So complicated (and encumbered by TLDR postings) that it is not feasible for this board to try and pull it apart. Advice was offered on how to move forward with a RfC to funnel down the herd of cats into a manageable consensus. Hasteur (talk) 20:29, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
Closed discussion
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the dispute resolution noticeboard's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
An editor wishes for the sourcing for (at least parts of) the article Organic food not to be subject to the WP:MEDRS guideline, and/or there is an unresolved question as to whether particular article content should fall under the WP:MEDRS sourcing requirements.
Have you tried to resolve this previously?
Lengthy discussion on the article Talk page.
How do you think we can help?
Help us guide the discussion to a resolution. The article is full-protected until 14 December and we need to be well on the path to having a productive discussion so that the content dispute does not return to the article after unprotection.
Opening comments by Montanabw
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My position is on the talk page already, but I will restate it here: As I see it, the first problem is use of the WP:MEDRS standard to create an NPOV problem: the removal of material with a pro-organic food slant, leaving only material with an anti-organic food slant. The second issue is if MEDRS should be applied to this article at all, not at all, or somewhere in-between? I would refine this question further: if MEDRS applies to this article at all, should it apply a) to ALL aspects of the article (including, e.g. farming methods, chemistry questions, etc.) ; b) only to "medical" or "health" claims (whatever those are, but this issue arose over a question of whether pesticide residues on non-organic foods have a cancer link, so let's focus on that one); and if b) applies, then c) Is the question of pesticide residue entirely a medical claim subject to MEDRS in the first place or is it also a non-medical question involving politics and other issues? if so, are these relevant to balance the NPOV of the article?
My position is that WP:RS is suitable, perhaps WP:SCIRS though, clearly, MEDRS sources are great - when available. Further, the edit I suggested (at talk) clearly identifies the sources and their POV so that the reader can assess the information for themselves. To me, the concerns raised are akin to early claims linking smoking to lung cancer or carbon emissions to climate change; mainstream researchers first debunked these claims, but now, with time, have upheld them. Most such concerns are raised long before there are sufficient mainstream studies, thus narrow MEDRS adherence may in fact violate NPOV. Further, my own position is stated at MEDRS itself: "sources for all other types of content—including all non-medical information in medicine-related articles—are covered by the general guideline on identifying reliable sources rather than this specific guideline." Montanabw(talk)19:32, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
Opening comments by The Banner
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A short respons: Focus of the conflict is a blatant refusal to allow more reliable sources into the chapter "Health and safety". It is rather weird that in an article about producing food and part of the WikiProject Agriculture, no agricultural sources are allowed to references statements about health, safety, nutrients and taste. Those agricultural sources, although of the highest standard, are treated as completely unreliable. The blanket ban of these sources has led to an article that is POV and one sided. It gives undue weight to the medical side of growing food, due to the fact that only medicals sources (WP:MEDRS) are allowed. Every statement using agricultural sources to back up claims in the chapter "Health and safety", are consequently removed. Discussion about this point was as walking into a concrete pillbox and proved utterly useless. The Bannertalk20:28, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
Opening comments by Yobol
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The focus of the dispute seems to be about proper sourcing for portions of the article dealing with nutritional content and safety of organic foods. My reading of WP:MEDRS finds that any health claim in any article, whether about food or not, falls under WP:MEDRS, including Organic food. Others in the dispute have claimed that since this is a food article, WP:MEDRS doesn't apply in the article at all. Clearly MEDRS does not apply to non health related matters (such as specifics of farming). However, discussion of nutritional values and safety are clearly health claims, and therefore fall under WP:MEDRS. I would like sourcing of material to be appropriate for the content; medical/nutritional sources (in this case WP:MEDRS compliant sourcing) should be used for medical/nutritional claims; agricultural sources used for agricultural material.
A related side dispute has focused on the neutrality of the article, specifically regarding whether there is a bias about the conclusions from sources. The position of WP:MEDRS compliant sourcing is fairly clear in that there is no significant nutritional or safety benefits from either organic or conventional foods. Some have claimed that since "pro" organic food claims are not sufficiently represented, there is a bias, and therefore inferior sourcing needs to be added to adjust for this bias. I think this is putting the cart before the horse; this argument has neutrality and weight determined before hand, and sources found to support that bias, rather than letting the sources dictate what the neutral point of view is. This is clearly an inappropriate way to write this article from a neutral point of view. We should summarize what the best (MEDRS) sources say, no matter what the outcome; we should not artificially adjust the weight to some predetermined outcome and use inferior sources to justify them. If none of the best MEDRS compliant sources support organic food as superior, then that is the neutral point of view, and trying to shift it with inferior sourcing is POV pushing and has to stop. (I note that at no point has there been a presentation of a MEDRS compliant source to support the superiority of organic food; just the arguing of the use of non MEDRS to be used to justify that conclusion).Yobol (talk) 19:40, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
Your opening statement is about 200 characters over the limit but it's not enough over the limit to need to get trimmed. ~~Ebe123~~ → report21:35, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
Opening comments by The Four Deuces
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This may be a diversion. Since no one has presented any sources that meet the policy of neutrality, MEDRS does not arise. If we find that there is consensus in the literature of agricultural sciences that organic food is superior in nutrients, then this would be reflected in the literature in nutritional sciences, making the point moot. Only in the event that there was disagreement between different sciences on the same facts would MEDRS become an issue. But then we would expect reliable sources covering the dispute and could address the problem then. TFD (talk) 22:34, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
Opening comments by IRWolfie-
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Noone has focused on the actual content under dispute. Here is the content under dispute: [1]. As you can see it is full of claims about regular food being a cancer risk etc, thus WP:MEDRS sources are required. As you can also see, it's a WP:SYNTH being used explicitly to counter the MEDRS sources above it. Montanabw has been pushing that their is a large conspiracy to thwart small organic producers by "big grain" [2] sourcing it to "Motherearthnews" and Cornucopia.org, commondreams.org amongst others, and that we shouldn't use MEDRS. The Banner has refused to clarify whether he think MEDRS sources are required for cancer risks. IRWolfie- (talk) 10:11, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Opening comments by bobrayner
Keeping it short - DRN can involve a lot of reading and I don't want to make life harder for people.
I feel that WP:MEDRS is clear, from the first paragraph, that we expect stronger sourcing for medical & health claims even in articles that are mainly about other topics; in the same way that we apply WP:BLP to claims about living people in other articles. Talkpage discussion seems to suggest that the strongest sources do not support the kind of claims which some editors would like to see, and they would like to change the rules in order to allow less-reliable sources to be used which say different things; I would say that tweaking sourcing rules until we find something that says what we want is back-to-front. bobrayner (talk) 23:32, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
Opening comments by uninvolved MrADHD
WP:MEDRS is a guideline to cover medical content, such as medical facts and medical claims. Any use of MEDRS outside of medical content is a WP:GOODFAITHed misuse of MEDRS. From a very brief brief look at this dispute it may be the case that people on both sides of the dispute are not interpreting policies and guidelines appropriately.--MrADHD | T@1k?22:34, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Talk:Organic food discussion
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Hi, I'm Ebe123, an volunteer at DRN. MedRS only applies to parts of articles relating to medicine, and WP:RS is for other things. High-quality reliable references are good, but avreage RSs are also good as they are reliable nontheless. I would like a list of the references of which this dispute is centered upon. We will still wait though for the two other parties before discussion.
Clarification: I think (hope?) that all the parties involved can agree that this diff is the core of the dispute, notably the inclusion of the paragraph beginning "However, a 1989 peer-reviewed study sponsored by the Natural Resources Defense Council ..." and then the previous paragraphs that begin that section, which outline the opposing view. Montanabw(talk)22:46, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
Perhaps you can outline why you restored material about cancer risks which was inadequately sourced and a synthesis to counter the previous section. IRWolfie- (talk) 10:39, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Therefore, it is vital that the biomedical information in all types of articles be based on reliable, third-party, published sources and accurately reflect current medical knowledge... This guideline supports the general sourcing policy at Wikipedia:Verifiability with specific attention given to sources appropriate for the medical and health-related content in any type of article, including alternative medicine... Sources for all other types of content—including all non-medical information in medicine-related articles [is not covered by MEDRS].
(Emphasis added to foregoing quote.) So, if it is health-related content then MEDRS applies. Based upon the responses given by the disputants, above, however, I'm not quite sure whether the dispute here is really:
A dispute over whether MEDRS applies to particular content or, on the other hand,
Not a dispute over whether MEDRS applies, there being agreement that it does, but a dispute over whether it should be applied in this particular case because to do so causes (it is argued) the article to be unbalanced.
Based on my reading of the Talk page (and the opening statements above), there are a couple additional issues involved in addition to the two that TrasnporterMan mentions above:
3) Given that MEDRS applies to health-related material, can "agricutural" RSs be used for such material (in addition to medical/scientific sources)?
4) Under what circumstances, if any, can health claims be included in the article without scientific/research RSs?
To illustrate issue (4), compare these two sentences:
a) "Organic food is healthier than non-organic food in the following way ..."
b) "Organization ABC states that organic food is healthier than non-organic food as follows ...."
Statement (a), in the encyclopedia's voice, does need strong sourcing per MEDRS, particularly scientific/research sources. However, statement (b) need not have scientific sourcing (in my opinion) because it is simply reporting who the proponents are, and what their claims are (see WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV). --Noleander (talk) 02:12, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Hi TransporterMan, my understanding of the range of the dispute is that there are basically three questions:
1. Does WP:MEDRS apply to sourcing for every biomedical claim in the article?
There is an argument being brought forward that WP:MEDRS-compliant sourcing need not be required for every biomedical claim in the article because it's a food and not a medical article.
My view: I do not believe this view is correct. WP:MEDRS has wording indicating it applies to "biomedical information in all types of articles," and the fact that this is a food article does not release it from the need to have WP:MEDRS-quality sourcing for any biomedical claims it makes.
2. Can the article have biomedical claims not sourced to WP:MEDRS-compliant sources alongside quite possibly contradictory claims supported by WP:MEDRS-compliant sourcing?
There is an argument being brought forward that non-WP:MEDRS-compliant sourcing needs to allowed to counter a perceived POV problem that the insistence on only WP:MEDRS-compliant sourcing for all biomedical claims introduces.
My view: The "POV" introduced by insisting on WP:MEDRS-compliant sourcing for all biomedical claims is beneficial and the intended result of the application of Wikipedia guideline.
3. Are certain claims that the article makes or might make truly "biomedical" claims that require WP:MEDRS-compliant sourcing?
Such claims are things like: Whether consumers express a difference in the taste or perceived quality of organic vs. non-organic food, or whether there are nutritional content or food safety differences (levels of amino acids, vitamins, pesticides) between the two types of foods.
My view: These need to be evaluated on a case by case basis. I feel that nutrition and food safety claims would fall under WP:MEDRS requirements.
