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--Orange Mike | Talk 03:57, 7 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

 
This user's request to be unblocked to request a change in username has been reviewed by an administrator, who declined the request. Other administrators may also review this block, but should not override the decision without a good reason (see the blocking policy). Do not remove this unblock review while you are blocked.

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I simply added information regarding a new TV show that airs nationally in the US. The data was pulled from the Network's website and from a trade article about the launch. How is that advertising?? And why am I a "spammer"?? Pretty unfriendly group here....

Decline reason:

(1) If you sincerely did not see the wording that you posted as promotional in character, then you do not have enough awareness of what you are writing to be able to edit objectively. It is clear from what you say that you would be likely to post the same kind of stuff again if you were unblocked. (2) Yes indeed, the content you posted was "pulled", as you call it, from the Network's website and from a trade article about the launch, which means that it was a copyright infringement. You can't just go around copying other people's stuff and posting it to Wikipedia. (3) You have made no attempt at all to address the conflict of interest and username issues. JamesBWatson (talk) 15:30, 7 May 2013 (UTC)Reply
 
This user's request to be unblocked to request a change in username has been reviewed by an administrator, who declined the request. Other administrators may also review this block, but should not override the decision without a good reason (see the blocking policy). Do not remove this unblock review while you are blocked.

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Umm, ok.... So can I reword and re-submit? There are a million other articles on Wikipedia about national US talk shows??? I still don't get the abusive/belittling tone... How is the wording at all "promotional." And I looked into it: copy from a network website or from IMDB would be considered fair use as long as I am not deriving financial benefit from it.

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That's not a valid username - the "/" character is a delimiter, and User:N/A would be a subpage "A" belonging to User:N -- Boing! said Zebedee (talk) 19:40, 7 May 2013 (UTC)Reply
"copy from a network website or from IMDB would be considered fair use as long as I am not deriving financial benefit from it."
This is incorrect, and a common misconception about copyright. Please read WP:COPYRIGHT for more information. - Vianello (Talk) 17:04, 7 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

You say you don't see anything promotional in "Jeff Halevy and his guests share the secrets of staying in to work out, while Jeff inspires viewers to live a healthier life from the inside out"???? I don't know which would be sadder: if you honestly don't see what's wrong with language like that in an encyclopedia, or if you don't care enough to be honest about it. That's not reference work language, that's press release spew, fit only for paid advertising venues. --Orange Mike | Talk 21:28, 7 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

There are much nicer ways of saying that Orange Mike. I guess you are right. My life is sad because I don't troll Wikipedia all day long. Now, if we can all be constructive and nice, I would like to write a page for a national health and fitness talk show that airs in the United States. Can I be unblocked and resubmit the article with an attempt at more "encyclopedic" language?
 
This user's request to be unblocked to request a change in username has been reviewed by an administrator, who declined the request. Other administrators may also review this block, but should not override the decision without a good reason (see the blocking policy). Do not remove this unblock review while you are blocked.

ZeeTVusa (block logactive blocksglobal blocksautoblockscontribsdeleted contribsfilter logcreation logchange block settingsunblockcheckuser (log))


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I would like to write a page for a national health and fitness talk show that airs in the United States (http://www.veria.com/tv/show/workout-from-within). Can I be unblocked and resubmit the article with an attempt at more "encyclopedic" language?

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Having viewed the deleted page and your previous unblock requests, I am not willing to unblock you at this time, since I'm not convinced that you will not quickly be reblocked for similar behaviour. However, in the spirit of WP:SECONDCHANCE, I'm offering you an option: at the bottom of this page, post the proposed revised text of your article submission, together with sources etc. under a new heading, then file another unblock request below it. If the prospective text demonstrates an improved understanding of Wikipedia's content requirements (it doesn't have to be perfect, just meet the basic standards for notability, sourcing and content) then I will happily unblock you to allow you to change your username and continue editing. Yunshui  12:53, 13 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

Is James Garner your real name? If it isn't, we can't allow this as it is the name of not only the Rockford Files actor but a number of other notable living people we have articles on, and policy forbids that. Daniel Case (talk) 04:23, 12 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

Thanks Daniel Case, I go by Jim but my birth name is James. I'm fine using either... — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.103.120.35 (talk) 21:24, 12 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

Unblock Request and New Text for Article Per Request From Yunshui

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This user's request to be unblocked to request a change in username has been reviewed by an administrator, who declined the request. Other administrators may also review this block, but should not override the decision without a good reason (see the blocking policy). Do not remove this unblock review while you are blocked.

