User talk:Zach.ross/sandbox

Review

I agree with the suggested clarification of wording. I like the way you expanded the article with the additional sections. Typo here? being traversed ti to constricting? Link to the Snakebot Wikipedia article? Or is there a better link for the robotics section? Looks good.Marciaharrison (talk) 16:32, 21 February 2017 (UTC)

One thing I would recommend, where you have a comment "This method is extremely slow", that's a bit vague, maybe describe exactly how much slower? Like, is it 5 km/h instead of the usual 7 km/h in the other forms of movement? Kenneth.leep (talk) 16:45, 20 February 2017 (UTC)