I have not been involved in editing this article, but have made some comments in the talk. I think that Zad summarises the questions reasonably well, but I have a different view on the answer to those questions. In my view, the scope of 'biomedical' is being applied too widely by some editors on this page in respect of whether MEDRS applies. The nub of the problem in this respect is that research on organic food is frequently not conducted by medical experts, but by experts in agriculture or related disciplines, and this results in the articles being in journals that those editors are reluctant to accept. In addition, some of the areas under contention have a fairly limited number of peer reviewed articles, and editors are strongly pointing to the requirement in MEDRS to use review articles - there just aren't that many for this topic, and to me that is an indication to use some of the individual articles, with appropriate wording and attribution. At the moment, because of this insistence on MEDRS rather than just RS i believe that a systemic bias has been introduced, and whilst some editors think that this is a good thing, i think it runs against the principles and objectives which underly the WP sourcing policies. OwainDavies(about)(talk) edited at 07:56, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
This complete focus on cancer is one of the techniques mr. Wolfie uses to kill off effective discussion. Above he is again hammering on the fact that I added a text about cancer. In fact, I just reverted a removal, but mr. Wolfie chooses to ignore that. Earlier in the discussion I removed a piece of POV, that mr. Wolfie immediately reverted. The case was that the IOFGA (organic certification organization) encourages "effective homeopathy". This can be looked up in their organic standards. But instead of accepting WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV, he repeatedly added that homeopathy does work. Most likely that is true, but adding this in this article is out of place and totally POV. That case was solved by somebody else, who just removed the whole section. I agreed with that, because better no section than a POV one. But this attitude of mr. Wolfie makes working and discussing organic food very difficult. People are free to have their own opinions about organic food, but the article must be neutral at all times. The sourcing disagreement is one of the factors preventing the creation of a balanced, neutral article. The Banner 86.40.144.154 (talk) 14:34, 11 December 2012 (UTC) at public computer
Here is the text which banner added: "The Soil Association's organic standards encourage the use of effective homeopathy and prevention on livestock, using veterinary medicines only in emergencies." (Highlight is my addition) [3]. Clearly it indicates that some homeopathy is effective, a MEDRS claim. IRWolfie- (talk) 17:00, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
It is a statement of the Soil Association. It is found in their Organic Standards, to be precise: page 138, section 10.10.21. So, this is a fact. However, you added the POV addition that it was not effective ([4]). True or not, in this article it is out of place, POV and, in my opinion, no health claim. Just an advice to use a certain method. The Bannertalk22:35, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Statements from other organizations have quotations, you said it in the wikipedia tone. That homeopathy is not effective isn't POV, it's an accurate summary of the secondary sources. IRWolfie- (talk) 22:44, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Another third party editor here. I think that Zad68's proposal of judging the sources on a case by case basis is promising. Perhaps the parties should list all of the contested sources? Then we'll discuss each source individually.--xanchester(t)13:46, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
I agree with IRWolfie and Xanchester that we may, and probably will, ultimately have to look at individual assertions and sources, but we have to establish the ground rules first.
Owain.davies comments, just above, perhaps puts the question into the best focus. My feeling about that is this: MEDRS says that it applies to health-related material. If the material that is under discussion is health-related, then MEDRS applies. Owain says that this inserts a systemic bias which "runs against the principles and objectives which underly the WP sourcing policies". I think that he's dead right, but is dead wrong about it being opposed to policy because the bias was clearly and intentionally considered and adopted by the community when MEDRS was adopted. The second paragraph of the lede of MEDRS says that pretty explicitly:
"Wikipedia's articles, while not intended to provide medical advice, are nonetheless an important and widely used source of health information. Therefore, it is vital that the biomedical information in all types of articles be based on reliable, third-party, published sources and accurately reflect current medical knowledge."
This is an intentional and community-agreed-upon bias against health-related information not supported by MEDRS-quality sourcing due to the importance of the type of material involved. The existence of that bias is not, therefore, a legitimate objection to the application of MEDRS. That being the case, then if material is health-related, then MEDRS must apply. Is it possible that there are health-related areas which should be an exception to MEDRS? Certainly it is possible, but there are only two proper ways to deal with them: First, to seek to have MEDRS modified to allow those exceptions. Second, to create an IAR local exception to MEDRS in a particular article. Taking these one at a time, an exception to MEDRS must be discussed and created at the MEDRS talk page so that the entire community can have notice of it and take part, following the procedures outlined in the Policy policy (not a typo). This discussion is, therefore, inappropriate for that purpose. The second possibility, an IAR local exception, can and should occur at an article talk page, but must be adopted by a clear consensus since MEDRS is, per the Consensus policy the "established consensus" of the community. I've not counted heads or, per IRWolfie and Xanchester, evaluated arguments, but on first blush there certainly does not appear to be a consensus to create an exception to MEDRS. Thus, in my opinion, unless MEDRS is amended to provide for an exception for health-related material involving organic food, then MEDRS must be applied to all health-related material involving organic food unless an IAR local exception is created by consensus, which does not appear to have happened here.
What, then, does health-related mean? In this case, it most obviously means any assertion that relates to the questions of whether organic food can either improve one's health over non-organic food or that organic food can prevent harm to one's health arising from non-organic food. There are issues relating to organic food which are not health-related, for example, that it is more appealing to the senses or that there are consumer issues regarding what should and should not be regarded as or labeled or regulated at organic food simply as a truth-in-advertising matter. But even those issues can become health-related (for example, an assertion that because organic food is more appealing to the senses that children are more likely to be willing to eat organic fruits and vegetables which, entirely apart from any claims that organic food is more healthy than non-organic food, will improve their health because children need more fruits and vegetables than they are ordinarily willing to eat or an assertion that the decision about which foods should be permitted to be labeled as being organic should turn on whether or not those foods are more health than non-organic foods) and when they do, then MEDRS must apply unless one of the exception-making procedures described above is adopted.
Agricultural assertions: It depends, if they're health-related then they must be MEDRS-sourced; if they're not, then no.
Non-MEDRS sources when discussing claims made for the benefit of organic foods: For example, and this is entirely made up for the purpose of this example, "Organizations X, Y, and Z claim that the consumption of organic citrus fruit reduces the risk of the common cold 25% more than non-organic citrus fruits." Those claims have been questioned and a controversy (outside of Wikipedia) has arisen. Can non-MEDRS sources be used to talk about that controversy? No, the controversy is over a health-related matter and only MEDRS sources can be used to discuss it. Does that mean that some claims and controversies, perhaps huge ones, cannot be reported in this article because there have been no MEDRS-quality evaluations of them. It means just that. Does it mean that only the MEDRS-biased evaluations get to appear in the article if there have been evaluations. It means that too, because the community has decided that's the way that it's going to be in adopting MEDRS.
"Does WP:MEDRS apply to sourcing for every biomedical claim in the article?" Yes, for the reasons stated above. The Wikipedia community has decided that where health-related matters are concerned, only MEDRS-sourced material will be reported.
"Can the article have biomedical claims not sourced to WP:MEDRS-compliant sources alongside quite possibly contradictory claims supported by WP:MEDRS-compliant sourcing?" Yes, but only to the extent that those contradictory claims have been evaluated and reported on in MEDRS sources.
"Are certain claims that the article makes or might make truly "biomedical" claims that require WP:MEDRS-compliant sourcing? Such claims are things like: Whether consumers express a difference in the taste or perceived quality of organic vs. non-organic food, or whether there are nutritional content or food safety differences (levels of amino acids, vitamins, pesticides) between the two types of foods." Answered above at more length, but: Taste is not alone a health-related claim but a health-related claim could be attached to it. Nutritional content may not be, if discussed in the absolute abstract, a health-related claim, but will be a health-related claim if it is claimed or implied that organic foods will improve your health in ways that consumption of non-organic foods will not. That's nearly always going to be the case, so claims about nutritional information are probably almost always going to require MEDRS sources and that's particularly likely if there is any controversy or dispute over the nutritional content.
100% endorse TransporterMan's evaluation of what the dispute is and analysis of how Wikipedia policy and guideline should be applied. Zad6816:38, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Here is an example identified above as a primary example of the dispute:
However, a 1989 peer-reviewed study sponsored by the Natural Resources Defense Council identified an association between consumption of pesticide residues from conventionally grown food and cancer risk.[1] A 2012 risk assessment estimated that cancer benchmark levels in preschool children were exceeded for several toxic substances and recommended consumption of organic foods as one strategy for reducing risk. [2] Proponents of organic food express concern that children are being exposed to hazardous levels of pesticides in fruits and vegetables. In 1989, NRDC estimated that 5,500 to 6,200 of the current population of American preschoolers may eventually get cancer "solely as a result of their exposure before six years of age to eight pesticides or metabolites commonly found in fruits and vegetables." This estimate was based on conservative risk assessment procedures, which indicate that greater than 50% of an individual's lifetime risk of cancer from exposure to carcinogenic pesticides used on fruit takes place during the first six years of life.[1] In a study conducted on children and adults in California, consumption of conventionally grown foods was associated with excessive cancer benchmark levels for all children for DDE, which was primarily sourced from dairy, potatoes, meat, freshwater fish, and pizza.[2]
Reference #1 Intolerable Risk, was written by Bradford H. Sewell and Robin M. Whyatt, M.P.H. It was published by Natural Resources Defense Council. It contains a list of about a dozen peer reviewers, including Henry Falk, MD, Joan Gussow, EdD, Steven Markowitz, MD, Jack Mayer MD, etc. --Noleander (talk) 16:18, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Questions: Isn't the NRDC a lobbying group? This was published 23 years ago; what do our science guidelines say about sources this old? Have the conclusions of this publication been reaffirmed by other, independent organizations in subsequent years? Zad6816:22, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Note the first word, "However", so it's being used to rebut the previous paragraph (i.e it's a SYNTH). The first reference is a piece by an advocacy group; it's not peer reviewed, and it's old. "Cancer and non-cancer health effects from food contaminant exposures for children and adults in California: a risk assessment." is uncited and is published in an open access journal you pay 1125 pounds to publish in. Where as the current source journal, Annals of internal medicine is listed at MEDRS and [5] as one of the core medical journals, and another piece which has 133 citations (on google scholar). IRWolfie- (talk) 17:25, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
The problem IS generalities; the article itself cannot get down to specifics until the general principles are clarified; if MEDRS applies to the whole article or to ANY discussion of a health issue, then it will do no good to cite to peer-reviewed agricultural journals, or to respected sources in the mainstream press per WP:RS. Otherwise, we'll just be off to the races with another round of edit warring. Personally, I share Owain's views. As I was not involved in this article until recently, when help was requested at WikiProject agriculture, I merely reviewed the existing sources and reinserted them as seemed appropriate. Undoubtably there are more and better ones out there, but we must first clarify the principles we are using. Here WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV is also applicable; I specifically added the language noting who did which study and so on. While a "medical" claim certainly needs MEDRS compliant sources, they are not exclusive, the opposition view, as is noted here, may not have the time, money or resources to have reams of peer-reviewed literature, hence the need to say "organization X says this" -- which is EXACTLY what I did on that paragraph. I also think it is important to avoid POV adjectives, and I removed some of them, as the diffs show. I also removed some dead links that no one had fixed. I also think it relevant that some of the peer reviewed studies, particularly the one done by Stanford University, were conducted with considerable funding from major pesticide manufacturers, which introduces a source of bias that also is appropriately addressed in an article that requires POV balance. This truly is akin to climate change or cigarettes and cancer; early hints of trouble were dismissed by the status quo, but time showed that these problems were documentable. Here, we are in the preliminary stages, and items that are newsworthy and part of the "gospel" of the organic food movement must, somehow, be included, lest this article suffer from a severe POV bias against organic food. Montanabw(talk)17:42, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Note: As you see from the reply immediately above this, we have a lot of problems with tendentiousness. There is probably no possible consensus here between the combatants, I tried at talk, only to have my motives questioned and sources I use to explain matters mocked (as above) and dismissed. There will probably need to be a decision reached by people outside the fray. None of the people arguing for inclusion oppose the use of MEDRS sources, we simply are trying to say that they should not be the EXCLUSIVE sources, and the MEDRS policy itself clearly explains and allows for this. Montanabw(talk)17:42, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
