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User:Glavinm/sandbox User:PeterBryant04 The current article is poorly written, with vague language and unclear purpose. The article lacks specifics for a majority of the sections. This leading to it not being very informative.Unfortunately the current wiki page has several instances of plagiarism. Even though the sentence is followed by a citation the sentence itself is still copied from a different source word for word. Also the wiki page is does not cover all topics equally. Currently there is a very small and random section about Saudi Arabia. I believe this would be more effective if there was more information about this topic. The few short sentences make it seem that this country is doing something very different, providing all students with an IEP, however they do not go into the effects of this on the students there as compared to the rest of the world. If that information is not available then I believe this section should be removed because it is confusing and takes away from the rest of the article.