Zakira seidu
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- Hi, I am a fellow student in your class, and I just wanted to introduce myself. Samone H (talk) 04:46, 8 March 2018 (UTC)
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Peer Review - Samone
editThe introduction (lead section) was really good, and the opening sentence caught my attention. The lead section really gives a layout and information that I can expect to learn about from reading the rest of this article. The tone is very good. Very neutral. There are some sentence structure issues that could be fixed, and there are some citations that are should be in-text citations, or are phrased in a way that seems like they are in-citations, but are not cited as such.
The article overall has a clear structure, I really like how it's broken up, and there seems to balance of coverage. No section in the article is over or under extended in my opinion. The article does a good job of explaining a concept, explaining its effects on the African community, and giving adequate information on a topic. Maybe the Methods Section and the Factors Affecting Prevalence should be switched. It could better the flow of the article.The section about cultural attitudes really adds to multiple perspectives of the article and doesn't give the article a biased tone.
Maybe you could find another word to use other an attitude? Sometimes the word attitude was negative connotations attached to it.
When looking at the dates of the references most of them seem to be from 2010 and above. Which is good because you want the information in the article to represent the most recent information. So, more recent information could be even better! I couldn't find the link for citations #6, but the majority of the sources are from reliable sources and studies.
Overall, great article! I really enjoyed it.
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