MEDRS is clear in what is and what isn't appropriate for medical claims. I should note that the above editors point, namely that "part of the "gospel" of the organic food movement must, somehow, be included, lest this article suffer from a severe POV bias against organic food" is precisely the problem in this dispute. We are not here to spread the "gospel", promote the WP:TRUTH, right great wrongs, or any of that. We are here to summarize the reliable sources on the matter, no matter what the final outcome is. Yobol (talk) 18:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
I concur that WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV is critical here. Statements about health benefits in the encyclopedia's voice must certainly be supported by scientific sources; but statements about the history of the debate of purported benefits of organic foods need not be. For instance "In 1989 the NRDC published a study claiming that consumers of organic food experienced lower cancer rates" need not be supported by scientific sources if it is part of a larger paragraph which discusses the various opinions about whether or not organic foods are healthier. Such a paragraph can conclude (if the scientific sources so say) that "Mainstream scientific research has not demonstrated any improved health benefits", but that scientific fact should not preclude discussion of significant historical claims of proponents and opponents of organic foods. --Noleander (talk) 18:04, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
As a side note, a careful examination of the NRDC source would note that organic food/farming is mentioned exactly twice in the entire report, and almost as an afterthought. It certainly was not a direct comparison between organic and conventionally grown foods, which is the type of source we should use in this article to make such a health claim. In principle, I have no problem with prominent historical opinions, correctly attributed and documented in appropriate secondary sources from being included, as long as it is clear that they are not to be used as sources for current validity. Yobol (talk) 18:10, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Okay, that is a good step forward: perhaps we have consensus to create a paragraph in the article on "prominent historical opinions, correctly attributed and documented in appropriate secondary sources". Maybe it could be a subsection within the "Health and Safety" section? --Noleander (talk) 18:18, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Agree with 'historical opinions' section with clear attributions, making sure it's clear that historical views about the health and safety aren't necessarily the current findings about those subjects. I think such a paragraph would be essential to the article in its coverage of the development of the popularity of organic food over the years. Zad6818:24, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
(e/c) A paragraph on the historical context would be appropriate, if appropriate sources are found. The NRDC source, however, is probably not a great source because, as I stated, it only mentions organic food/farming twice and largely in passing (though it would be a better source as a historical source in another article, like Health effects of pesticides, since the NRDC report is about pesticides, not primarily about organic foods). I am still greatly concerned by the statements that we need to push the "gospel" of organic foods in our article. Yobol (talk) 18:26, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Yes, to be clear, my 'Agree' is not an agreement that we should be using non-WP:MEDRS sources to state historic opinion as current findings, or even alongside current findings in violation of WP:GEVAL. If the NRDC document was used widely by the organic food movement in the 1990s to promote organic food, then it should indeed be featured--of course we need a reliable secondary source that discusses the rise of the organic food movement in the 1990s and the use of the NRDC document for this, otherwise it's an inappropriate use of a WP:PRIMARY source. Zad6818:33, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Okay, it sounds like there may be consensus to create a subsection on historical opinions about purported health benefits. I guess the next step would be to identify specific sources and discuss them here. Publications by proponents/opponents should - ideally - be supported by WP:Secondary sources that discuss/analyze those publications. However, secondary sources are not needed to support publications by major proponents/opponents when the publication is cited merely to demonstrate the existence of the publication (contrasted with material which interprets the publication's contents, which would require 2ndary sources ). --Noleander (talk) 19:48, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
I am cautious about this proposal. It will be very difficult to create something balanced. Before I say yes or no, I would like to see a draft, preferrably written by one of the outsiders active here. And what is historical? The Bannertalk02:05, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
edit conflict:
As an uninvolved editor in looking at both this discussion and the article a few issues come to mind. "Heath related" is a general term that does not necessarily include medicine. For example, aspects of fitness are considered health related but not pertaining to medicine. MEDRS (medicine) specifically relates to medicine and as such health related in this specific context is a subset of medicine and does not refer to the more general use of the words. In this article while food is health related it may not be health related(medicne) and so would not require sources that are MEDRS compliant. I realize that what is required is to delineate health related from health related medical which brings us back to discussion. Still I'd suggest that the content requiring sources that are MEDRS complaint is narrower than some are advocating in this discussion.
Maybe the most obvious issue is that the second sentence of the Organic Food article lead talks about research and speaks in a definitive way (Wikipedia's voice) about the research. This prominent placement and definitive language carries a lot of weight, and serves to negate the topic before the article has even progressed very far. This violates undue weight and NPOV, and in no way does this summarize the two sided issues surrounding the topic. On a personal note, I was amazed to see that in this day and age with what we know about pesticides and herbicides that the second sentence can stand implying a definitive view. Sure the article should show all sides of the issues on organic food, but no one view should be pushing for the reader's attention as is happening now. (olive (talk) 20:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC))
I disagree that there is a clear distinction between what you call "health" and some sort of medicine related health. One of the claims is that regular food causes cancer (i.e the text under discussion at the top of this paragraph); that is a medical claim, and I think it's clear that this requires MEDRS. It seems to me that you are challenging the lead based on what you believe to be true (i.e your statement about "what we know about pesticides and herbicides") rather than any evaluation of the sources. What are the "sides of the issues"? If the most reliable sources are all definitive, do you propose that we include less reliable sources that say the opposite in the name of "balance"? Wikipedia doesn't aim for balance, but for neutrality by WP:WEIGHT. What Montana is explicitly proposing is that the fringe claims he wants included aren't published in the peer reviewed literature, so he wants to include them in the name of "balance". Montana accepts that they need MEDRS: "While a "medical" claim certainly needs MEDRS compliant sources, they are not exclusive, the opposition view, as is noted here, may not have the time, money or resources to have reams of peer-reviewed literature, hence the need to say "organization X says this" -- which is EXACTLY what I did on that paragraph." Montana wishes to give weight to views that haven't got into journals (apparently because publishing in journals, which is free unless you go through open access, is too arduous). If the opposition isn't publishing in reliable medical journal they don't belong in any health section because they have no weight. Now, if some of the MEDRS sources address the fringe groups, then we can discuss that in context with the results, and showing the mainstream view with respect to this position. IRWolfie- (talk) 22:08, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
I also disagree, and find the attempted distinction between "health related" and "health related(medicine)" to be bizarre and not particularly helpful; MEDRS makes no such distinction, and attempts to create a false distinction where none exists smacks of wikilawyering. If it is making health claims, it falls under MEDRS. I also would like to caution against trying to give equal validity to "both sides of an issue"; WP:NPOV says we give WP:WEIGHT based on reliable sourcing, not individual editor preferences. We don't "give both sides" of the issue on whether HIV causes AIDS or the earth is round. If reliable sources say organic food is not more safe or nutritious, that's what we say. Yobol (talk) 22:12, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Perhaps you would like to address the attempt at compromise above, rather than grossly mischaracterizing my position, yet again. Yobol (talk) 22:25, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
Your replies are basically an attack on MEDRS guidelines in any form. They exist, they apply to health claims; get over it. Empty responses where you don't address anything are not even wrong. IRWolfie- (talk) 22:35, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
No, Wolfie, it is not a plain attack on WP:MEDRS. That you see it that way, is your problem, not mine. Medical research should definately be backed up by MEDRS-approved sources. But I think you see "health claims" far wider then is healthy for the encyclopedia. Research about what substances are found in products are not necessarely health claims. When you say that scientific research has proven that tomato juice contains tomatoes, it is certainly not a health claim. When you say that scientific research has proven that organic tomato juice contains tomatoes, it is certainly not a health claim. When you say that scientific research has proven that tomato juice contains substances that are scientificly proven to support the natural resistance against diseases, it is certainly not a health claim.(WP:SCIRS is enough) When you say that scientific research has proven that tomato juice can cause allergic reactions, it is certainly a health claim conform MEDRS. The Bannertalk01:44, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
The neutral folks see the problem here. I think it is accurate to say that the above two editors will not budge from their positions much and have an unfortunate tendency to misstate others (No, Banner and I are NOT claiming that "regular food causes cancer" - the issue is far more nuanced than that). What I understand to be Noleander's compromise is to create a "historic" section. I don't quite agree, as I believe that additional research since that time can be added, the concerns about pesticide residues in conventionally-raised foods is still out there. I think a better structure is along the lines of "prominent historical opinions, correctly attributed and documented in appropriate secondary sources". (1989 "historic"? LOL! Excuse me, I remember 1989 like it was yesterday! Now, 1959 MIGHT be "historic"...). Thus, one section can review the "peer-reviewed literature funded by Monsanto" (grin) section, and another section can be the "muckraking studies by poor, underfunded but noble advocacy organizations" section. (Trying to make a joke there, but you get my drift...) But I would argue that MEDRS AND SCIRS both work -- a peer-reviewed ag journal would have better info on the trace amounts of pesticide residue on a harvested crop than would a medical journal. Is this a useful angle to look at?Montanabw(talk)00:03, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
You need to show that the 1989 report has attracted academic interest, otherwise it is just one of thousands of reports of no notability. It could be that their research was flawed or it could be based on agricultural practices that have been abandoned. TFD (talk) 00:28, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
There is no requirement that a source must be "notable" or must have "attracted academic interest". Notability applies to articles, not sources. If the 1989 report was a major policy statement by a major proponent of organic food (and I don't know if it was or not), then by all means it can be included in the article for the limited purpose of showing how organic food proponents were making their arguments. However, the report probably cannot be used to assert the report's contents in the encyclopedia's voice ("organic food improves health") because it apparently has been superseded by more recent scientific studies. --Noleander (talk) 02:20, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
See Due and undue weight: "Neutrality requires that each article or other page in the mainspace fairly represents all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in the published, reliable sources." Anyone can search through the millions of articles written about various topics and find an unnoticed article from longago that supports whatever one happens to believe. If no one has commented on it then it has no significance. Sorry for saying "no notabity" instead. TFD (talk) 03:09, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
I agree. It's a typical POV pushing tactic to cherry pick the minority of sources that agree with the POV you want (hence the arbitrary rejection of medical sources in this particular case). You can cherry pick sources to say just about anything. If you work from the prominent works then this issue is ameliorated. IRWolfie- (talk) 11:28, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
In the strict sense, you are right. But for dispute resolution it is essential to have some level of AGF and trust. You are making that increasingly difficult. The Bannertalk11:57, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
More sources needed
At the top of the prior section are two sources (NRDC report and "Cancer and non-cancer health effects") that are proposed for inclusion in the article - either in a "Historical Opinions" section; or a "Various opinions" section. It would be really helpful if those editors that want to include those sources could supply additional sources here, including: (a) sources that discuss/analyze/use those two sources; and (b) other sources that suggest that O.F. improves health. Go ahead and provide sources of all kinds: scientists, farmers, advocates, dietitians, etc. Speaking as an uninvolved editor, it is hard to form an opinion based on just two sources, so seeing 10 or 20 sources that buttress each other will help uninvolved editors form an opinion. --Noleander (talk) 02:08, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
For the uninvolved editors, here is what is currently cited in our organic food article, all of which meet WP:MEDRS, and all of which have noted that the nutritional or safety differences between conventional foods and organic foods are minimal, nonexistent, or unknown:
Journal articles: secondary review articles published in medical journals:
Magkos F, Arvaniti F, Zampelas A (2006). "Organic food: buying more safety or just peace of mind? A critical review of the literature". Crit Rev Food Sci Nutr 46 (1): 23–56. doi:10.1080/10408690490911846. PMID16403682
Bourn D, Prescott J (January 2002). "A comparison of the nutritional value, sensory qualities, and food safety of organically and conventionally produced foods". Crit Rev Food Sci Nutr 42 (1): 1–34. doi:10.1080/10408690290825439. PMID11833635.
