User LFROTA wrote this article, apparently with a very limited understanding of written English. All attempted corrections, thus far, to make it more readable have been reverted by LFROTA. I pointed him at the Manual of Style to try and help, but no cosmetic changes to the article have been made. Perhaps a Cleanup Taskforce fix-up of the article will help LFROTA? Avalyn 07:25, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
This article needs the addition of an intro paragraph saying wht tardive dysphrenia IS before it explains how it was identified. The formatting for the 'apendix' needs work. RJFJR 11:19, 10 June 2006 (UTC)
- The article and appendix have now been cleaned to an acceptable standard. User LFROTA was most pleased. The article now requires an introduction, and a semi-expert copyeditor to fill in some gaps. -- zzuuzz (talk) 19:52, 22 June 2006 (UTC)
Added to User:Kerowyn/Desk RJFJR 13:59, 3 July 2006 (UTC)
- The article has been cleaned up and partially re-written for a non-medical audience. The more glaring gaps in content have been filled and the article is now in line with the other tardive syndromes. Calling this one closed. Kerowyn 05:57, 20 July 2006 (UTC)