Needs cleanup for English usage; also, transliterated Marathi should be checked, and addition of Devanagari would be nice too. --Marnen Laibow-Koser (talk) (desk) 23:38, 8 November 2005 (UTC)
- English usage seems to be fine, as I gave it a once-over. I don't know anything about the Marathi language specifically, though, so I left the content alone. Kerowyn 10:51, 13 November 2005 (UTC)
- I went through the first few paragraphs and made some stylistic changes, but noticed in so doing (fact checking, verification, etc) that some of the information on the linked pages is incorrect (or inconsistant). For example, when linking to marathi literature, I noticed that there was no mention of the very early origins of the marathi language. Also, the CIA world factbook (2004) reports 15 official languages, while the linked page notes a clear disparity. (talk) --ranvel 02:44, 28 November 2005 (UTC)
- The content needs more refining. I am proficient in Indian culture and I can make the corrections. So please assign it to me. nivus(desk) 10:00, 9 February 2006 (UTC)
Added to User:Nivus/Desk RJFJR 05:35, 12 February 2006 (UTC)
- An issue has been brought up for this topic by Nivus. Go to the talk page to view the issue under Clarifications.Nivus 12:17, 17 February 2006 (UTC)
I am through with this. It may need a couple more Marathi scripts in certain places but nothing that may stand out of place. This can be closed for cleanup. Nivus|(talk)|(desk) 07:24, 3 March 2006 (UTC)