Smith-Spangler, C; Brandeau, ML; Hunter, GE; Bavinger, JC; Pearson, M; Eschbach, PJ; Sundaram, V; Liu, H; Schirmer, P; Stave, C; Olkin, I; Bravata, DM (September 4, 2012). "Are organic foods safer or healthier than conventional alternatives?: a systematic review.". Annals of Internal Medicine 157 (5): 348-366. PMID22944875.
Williams, Christine M. (February 2002). "Nutritional quality of organic food: shades of grey or shades of green?" . Proceedings of the Nutrition Society 61 (1): 19–24. doi:10.1079/PNS2001126
Magkos, F.; Arvaniti, F.; Zampelas, A. (2003). "Organic food: Nutritious food or food for thought? A review of the evidence". International Journal of Food Sciences and Nutrition 54 (5): 357–371. doi:10.108
Journal articles I found that will be added when protection expires:
Dangour AD, Lock K, Hayter A, Aikenhead A, Allen E, Uauy R (July 2010). "Nutrition-related health effects of organic foods: a systematic review". Am. J. Clin. Nutr. 92 (1): 203–10. doi:10.3945/ajcn.2010.29269. PMID20463045.
Dangour AD, Dodhia SK, Hayter A, Allen E, Lock K, Uauy R (September 2009). "Nutritional quality of organic foods: a systematic review". Am. J. Clin. Nutr. 90 (3): 680–5. doi:10.3945/ajcn.2009.28041. PMID19640946.
Summary statements by scientific/medical bodies
Canavari, M., Asioli, D., Bendini, A., Cantore, N., Gallina Toschi, T., Spiller, A., Obermowe, T., Buchecker, K. and Lohmann, M. (2009). Summary report on sensory-related socio-economic and sensory science literature about organic food products (2009). [6]
Blair, Robert. (2012). Organic Production and Food Quality: A Down to Earth Analysis. Wiley-Blackwell, Oxford, UK. ISBN978-0-8138-1217-5
To my knowledge, there has not been any MEDRS compliant sources presented that have found large, consistent differences between organic and conventional foods (most found no differences; the few differences found are either inconsistent or unlikely to have a meaningful health effect). Yobol (talk) 03:13, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Your view that they don't publish about health issues in relation to food is self-evidently incorrect since Yobol has just shown multiple sources. IRWolfie- (talk) 11:24, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Have you found any sources that comply with WP:WEIGHT but fail MEDRS? If not, why are we discussing MEDRS? In other words, is there anything that should be in this article were it not to come under MEDRS? TFD (talk) 07:14, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Here's what I have:
Cancer and non-cancer health effects from food contaminant exposures for children and adults in California: a risk assessment
This was included in the original contentious paragraph, and indicated that typical conventional food consumption was associated with exposures to some pesticides (and other toxins) far above the federal limits.
Intolerable Risk: Pesticides in our Children's Food
"The model estimates that for the identified items, 120 439 kg of pesticides in excess of U.S. tolerances could potentially be imported to the U.S...Pesticides in this review are associated with health effects on 13 body systems, and some are associated with carcinogenic effects."
"Pesticides may also cause harm...depending on dose, some pesticides can cause a range of adverse effects on human health, including cancer, acute and chronic injury to the nervous system, lung damage, reproductive dysfunction, and possibly dysfunction of the endocrine and immune systems...Diet is an important source of exposure to pesticides."
Just a report, "A recent report from Consumer Reports reveals unsafe levels of pesticide residues on certain fresh fruits and vegetables, including many that are grown in the United States." There's many more similar reports, probably studies also documenting that many foods sold in the US have illegal pesticide residues or pesticide residues above federal limits.
Illegal Pesticides in the U.S. Food Supply
http://www.ewg.org/reports/fruit
Similar to the above
Someone with more time than me and/or an expert in the subject could probably find many more studies and possibly more secondary research studies. Krem1234 (talk) 09:31, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
As already mentioned, the first is uncited and in a non-prominent open access journal. NRDC isn't a reliable source. The third is a primary source, doesn't mention organic food, so is being coat racked in. The fourth, fifth and sixth are quite old, don't mention organic food and are about the banned DDT/DDE. IRWolfie- (talk) 11:16, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
@TFD: I'm not sure what question you are asking. I presented this list to illustrate to uninvolved editors that there are MEDRS that discuss the question at hand, and that they all present similar findings (organic foods are generally not significantly different from conventional foods in terms of nutrition and safety). Yobol (talk) 14:22, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
User Krem1234 has supplied a few sources above that are more recent and perhaps more scientific than the NRDC report; for instance "Attention-Deficit/Hyperactivity Disorder and Urinary Metabolites of Organophosphate Pesticides" and "Blood Levels of Organochlorine Residues and Risk of Breast Cancer". user IRWolfie objects to some of those sources. Specifically, to 3 of them because they apply to a banned chemical and don't mention organic food. Those are sensible objections. Do any other parties have thoughts on those sources? --Noleander (talk) 16:24, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
My main objection to these studies is that we should be using secondary sources such as review articles, not primary research studies, per WP:MEDRS. MEDRS specifically cautions us not to use primary sources to debunk or contrast against reviews. I also note that this is not the Health effects of pesticides page we are discussing, but the Organic food page. The sources I note above specifically compare organic food to conventional food, and I suspect we need that type of sourcing here, not just sources that says pesticides can be harmful (which no one seriously disputes). Yobol (talk) 16:44, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Criticisms could easily be made Re: the five main sources used to support the entire current Consumer Safety section:
Organic food: buying more safety or just peace of mind? A critical review of the literature
States that "With respect to other food hazards, such as endogenous plant toxins, biological pesticides and pathogenic microorganisms, available evidence is extremely limited preventing generalized statements."
A comparison of the nutritional value, sensory qualities, and food safety of organically and conventionally produced foods.
Focuses on nutritional differences: "It is evident from this assessment that there are few well-controlled studies that are capable of making a valid comparison", then regarding pesticides: "While it is likely that organically grown foods are lower in pesticide residues, there has been very little documentation of residue levels."
Citation #4 is a book, citation #44 appears to be non-WP:MEDRS?:
Are Organic Foods Safer or Healthier Than Conventional Alternatives?: A Systematic Review
This final citation states "All estimates of differences in nutrient and contaminant levels in foods were highly heterogeneous except for the estimate for phosphorus"..."The risk for contamination with detectable pesticide residues was lower among organic than conventional produce". Based on the abstract it doesn't appear to actually discuss health risks
Very underwhelming, these studies mostly seem to suggest "well, we don't know yet" then to actually say anything definitive Re: health risks of consuming pesticide residues, or with regard to health benefits, if any, or organic foods. Krem1234 (talk) 20:39, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
"We don't know" is a perfectly acceptable answer, which is why our article states that the weight of available evidence doesn't support organic or conventional as being healthier or safer than the other. Books are clearly WP:MEDRS applicable (as you should know if you have read MEDRS), and one should always read the article, and not just the abstract. I don't mind adding a sentence to the lead noting the paucity of good data/studies in the area. This, of course, does not in any way support those who have been pushing the POV that organic foods are safer or more nutritious. The high quality sources simply do not back that position up. Yobol (talk) 21:06, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
I don't disagree (my point with the book was that I can't comment as I don't have a copy, and I don't have full access to most studies). My main point is that requiring only reviews here produces an un-balanced article. Krem1234 (talk) 21:13, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Also, to me, the first paragraph of that section reads like it's been established in the literature that organic foods are not healthier, safer, etc. From reviewing the cited studies, this doesn't appear to be the case. Krem1234 (talk) 21:22, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
What is established is that there is no significant evidence to support that either is healthier or safer (this is true, and is what our article says). Like I said, we can add a comment about the overall lack of studies in the area. As has been noted above, limiting this to reviews has the actual benefit of establishing a neutral point of view, rather than us citing thousands of primary articles and weighing them ourselves, we use secondary reviews to weigh the evidence for us. This is how Wikipedia works (see WP:PSTS, WP:WEIGHT, WP:MEDRS). If the consensus of secondary sources it that there is no evidence of a difference, this is what we should be writing. We don't take it upon ourselves to use inferior sources to make it sound like what we wish it would say. Yobol (talk) 21:27, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
If the consensus is only secondary studies (like most of the current references), the overall point of the section should be "not enough research has been conducted" - which is the actual conclusions of those studies cited. "Reviews of the available body of scientific literature have not found that organic food is any safer or healthier than conventional foods" implies that conventional and organic foods have been compared and definitively found to be more or less equal with respect to safety and health. If those studies conclude that "we don't know yet"/more research is needed, that's what should be written. Krem1234 (talk) 23:48, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
There would be no implication if, as I suggested, we add that relatively few studies have been done and more are needed. They don't just say more research is needed, they clearly also say the evidence available does not support conclusions about one being better than the other. You can't just pick and choose conclusions here to try to slant the POV. Yobol (talk) 12:44, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
Seems clear from the abstracts that those reviews don't show anything definitive, which should be reflected in the Consumer Safety section. I don't think I'm "picking and choosing" anything here. Krem1234 (talk) 22:15, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
And if there isn't anything definitive, clearly there isn't enough evidence to declare one better than the other (which is what our article says). Yobol (talk) 22:56, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
I agree 100%, and I don't think anyone is suggesting that claim be made. I still think there are sections of the article that should be reworded to make what you said clear - that "there isn't enough evidence to declare one better than the other". Krem1234 (talk) 23:08, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
The obvious issue is that it they didn't look at organic food vs regular food, or anything like that. They looked at "urinary dialkyl phosphate concentrations" and saw it correlated with ADHD in their study. Now, the leap you need to make is that correlation shows causation and that they took care of all confounding variables, that exposure to organophosphates has a significant impact on phosphate concentrations, that organophosphate pesticides are primarily used by regular foods, and that phosphate concentrations are significantly greater in regular foods than organic foods (which also uses fertilizers, just naturally occurring ones). I don't think this is clear from the source which doesn't mention organic food or discuss it from what I can see. For food factors the report cites "Children's exposure assessment: a review of factors influencing Children's exposure, and the data available to characterize and assess that exposure" from 2000, which says "Such a limited diet may potentially increase the dietary exposure of young children to environmental contaminants such as pesticide residues in fruit " (highlight mine). Highly speculative, but again it does not discuss organic food food. In summary; Primary study, doesn't mention organic food. IRWolfie- (talk) 16:55, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
