User talk:Yiwen122/Luxun native place

Preliminary Review from Kaylea

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you.

One issue to consider is how to make sure this article focuses on encyclopedic information rather than turning into too much of a travel guide. You will want to focus your energy on adding details about the location, its history, news, and so on. It's a subtle point, but details about opening times and closing times are not typical of an encyclopedia entry. You might want to compare what you have to other similar topics as a model. This is the category where I found many examples: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:Birthplaces_of_individual_people

Kaylea Champion (talk) 01:56, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Follow up from Kaylea

Hi @Yiwen122:

You are making progress, but I think there is still a lot of "travel guide" type information in here as I mention above. Also, the Bibliography section is only meant to be your notes -- it doesn't belong in the article itself. All of the reference information should go into the citations.

Keep working~

Kaylea Champion (talk) 03:19, 12 February 2022 (UTC)

Hi @Yiwen122:

This still has "travel guide" information in it -- the ticket price in particular is what I am thinking about here.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 20:33, 12 February 2022 (UTC)

Go-Live Approval

Hi @Yiwen122:

You are approved to go live, but first please check your sources. I know that Baidu in particular is not a reliable source for English Wikipedia. You might find this list of reliable sources useful -- maybe you can find a little bit more information from some things in the WikiProject China resource list:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_China#Resources

Overall, I want to make sure that you've made enough additions that your work qualifies for full credit on the assignment; at this point, I think a little more work is needed.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:

1. Final read-through draft.
2. Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
3. Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
4. Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
5. Note on article talk page.
6. Note at the top of your sandbox version.
7. Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
8. Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 21:48, 12 February 2022 (UTC)