagues, the League of Women Voters, and other activism and accomplishments leading up until her death, noting the legacy she left behind.William.hirsch (talk) 15:34, 4 October 2016 (UTC)