I don't have enough time to respond appropriately to the above (or most of the other comments here), though this study's conclusion might be of interest: "The present study adds to the accumulating evidence linking higher levels of pesticide exposure to adverse developmental outcomes. Our findings support the hypothesis that current levels of organophosphate pesticide exposure might contribute to the childhood burden of ADHD. Future studies should use a prospective design, with multiple urine samples collected over time for better assessment of chronic exposure and critical windows of exposure, and should establish appropriate temporality." If this article was cited somewhere, it could simply be summarized, no one's saying it should be presented as "X causes Y" or anything over-reaching. Krem1234 (talk) 20:47, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Note I generally share Yobol's views here. The fact that there are indeed WP:MEDRS-compliant sources that address the specific biomedical claims being considered by the article should really put an end to the question of whether we need to use more relaxed sourcing guidelines, which can only lead to the article having statements supported by lower-quality sources possibly alongside better-sourced statements, and this is a clear problem with the WP:MEDRS guideline and WP:GEVAL policy. Zad6816:50, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Yep, it seems like people are going to try and throw enough cherry picked (I can't imagine someone googling and not coming across all the MEDRS sources, they must be ignoring these other sources) sources at the problem and hope some of them stick. IRWolfie- (talk) 16:57, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Speaking for myself, I'm not cherry-picking (I can search and find your sources, you can search and fine mine). I have a collection of around a dozen studies suggesting that pesticide residues are safe, and around the same number suggesting they're an important health risk. The point of the original revision was try to produce a more balanced article. Krem1234 (talk) 21:08, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
There is a place for reasons why people want to eat organic food. This is one of the big ones. Would be ridiculous to not even mention it. Montanabw(talk)00:41, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
Yes, absolutely, the article should cover reasons given for why people eat organic food, and perceived health and food safety benefits I am sure are among them. They should be in the article, well-sourced to reliable secondary sources. However, we should be clear in the article that perceived health and safety benefits are one thing, and what the best biomedical evidence says is another thing. Zad6815:19, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
@Montanabw: I should note at this time that our article already discusses perceived safety benefits from reduced pesticide residue is a major reason why organic food is bought, and we spend a whole paragraph discussing the perceived benefit in addition to the (lack of) evidence supporting that position. Suggestions that we include something that is already included is probably why we are getting nowhere with this discussion. Yobol (talk) 15:46, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
Actually, no, it is mentioned, but pretty much dismissed without allowing for any supporting evidence; support was what was deleted and locked out (it's always a WP:WRONGVERSION protected! LOL) and the supporting evidence is what we are discussing here. Montanabw(talk)21:32, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
It is mentioned, and the material you wanted included is sourced to non MEDRS and was undue weight. That we mention it does not mean we have to give it validity. That is for secondary sources to determine, not you or I. Yobol (talk) 02:11, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
Making accusations that two other editors are consciously furthering POV problems fails to adhere to WP:AGF in a very disappointing way. Yours is a loaded question that does not deserve a response and is counterproductive. However, I agree that we do appear to be at a deadlock. I observe that at this time, there is no consensus to make the changes to the article you have been proposing. Maybe this DRN case will end with this result. Zad6803:15, 16 December 2012 (UTC)
The problem is that I do not see a real effort to break the deadlock by Wolfie. Yobol gave a little glimmer of hope with is remark about "taste", but Wolfie immediately slammed that door again creatin more fuss and blur. I would be very nice when the volunteers could summerise the whole discussion, because we are flying everywhere and it becomes increasingly unclear what is happening where. The Bannertalk00:10, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
Organic foods movement material?
Let's say, for the sake of argument, that all modern scientific secondary sources have determined that there is no concrete health benefits derived from organic foods (I'm not saying that is so, this is just a hypothetical). I'd like to then return to the proposal made above: Should the article contain historical information about the proponents of organic food? Something like:
The organic food movement consists of individuals and organizations such as blah, blah, blah. They promote organic food for a variety of reasons, including X, Y, and health benefits. Their claims for health benefits are based on concerns that pesticides and fertilizers cause health problems. For example, DDT, blah blah, .... However, mainstream scientific research has not found a correlation between eating organic food and improved health.
The question is: would such information about the arguments of proponents of organic food (presuming sources exists to support the above text) be relevant to the organic food article? (It is noteworthy that WP does not yet have an article on Organic food movement). --Noleander (talk) 18:22, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Agree as I did above, although we need reliable secondary sourcing that describes the history of the movement and the studies used by the movement's proponents. We should not at all be using these historical sources directly in the article, except maybe possibly very carefully per WP:PRIMARY for a selected quote or something like that. However, based on the previous discussion, I'm betting this won't be acceptable to everyone as a proposed resolution to this. Specifically, even though there might be agreement to discuss the historic use of dated studies or primary research, I'm betting there will still be some insistence on using them directly to support biomedical claims in the article. I may be wrong but we need to hear from those who have been discussing the use of these older sources. Zad6819:03, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
...meaning, although I think the article should carry this sort of history content, it's actually largely off-topic from this DRN case as stated. Zad6819:05, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Yes, the historical/movement/motivation material is not directly related to the question of "is organic food scientifically proven to produce better health?" But the article is missing some critical information about the relationship of organic foods to health:
Do some people buy organic food because they think it will make them healthier?
How many?
Why do they believe that?
Which famous books/movies which promote that idea?
Which pesticide/fertilizer health issues have been raised in the past that support such beliefs?
What organizations or individuals promote(d) organic food as healthier?
Do these proponents rely on scientific evidence for their assessments?
Are there flaws in the data they rely on?
Turning back to this DRN case: it may be that the "pro organic" editors will be amenable to a compromise whereby the article is enhanced to include history/motivation/movement information, and they "drop" the drive (forgive the colloquial wording) to state a conclusive causal relationship between organic food and improved health. --Noleander (talk) 20:57, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
comment If you are proposing to create a synthesis of the DDT material and other primary sourced material, then no (I've not seen any source that even links DDT to the organic issues at all). We need to start from concrete sources for history and then work from there. IRWolfie- (talk) 21:06, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
No, no ... I'm not proposing any violation of WP:SYNTH. I'm simply observing that the article is missing some critical information about the history & motivation of the organic foods movement. I'm wondering out loud if this DRN case would be resolved if a new history/motivation/movement section were added to the article. Of course, all material must conform to all WP policies. DDT may or may not play a role in the movement's history & motivation ... I just threw that out to give a feel for what it might contain. --Noleander (talk) 21:11, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Agree in principle that such a section would be an important addition to the article (though I agree with IRWolfie-'s assessment that the new sources recently produced are not the type of sources to be used). I also agree with Zad68 that this suggestion really doesn't help solve the primary issue that brought this dispute here, namely how to properly reference and characterize the scientific knowledge in the area of safety and nutrition. Yobol (talk) 21:10, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
My current thinking is maybe we could suspend this DRN case, and have editors write a new history/motivation/movement section and see how it goes. With luck, it will cause the "scientific" dispute to go away. If it doesn't, we could always start another DRN case (or RfC) later if we have to. --Noleander (talk) 21:13, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Refuse (for the original suggestion of Noleander at the top of this section). In my opinion, this proposal is being biased, due to it being incomplete. Stumbling block is this: However, mainstream scientific research has not found a correlation between eating organic food and improved health. I am missing here a text about the (possible??) correlation between eating conventional grown food (= grown with the aid of among others artificial fertilisers, pesticides, herbicides, and fungicides) and health problems. Having no positive effects, is still beter them having negative effects, don't you think? The Bannertalk22:12, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Support move back to talk page: The lock expires in two days. We are getting nowhere here. (removed by volunteer), and frankly I have no interest in continuing this drama on multiple boards. Montanabw(talk)00:35, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
The lock, in my opinion, should not be lifted as the dispute is on-going. Yes, it may be on the talk page, but here is fine too. The difference with being here and a talk page is that one (here) has volunteers to get the discussion going (or trying too) while the talk page is for the parties (and WP:3O). Montanabw, the statement about IRWolfie is at the wrong place as it is about conduct, and your comment is a personal attack. I have removed it. ~~Ebe123~~ → report01:03, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
Support extension of full protection We're not seeing consensus either here or at the article Talk page, and there's the suggestion that article changes will be made anyway without consensus. The admin who full-protected was User:CambridgeBayWeather. Ebe, as you were uninvolved in the original dispute, maybe you could suggest the extension of the full-protection to that admin? Zad6803:25, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
I would disagree. I think we are seeing a consensus forming, helped by the suggestions of the volunteers. Consensus doesn't require unanimity. IRWolfie- (talk) 09:58, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
I agree with the extension. I do see some progress here, although it is slow. Lifting the protection is a guarantee for more editwars and far more drama. The Bannertalk12:04, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
OK If Banner is OK with extending protection, I am as well. I'm more dubious about actual progress being made amongst the primary folks involved, but the praise from all the others to the third parties for their work is praise I also share; you folks are trying to get us to a working solution. I would add that I am strongly in support of the material suggested by Krem1234, which is precisely the sort of material I have in mind. I am concerned that the two users taking the position opposite to that of myself and Banner seem to simply dismiss all others' suggestions for material; it will probably take a third party consensus to get us where we need to be. My own view is that we could restructure the section in question along the lines of this outline (this is a SUPER ROUGH outline, just to put out an idea for structure, you all can continue to spat about cites and actual content) Montanabw(talk)19:44, 13 December 2012 (UTC)):
1. Proponents of organic food state that the health benefits include (flavor, health, safety, no pesitcide residues, - all with appropriate cites).
