WinstonZhou

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Hello, WinstonZhou, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 12:34, 31 August 2017 (UTC)

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Hi Winston. Nice work on your draft. To answer your questions

• The reference section reflects the references used in the article. If old references still show up, that means they're still being used somewhere in the article.
  • An aside: I noticed that you have used the same source several times in your draft. You can combine them into one as outlined here.
• Tone seems fine
• Wikipedia articles should all have a similar look, so you shouldn't try to alter the appearances of a page (other than your user page, which you can decorate in any way you want). If you did change it, someone would change it back. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:39, 5 October 2017 (UTC)