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Per the request from Yunshui, here is my proposed new article. Al language is now mine, and has not been pull;ed from the network's website (as I had previously thought was ok).

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Obviously, your secondchance was intended to see if you were planning on creating something that you did NOT have conflict of interest with. You have unfortunately shown that your intent on this project is to promote an entity, and you do not seem to understand the different between something existing and notability because of that bias. There also are significant issues with the draft - for example, the show has existed since April, but there are 52 episodes already? Um, no. (✉→BWilkins←✎) 14:53, 15 May 2013 (UTC)Reply


Workout From Within with Jeff Halevy
Created byVeria Living
Directed byDana Calderwood
StarringJeff Halevy (Host)
Country of originUnited States
No. of seasons1
No. of episodes52
Production
Executive producerCordelia Bowe
ProducerAdrienne Hammel
Running time30 minutes
(with commercials)
Production companiesVeria
Zee TV
Original release
NetworkFirst-run syndication
ReleaseApril 25, 2013 –
present

Workout From Within with Jeff Halevy

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Workout From Within with Jeff Halevy is an American syndicated talk show airing weekly in the U.S. It debuted on April 25th, 2013. [1] The half-hour long primetime program is produced and distributed in the U.S. by Veria.


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The show’s focus is on healthy living, including the mental, physical, and nutritional aspects of same. Show host, Jeff Halevy and his guests, which include professional athletes and celebrities such as football legend Tiki Barber and super model Emme, [2] share their personal healthy living experiences and challenges, as Halevy both guides and interviews them on each episode. Topics covered include motivation, couples workouts, diet, exercise, nutrition, weekend warriors, and staying on track with a healthy regimen.[3]

One of the show's signature concepts is making a healthy lifestyle easy. Halevy has demonstrated this concept on various national morning shows, through both exercise, meditation, and nutrition advice. [4] [5]


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  1. ^ Cynopsis. "MORE GOOD STUFF".
  2. ^ TV Tango. "Overview".
  3. ^ Locate TV. "Episode Guide".
  4. ^ ABC News. "How to exercise using everyday objects".
  5. ^ Good Day Chicago. "How to Workout From Within".
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I have concerns about the article draft above, and whilst I'm not going to decline the appeal, I am going to leave it for another admin to provide an opinion (and/or unblock). There are still definite whiffs of marketing-speak in the text: e.g. "professional athletes and celebrities such as football legend Tiki Barber and super model Emme" (why not "Previous guests have included Tiki Barber and Emme."?) I am also concerned that the notability requirements have not been met; three of the sources provided are inaccessible to me but appear to be video excerpts from the show, whilst the other two are just TV listings. Had I encountered this article in mainspace, I would probably have listed it for deletion; I therefore can't in good conscience issue an unblock based on its demonstration of your policy comprehension. Yunshui  07:51, 14 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

OK...I'm new to this stuff, but I don't understand how a primetime show airing at 7:30pm twice per week, on a nationally available network doesn't meet notability requirements... I am also not a marketer; Tiki Barber and Emme are both on Wikipedia and are described accordingly as celebrities, and respectively as super model and professional athlete. Good Day Chicago (Fox) and ABC are both huge news organizations that have covered the shows launch, and Cynopsis is a major trade publication. The TV listings were to provide episode/guest/content information, and are reliable third-party unbiased sources. I don't understand what the issue is here. ?? ZeeTVusa (talk) 14:25, 14 May 2013 (UTC)Reply