2. As early as 1989, when NDRC conducted a peer-reviewed study (cite to study as proof that there was a study and its conclusions) concerns were raised about pesticide residues in conventionally-farmed foods, which has since been further supported by (stuff Krem1234 found, etc...)(Don't need MEDRS for evidence that there IS pesticide residue, as no health claims made - yet
3. Organic food proponents point to studies (find and cite, need to be MEDRS compliant studies) showing a possible link between pesticide exposure and health problems (cite assorted press releases and other appropriate WP:RS proof that proponents have made these claims)
4. However, peer-reviewed medical studies to date have been at best inconclusive, not showing a clear correlation between X and Y (citing various sources that we have noted above, ideally a few on both sides, noting weight of studies if not WP:SYNTH) and
4. a meta-analysis of existing studies suggests proponent's claims are primarily unsupportable by current peer-reviewed studies (as of date of meta-analysis) (all the stuff currently in the locked version of the article that IRWolfie and Yobol support, properly sourced)
5. Proponents, in turn, cite to systemic bias in mainstream studies (citing and sourcing the agrichemical industry funding of the studies)
Saying that I dismiss every proposal made is a bit short around the corner. I had (!) lost hope on any constructive move from Yobol and Wolfie, till Yobol's surprise move on the taste section. He agreed that this section does not require MEDRS but the RS is sufficient. That restored my hope on a solution through discussion and mediation.
But at the beginning I had already said that my time was severely limited because of real life commitments, with an exam due for coming Monday. I just don't have enough time to fully investigate and appriciate the efforts made by the volunteers. The Bannertalk18:38, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
Moving in the right direction like, maybe, 60% of the way there. :) The devil will be in the details, and we're going to have discussions about how to present this material, but it's pointing the right way. We definitely do need to have secondary sourcing mentioning, for example, the NDRC report and how it was used by the promoters of organic food, instead of us reading through the report ourselves and picking out what we think should have been used to promote it. But, getting there. Zad6820:09, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
I think Montanabw's outline is a great step forward. Regarding Zad68's comment about secondary sources: While the Wikipedia:No original research policy does encourage secondary sources above primary, the policy does not prohibit the use of primary sources. In fact, primary sources are frequently used in articles. What the policy says is that primary sources cannot be used as the basis for analytical or interpretive statements in the encyclopedia's voice. The policy provides: "A primary source may only be used on Wikipedia to make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts that can be verified by any educated person with access to the source but without further, specialized knowledge. For example, an article about a novel may cite passages to describe the plot, but any interpretation needs a secondary source." Applying that to the NDRC report, if the NDRC is a significant organization in the OF movement, the article may use the report as a primary source to state that the NDRC published a report in 1989, and that the conclusion of the report stated "blah, blah, blah". Secondary sources would be needed to interpret or analyze the report, or to discuss the motivation or impact of the report. --Noleander (talk) 20:23, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
The trouble is, choosing which parts of the report to mention and which ones not to mention is in itself a matter of interpretation, because you are interpreting the report to some degree when you choose which parts are 'important' and which ones are not. In a good (or better) article, primary sources need to be used carefully alongside good secondary sources. If there are already good independent reliable secondary sources, they need to be used first, with uses of the primary sources only to support what is in the secondary source. Surely if the NRDC report were that important to the organic food movement, there must be good reliable secondary sources that talk about it and how it was used. Those are the sources needed. Zad6820:31, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
Not really, the entire report was about pesicide risk, so no need to really do more than cite the pages that are either intro or conclusion - overall summary. Montanabw(talk)21:45, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
Agree with Zad68 about use of secondary sources. The issues here are WP:WEIGHT and the improper use of primary sources out of context to push a POV; there are thousands upon thousands of primary sources discussing organic foods, and cherry-picking a select few is going to be a very distinct problem. Best to stick to what reliable secondary sources say, unless we can find important primary sources which are recognized as important by independent secondary ones. I should note that WP:MEDRS very clearly states we should not be using primary sources to debunk reliable secondary ones, and any hint of trying to have an end-run around MEDRS should not be tolerated. Yobol (talk) 22:43, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
I should also note that we need to be very careful not to WP:SNYTH material into here. Again, this is the Organic food page, we should be using secondary sources that discuss organic food as a primary topic, not mention it tangentially (see again the list of MEDRS sources above for appropriate sources which discuss organic food as the primary topic) - most of the pesticide related material is not about organic food primarily and would be probably be undue weight and synth to add to the organic food article. We have enough material that discuss organic food primarily which discuss pesticides that we don't need those sources that don't discuss organic food as a primary topic. Yobol (talk) 22:50, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
Back to square one
Instead of discussing every detail and stretch this discussion to Easter 2035, it might be an idea to look first at the original chapter that got us here. That chapter, with the name "Health and safety" contains two subsections, each discussing several subjects. During the discussion on the talkpage, I suggested to split it up. Not surprisingly, two editors gave a blanket "no" against it.
I suggested to split up and reorganize the chapter "Health and Safety" to the following:
1 Food safety
1.1 Proven facts
1.1.1 Safety for producers
1.1.2 Safety for consumers
1.2 Claims and perceptions
2 Positive effects on health?
2.1 Medical view
2.2 Agricultural view
2.3 Claims and perceptions
3 Taste
WP:MEDRS should cover 2.1; WP:SCIRS should cover 1.1 and 2.2; WP:RS should cover 1.2, 2.3 and 3.
I am still convinced that this split can help to find a way out of the deadlock, that is why I bring the suggestion in here. Remember, this is a line of thinking, not the Holy Grail. The Bannertalk22:03, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
Och, I guess "The Duo" will be able to prove every detail with 100% accuracy with their Holy Sources. The Bannertalk04:05, 16 December 2012 (UTC) Hmmm, I've studied too long abd get cynical. Better call it a day.
I have already noted my opposition to this type of material on the talk page, but because it is being brought up here, I will mention my objections here again. Section titles like "Proven facts" and "Positive effects on health" as well as "claims and perceptions" are clearly in violation of NPOV and are non-starters. Any significant discussion about safety of producers of organic food belongs on the organic farming page, not here. Discussion about the "agricultural view" of health effects gets us exactly back to square one about our choice of sources. We should also be wary of having point-counter point style articles which give inappropriately give equal validity/weight to two sides of an argument where we should not. Yobol (talk) 22:47, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
You look at the letters again, Yobol. Try to understand the line of thinking. Or be creative, and come with a solution to solve this dispute. The Bannertalk01:01, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
It would be helpful if you at some point actually address objections rather than make vague innuendo and accusations. Yobol (talk) 01:05, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
You can keep your PAs for yourself instead of accusing me time and time again over WP:IDHT.
But this is the first time you say "taste" does not need MEDRS. Does it require other expert sourcing or is WP:RS enough? The Bannertalk01:29, 14 December 2012 (UTC)/me sees a glimmer of hope
I have never said "taste" requires MEDRS. Let's not focus on things we agree on, and possibly address the multiple problems I have with your suggestion?Yobol (talk) 01:40, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
In fact, you did not say anything about it. But can we move "Taste" out of the contentious chapter "Health and Safety" now? And do others agree with that move? The Bannertalk09:55, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
Considering the sources appear to talk about nutritional value and the taste together I'm not sure it makes much sense taking just the taste part out into a new section. What's wrong with where it is? IRWolfie- (talk) 18:53, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
I think we ALL do agree on one thing: We are looking at the edit dispute in the "health and safety" section. However, the problem is that we also have, as part of that section, a "Nutritional value and taste" section. So maybe, let's look at the low-hanging fruit (pun intended): Does the "nutritional value and taste" section require MEDRS compliant cites, or merely WP:RS cites? (Which may include agricultural journals, or for that matter, Ladies Home Journal) And if not, perhaps that should become its own full section (delete an = from the markup syntax) and be placed outside this discussion altogether? Then, can we all at least agree that the scope of this discussion is ONLY the "Consumer safety" section and the health issues mentioned therein? Montanabw(talk)19:55, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
What's wrong with where it is? Meaning, in my opinion, leave taste where it is now and let it fall under MEDRS. Correct me if I am wrong. The Bannertalk02:17, 16 December 2012 (UTC)
The exact position does matter. Saying something about the taste of organically grown vegetables compared with "conventional" grown vegetables is not a medical claim. No matter how you look at it. So it is safe enough to move it to another section where is could be covered by WP:RS. The Bannertalk12:06, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
Proposal to return to discussion about reliable sources
I note that uninvolved editor TransporterMan made a suggestion at the top of this discussion section which has been endorsed by several editors, and not opposed by any with regards to proper sourcing. Can we all agree with that framework with which to discuss sourcing and move on? Until we nail down what appropriate sourcing will be we're going to be here forever. Yobol (talk) 22:55, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
Transporter Man's detailed comments about MEDRS don't solve the underlying problem of what material is sufficiently health-related to mandate MEDRS, and then, even if it does, if MEDRS itself has some loopholes and caveats that may apply. I think we must narrow the discussion. The problem that brought us here are the health benefits of organic food claimed by supporters. We seem to actually have a fair number of excellent studies that at least meet WP:SCIRS and some probably meet WP:MEDRS. But my concern is that the two individuals who consistently push a rigid interpretation of MEDRS have, at least in this discussion, appeared to state that everything presented above has problems, even though the same critiques could be applied to some of the presumably MEDRS-compliant material already in the article. So: IRWolfie and Yobol, here's the gauntlet: What SPECIFIC claims within the health and safety require MEDRS sources (just your opinion, in specifics, not generalities), and what specific claims (such as, I hope, statements about taste) do NOT require MEDRS sourcing and can do fine with SCIRS or RS sources, in your opinions? Montanabw(talk)20:11, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
For example: a statement such as "Pesticide/herbicide residues have been found on conventionally-grown foods" appears, to me, to NOT require MEDRS sources, as it contains no health claims; just needs an RS that the statement is true. Montanabw(talk)20:11, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
But a statement such as "Pesticide/herbicide X exposure has been linked to cancer in white rats" would require a MEDRS source, probably yes? Montanabw(talk)20:11, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
However, what to we do with something like: "therefore, proponents of organic foods state that eating food free of pesticides and herbicides may lower the risk of cancer, particularly when consumed by young children?" I think it should be included, noting that it's an opinion, not a health claim, and IMHO, subject to WP:RS. Montanabw(talk)20:11, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
Then we have what I think is the big gray area in dispute: What do we do with proponents' evidence? Some of it is easily RS, some could pass SCIRS, but possibly not MEDRS; such as studies from agricultural journals, nutritional journals, the weight of preliminary and anecdotal reports, and so on? Is THIS the actual sticking point that we all are fighting about? Montanabw(talk)20:11, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
If the MEDRS sources address what the proponents believe then we could mention that in the context of the MEDRS results. This isn't an article about organic food movements, and they don't have any weight in comparison to the MEDRS sources for medical claims. We should not be pretending they are equally valid viewpoints as that would be a distortion of the the sources; giving undue weight to fringe groups. The sources don't pass RS if they don't pass MEDRS. MEDRS is a guideline which clarifies RS in relation to medical claims. The specific groups may have some weight to be mentioned in some history, but we should not imply that the health claims have some validity, because the reliable secondary sources don't support that. IRWolfie- (talk) 20:55, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
Agreed, organic advocacy groups are not reliable for medical claims, nor are any non MEDRS. Their claims might be useful for a section discussing advocacy, but has no role in a discussion about actual safety unless mentioned by MEDRS. Yobol (talk) 22:58, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
As far as I remember, you and Wolfy want everything covered by MEDRS sources. That makes me quite curious about why you two have allowed articles.mercola.com/sites/articles/archive/2007/11/17/it-s-official-organic-really-is-better.aspx [unreliable fringe source?] this source] into the Nutrition section. I would never take that article as a serious source... The Bannertalk00:08, 15 December 2012 (UTC)
That's clearly not an appropriate source, and should be removed when protection expires. I also clearly do not want "everything covered by MEDRS sources" as you well know, and I once again ask you not to misrepresent my positions. Yobol (talk) 00:10, 15 December 2012 (UTC)
Wolfie and Yobol, the "organic food movement" is part and parcel of an organic food article -- what is it, why is it good for you. Here, I asked you, simply, to SPECIFY if 1) You want MEDRS for the whole article (which I don't think you do, at least not Yobol), or 2) If you only want MEDRS for the health and safety section, or 3) Something else. WE ARE GOING IN CIRCLES. Will one of you two please state if you have any willingness to compromise whatsoever on anything or if we should just throw up our hands and let you two get your own way on everything... THIS IS GOING NOWHERE, SOMEONE HELP!!!!
