User talk:Wnini89/sandbox

Initial Feedback

@Wnini89: Good start with this article. The biggest thing that's obviously missing are references. One is to a list on Forbes and the other two seem to be primary sources. Additional references from reliable sources that are not connected to the subject are essential to establish notability. I think this should be solved. It's probably not a critical issue because the article already exists and you'll be replacing it. That said, I think that this a major deficiency in the article and it's something you should fix before you move yours over. Remember, non-English sources are totally fine to add! English sources are probably better for the English-language version in Wikipedia but Chinese sources are fine too (see WP:NONENGLISH).

I'd also encourage you to add more. You've really only added a couple sentences. This seems like a rich topic. You can add more. Also, there are also some English issues with the text you've written. For example, what does it mean to be "listed entirely"? Keep working on it! Good luck! —mako๛ 22:55, 20 October 2016 (UTC)