Yosra Madani
Joined 16 April 2018
Latest comment: 6 years ago by MHAN2016 in topic Revision
Revision
editThis link shows the revision of your translation. The two things to pay attention to are the construction of noun phrases and the agreement of time and tense (it's best to avoid the historical present in written English). MHAN2016 (talk) 14:18, 14 May 2018 (UTC)