I'm not sure how you could be confused, but I subscribe to TransporterMan's clear and thorough presentation about sourcing. Yobol (talk) 00:57, 15 December 2012 (UTC)
If information is health information then it requires MEDRS. If information is not health related, it does not require MEDRS. No one has said the entire article should be MEDRS, that would be quite silly. Any medical claims require sources reliable for medical claims (MEDRS), any non-medical claims do not require MEDRS. I think that's quite clear. Thus claims about cancer risks falls under MEDRS. Taste does not require MEDRS, but nor does it mean we should add poor quality advocacy sources. High profile MEDRS secondary sources exist that address nutritional value: [8] (132 citations), so I think that issue is settled as well. IRWolfie- (talk) 15:43, 15 December 2012 (UTC)
Not quite; you hold a double standard that anything favoring organic food seems to find fault under your interpretation of MEDRS when MEDRS itself clearly indicates there is wiggle room to explain alternative views. MEDRS is needed simply for definitive statements, or as Banner says "proven facts." If we were discussing tobacco, would you say that we cannot state that smoking cigarettes is linked to lung cancer because there is not a peer reviewed study that says, definitively, "smoking cigarettes causes long cancer?" This is a sincere question, Wolfie. Montanabw(talk)23:28, 16 December 2012 (UTC)
Completely arbitrary section break
Somewhere in the above mess, Banner suggested that we need the third party volunteers to kindly step back in and try to sum up what's going on and make some sense of this situation. I have also said this. As far as I can tell, we are going in circles and are nowhere close to any kind of a solution. I think three of the four primary editors here are showing some evidence of movement, and Krem offered us many, many good sources, but we appear also to have one editor who has not moved from his/her original position. So: volunteers: can you help us see if there is ANY consensus from the four of us (me, Banner, Yobol and Wolfie), and if any movement at all, what appears to be the most workable areas where we might get to an agreement, and what areas appear to have irreconcilable differences? Montanabw(talk)21:36, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
I found myself here after reading the original article and then taking a look at the talk page. I am no wikipedia editor or even a DRN volunteer. Having said that, I did take a look at everything people have said so far.
In my view the problem you have been circling around is how health and safety related claims of agricultural journals and organic food advocacy groups should be presented in the article or if they should be presented at all. I see three alternatives: i) these claims are presented in the Health and Safety section, ii) they are given a new separate section, iii) they are completely left out.
1. Personally, and I believe most people will agree, I would not trust non-medical literature with any kind of health claims. It doesn't matter if the agricultural journals are highly respected or not, there should be no "agricultural view" on health and safety in an encyclopaedia, even if it relates to food. As a result, the first alternative is not viable in my eyes.
2. Following on point (1), I would say that any health claims fall under WP:MEDRS. Things I can think of that do not fall under MEDRS are taste, nutritional content and pesticide residue concentration, but there could be others.
3. For pesticide residues, unless the studies compare organic and non-organic food, it is probably inappropriate to use health claims made otherwise it would probably be WP:SYNTH. Instead it may be better to link to the Health effects of pesticides article where many of the articles mentioned earlier in the discussion also belong.
My recommendation would be a separate section of the organic food advocates point of view, which may also include the history of the debate. Health claims in the new section should be avoided or mentioned as as-of-yet unverified or perceived benefits. The Health and Safety section should then mostly be WP:MEDRS while the new section could consider WP:RS and WP:FRINGE.
As an aside, I would propose migrating the environmental impact section to the organic farming article when this issue is resolved.
To move things forward, I would first ask Montanabw and The Banner to indicate to what degree they agree with points 1 and 2 above and what their specific objections are. I am afraid that this is the major sticking point in the debate and if resolved a solution will come quickly. 131.159.61.107 (talk) 11:22, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
I hope I am wrong, but are you saying that the guys who produce and research food are not qualified to comment on food in relation to (perceived) health claims and food safety? And do you consider growing vegetables using organic methods as WP:FRINGE? The Bannertalk12:13, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
Of course they can comment and I already proposed to add their opinion if benefits are qualified as perceived. On the other hand, I think it is not appropriate to include their opinion on health matters in WP, especially in encyclopaedia language. This is even more true if they go against secondary sources that are MEDRS. I also don't think that growing food with organic methods is WP:FRINGE, I put that because some claims/sources might qualify because they go against current consensus. Moreover, fringe does not necessarily equal pseudoscience. 131.159.61.107 (talk) 12:36, 19 December 2012 (UTC) - Edited to add a small comment.
Ok, that sounds a lot better then your first comment. Point is that is very difficult to say "Stuff A causes Disease C" or the other way round. At best you can say that "Stuff A gives a higher risk on Disease C". Virtually everybody will know a 90-something smoker who is still perfectly healthy although smoking for 80 years. Others can die quickly of it ([9]). Risk and a bit of bad luck can cause a lot of misery. On the other hand, some guys also wanted MEDRS-sources for claims like "Vegetable B contains significantly more of [[Stuff D]], what is said to have positive effects on the natural resistance against disease". In my opinion, what is said about Stuff D does not need a MEDRS-source in the article about Organic Food. It is a unnecessary complication for this article, as the article about Stuff D should contain the MEDRS-sources. The first part of the sencence is, in my opinion, not a health claim whatsoever. The Bannertalk13:07, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
Excellent, I think this is a step forward. So do you agree that claims about taste, nutritional content, etc. do not need MEDRS, but any claims linking with a disease or condition or other health effect should be MEDRS-sourced (or linked to a more comprehensive article, e.g. Health effects of pesticides)? 131.159.61.107 (talk) 13:20, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
Yes and no. The first part: yes. The second part (but any claims linking with a disease or condition or other health effect should be MEDRS-sourced (or linked to a more comprehensive article, e.g. Health effects of pesticides) no. The point is "should be MEDRS-sourced". I can agree with a combination of MEDRS-sources plus other high quality peer reviewed sources (at least conform WP:RS). (Unfortunately, I know that other will strongly disagree on this point.) The Bannertalk13:42, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
I think here is the big problem. As far as I understand WP policies, it has been decided that health/medical claims should be sourced using WP:MEDRS. It has also been acknowledged that any bias introduced because of that policy is intentional. There are three ways out of this, that I can see:
1. The MEDRS policy stays in place as is, but obviously you don't agree with that.
2. A separate section is written as I proposed above, e.g "arguments for organic food" where it is clear that any claims made there are not supported by current medical consensus. I don't know of course if the other participants will agree to that and you may not either for that matter.
3. You need to show that there is an extraordinary reason for including other sources along with MEDRS.
Part of the problem is that WP:MEDRS is acted upon as a policy, carved in rock and protected by seventien armies complete with trenching, barbed wire and minefields. In fact, it is only a guideline. And on the top of that page is a little banner saying This page documents an English Wikipedia content guideline. It is a generally accepted standard that editors should attempt to follow, though it is best treated with common sense, and occasional exceptions may apply. Any substantive edit to this page should reflect consensus. When in doubt, discuss first on the talk page. Especially the "Common sense" is funny, because every time the health-word appears on the horizon, every common sense goes out of the window and all soldiers rush to their trenches and prepare for battle.
Using common sense makes it possible to compromise. A I said above I can agree with a combination of MEDRS-sources plus other high quality peer reviewed sources (at least conform WP:RS). But before we can go on, Yobol and Wolfie need to have their say. The Bannertalk23:27, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
Arbitrary Section Break the Nth
Ok, I've looked at this dispute for a significant while and I've seen no real concise explanation of what people might be willing to accept amongst the reams of WP:TLDR material. As a volunteer at DRN I think that this is too large for DRN to deal with therefore I propose that a widely advertised RfC be conducted to determine what sourcing guideline should be used in relation to claims in this article. Pending significant objection, I intend to close this filing (which has gone on for far too long) in 24 hours from my signature Hasteur (talk) 18:19, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
Agree this DRN discussion isn't heading in the direction of consensus. Sadly, we did already discuss at the article Talk page the idea of starting an RFC, however we could not even come to agreement on how to word the RFC--see Talk:Organic_food#Suggestion_for_an_RfC_question. Maybe we could get help doing that? Zad6818:26, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
I can support Hasteur's close but an RFC? Oh shit. Thanks mostly to one editor who refuses to budge, we want to have a six-month drahmah that's going to make climate change look like people holding hands and singing Kum-Ba-Yah? Just what I was afraid of. Phooey. I say unlock the article, let the editing improve and sourcing commence, and maybe see if we can go back to looking at individual edits. Montanabw(talk)19:12, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
Call the direct question: "Which reliable source guideline should be used for statements of various natures in this article?" This allows people to make cases for WP:MEDRS/WP:SCIRS/WP:RS for which statements. Probably a list of what types of statements there are (incidence of disease, nutrition, biology of the growing food, pesticide residue, etc) with people making a case for the specific guideline and a endorsement block. If it's obvious (>75% support) that one guideline is more supported than others, then take that for those types. If it's a mixed consensus, do a run-off (eliminate the lowest support) and try again. I know this borders into voting/polling, but there's so many different choices out there we have to try and funnel to a consensus that is maintainable. Hasteur (talk) 19:44, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
I think if the third parties here could do this as a straight vote, maybe put the categories into a table or something, and ask each of us "combatants" to simply vote, no editorializing, no arguments, just a flat yes or no (or maybe an "abstain because I disagree with something related to the category/question") it would help. I think that we DO need to narrow things down, and this probably won't happen without help from the third parties. Montanabw(talk)22:34, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
This is close to the kind of RFC I'd support. I'd take it down one step lower and have the RFC provide specific examples of proposed article content and sources. It would be great if this DRN discussion could at least result in an agreement on how to word the RFC. Zad6819:59, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
Only problem, Zad, is that the current article itself need some improvement in content on both sides -- there are dead links in there and all sorts of things. I guess what I'm saying is that I can see the value of getting "perfect" content proposed by each side, but I think we are all a little hesitant to do the work of doing up those perfect sections when there is so little agreement ... I know that makes for a circular argument... but it's part of the problem; a bit of being gun-shy. Montanabw(talk)
The total deadlock is in fact what I expected of this mediation attempt. Roughly, I see five people as main players in the conflict. Of them, 3 are trying to resolve the conflict, one is slightly moving to a constructive attitude and one plain says no...
I don't really like the idea of an RFC, but it might be a way to break the deadlock. So I am willing to accept when we have a clear question and when is clear what parts will be covered by the RFC. "Consumer safety" is clearly covered by the question. But "taste" and "nutritional value" are less clear. I would suggest to separate "taste" and keep it out of the RFC (and out of the chapter "Health and safety"). About "nutritional value" is would suggest to do this in a separate RFC, when the community wants to include this. The Bannertalk23:44, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
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Talk:Theotokos of Vladimir
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In [10] I was accused of being irresponsible because I have removed a reference which has to show that an icon flown at the orders of Stalin has repelled the enemies of the Soviet Union. The problem is that, as far as I can see using Google Translate, the source does not mention Stalin and it does not mention anything about an icon having repelled the Nazi invaders. Perhaps Russian speakers may kindly show me where the source says "as ordered by Stalin" or "the icon has repelled the enemy". Otherwise, the accusation itself may be flawed. Tgeorgescu (talk) 00:35, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Source 2 states "According to some accounts". Who? What? When? The influences of the icon looks more like an urban legend. A counter offensive and -42°C look more realistic reasons for a retreat... The Bannertalk02:34, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
Of course the issue is not that the icon beats the army or not but the reference attests exactly this urban belief, which is even celebrated. Can we keep it? Michael2012ro (talk) 09:26, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
The point is whether the source mentioned above supports the urban legend or it has simply to do with a commemoration of the victory in WW2. Tgeorgescu (talk) 09:28, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
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Have you tried to resolve this previously?
discussed it on the talk page, asked in WP:ANI, but it was the wrong place.
How do you think we can help?
First, Russian speakers could exactly decide if the source says anything about Stalin or an icon having repelled the Nazi army. Second, the matter should be decided here in order to avoid an edit war.
Opening comments by Michael2012ro
Even the link does not say anything about Stalin , clearly shows that there was a flight with an icon above Moscow in december 1941 with this specific purpose to help Russian army. There is also a commemoration of this flight. So, I think the reference helps to understand better this urban belief and also helps as a link to further informations about intervention of Stalin in this issue. This article is also about a religious belief and the reference obviously helps in confirming and understanding this belief.Thank you.
Talk:Theotokos of Vladimir discussion
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Comment from uninvolved editor: Here is the text that is in dispute:
In December 1941, as the Germans approached Moscow, Joseph Stalin allegedly ordered a service in the Assumption Cathedral to protect the city from the enmy and that the icon be placed in an airplane and flown around the besieged capital. Several days later, the German army started to retreat.
Personally, I had no problems with the first source, but the second fails to verify either element of the urban legend, so it should not be used as a reference in order to support the urban legend. It says something about a commemoration of WW2 victims and heroes and victory, but not enough to support the urban legend which is purported to support.
Otherwise, at [11]User:Staszek Lem has completely removed the urban legend. I don't know if he was aware of this dispute resolution attempt. The text should be indeed of dubious encyclopedic quality in order to be challenged and removed by two inclusionists. I mean there is a difference between faithful and stupid, the urban legend depicts the Russians as being stupid (or credulous) rather than faithful. But that's just my opinion. Tgeorgescu (talk) 20:32, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
Another third party editor and volunteer here. The first source is a Lonely Planet book, a travel guide, and is not a reliable source for historical events. See the discussions here: Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 102#Lonely Planet. Travel guides are only reliable for topics that pertain to travel, like restaurants or hotels. Articles about historical events should use academic sources, like journals or textbooks.--xanchester(t)01:41, 15 December 2012 (UTC)
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Template talk:The Holocaust (Inclusion of Serbs in template)
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Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
The dispute in question is between two camps with Antidiskriminator and I (i.e. tulipsword) representing one, and Peacemaker67 and Dianna representing the other. The dispute of interest, as you will see, is primarily between Peacemaker67 and me.
Peacemaker67 insists that Serbs be removed from a list of “victims” within the template titled “The Holocaust”. His argument – which is extremely problematic – is that the genocidal campaign that was carried out against the Serbs during WWII by the Independent State of Croatia is not part of the Holocaust.
A major problem with his argument is that he has not defined what he means by “the Holocaust”. Given that Poles, homosexuals, Jehovah’s witnesses, and others are included under the list of interest without objection, it is clear that what has been implicitly accepted by all users is that the list of interest represents the wider spectrum of victims of the Holocaust.
Wikipedia operates according to consensus. Antidiskriminator and I have many times expressed our disapproval of Peacemaker67’s decision to continually disregard our protests as well as our arguments.
For the reasons that I have provided on the Talk page of interest, I do strongly recommend that “Ethnic Serbs” be re-added to the list of “victims”.
Have you tried to resolve this previously?
I have recommended that we try and make the template consistent with what is written in the Wikipedia article “The Holocaust” since the two are directly related. Establishing consistency between the two would require us to re-add “Ethnic Serbs” to the list of “victims”. Further, I have proposed that we specify that what is meant by “victims” in the template is the wider spectrum of victims. Peacemaker67, as you will clearly see, is just totally ignoring everything I write.
How do you think we can help?
Specify, by way of a footnote or something like that, that what is meant by “victims” in the template is the wider spectrum of victims.
The re-adding of “Ethnic Serbs” under the list of “victims” should be clearly authorized by a dispute resolution editor who will confront Peacemaker67 who is not listening to any of us.
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Essentially I agree with Dianna, and would be amused by Tulipsword's serious case of WP:HEAR if the subject wasn't so serious. The lead of the current The Holocaust article defines the Holocaust as "was the mass murder or genocide of approximately six million Jews during World War II, a programme of systematic state-sponsored murder by Nazi Germany, led by Adolf Hitler and the Nazi Party, throughout German-occupied territory" and cites 10 separate sources supporting that definition, including from books written by:
Professor Timothy D. Snyder, the American Professor of History at Yale University, who specializes in the history of Central and Eastern Europe, as well as the Holocaust
Professor Yehuda Bauer, Professor of Holocaust Studies at the Avraham Harman Institute of Contemporary Jewry at the Hebrew University of Jerusalem
Professor David Cesarani, Professor of History at Royal Holloway College, University of London
Sir Martin Gilbert, a leading historian who wrote a definitive book on the Holocaust
Dr Raul Hilberg, the author of the influential "The Destruction of the European Jews"
Professor Peter Longerich, director of the Research Centre for the Holocaust and Twentieth-Century History at Royal Holloway, University of London
among others
The article lead also indicates that some scholars include the mass murder of Romani people and people with disabilities in their definition of "The Holocaust" and cites two sources for those additions, an article by Professor Henry Friedlander, Professor in the Department of Judaic Studies at Brooklyn College of the City University of New York, and also Wytwycky, Bohdan (1980). The Other Holocaust: Many Circles of Hell. The Novak Report.
No reliably published scholarly sources have been produced that widen "The Holocaust" any further (with the deepest of respect for the opinion of Simon Wiesenthal). It was Serbs that caught my eye on the template (because I have a particular interest in the Balkans), but the template should be taking its lead from the article, and the article definition (even the expanded one) does not include Serbs (and some other groups). I am proposing removing all groups that do not fall within the definition currently used in the article, accepting that Romani people and people with disabilities could arguably be included on the basis mainly of Friedlander's work (although it is probably debatable given the weight we would naturally give all those eminent Holocaust scholars that use a narrower definition). That's all I have for now. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 00:46, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
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This dispute is a related to Peacemaker67's (somewhat supported by Diannaa) struggle to change the context of the article about Holocaust (as explained on the talk pages of The Holocaust article and template) to be focused to Jews and Jewish victims.
The Holocaust is of such great significance that almost all of its sections are covered by separate articles. Some of the sections and articles are appropriately listed within the sidebar template with collapsible list (which corresponds with template documentation).
I always insist that victims must not be divided into Jews and non-Jews. I brought over 1,100 Nazis before courts in different countries, Nazis who killed Jews and Gentiles and Gypsies and Serbs. ... we shouldn't always talk about 6 million Jews who died in Holokaust. I say let's talk about 11 million civilians, among them 6 million Jews who died in the Holocaust."
I don't believe that editors who want to delete non-Jewish victims (and started with deletion of Serb victims) struggling for the their context of The Holocaust will gain consensus for their position. Still, I don't share Diannaa's optimism about resolving this issue and the quality improvement because the real issue here and the real cause of this dispute is out of the scope of this noticeboard. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 14:57, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
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Recently I became aware that my local library has a couple of high quality new books on this topic, so I decided that I would undertake an overhaul of the article once I am done my current project. Initial copy edits were started on November 13. I noted my intention on the article's talk page on December 3 and received a positive response from other interested editors. Preliminary discussions are underway on the article talk page as to structural changes, which will likely be the first step in improving the article, hopefully all the way up to a GA standard. A lot of things may change about the article, including the definition of the Holocaust that is used therein, depending on where the sources lead us. So to add things to the template in an effort to match the article at this point in time does not make sense, in my opinion. On December 13 I suggested that the article was not in very good shape, being due for a total overhaul, and told him about my long-range plan. Later that day I decided to discontinue participating in the discussion on the template talk page as it seemed to be going around in circles and I felt my concerns were not being heard. Later I noticed this post on user talk:Antidiskriminator, so I posted there my actual reason for not participating any further in the discussion.
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I am a regular volunteer here at DRN. The editor who filed this request, Tulipsword, is a newcomer who edited for several days, but has not edited Wikipedia since filing this request. Antidiskriminator, the other editor with whom Tulipsword says that he/she was most aligned says, above, that he does not believe this filing is appropriate or needed. Discussion appears to be proceeding at Talk:The Holocaust. In that light, I or another volunteer will close this request unless someone makes a strong case for leaving it open within the next 24 hours after the date on this post. It can be refiled later, if needed. Regards, TransporterMan (TALK) 19:05, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
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ResearchGate
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The instructions here say that this is not a forum for disputes which are under discussion at other dispute resolution forums. This has also been listed at WP:NPOVN, WP:RSN, and WP:ORN. Please let those discussions come to a resolution and then refile here if the dispute has not been resolved there. — TransporterMan (TALK) 16:04, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
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Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
On multiple occasions, various Wiki editors, some of them anonymous, have used questionable self-published sources or no source at all to claim that the subject of this article, ResearchGate (a social network for scientists), sends spam that "gives the misleading impression" that the messages are personal invitations triggered by ResearchGate users. Most often cited as a source for this is a blog post by someone named "Erich." I have edited this criticism out a couple of times on the grounds that it is not properly cited by a credible, third-party source. I have posted 'citation needed' on this page as well, but two months later, no one had offered a citation. Whenever I edit out the spam criticism, other editors are quick to undo my edits.
In addition, some Wiki editors have asserted that ResearchGate's claimed user numbers are 1.9 million but its Twitter profile has only about 4,000 followers. I have contested this on the grounds that it is irrelevant, improperly cited, gives undue weight and is not in NPOV. It is not a citable fact; it is in my mind a subjective correlation. My edits have been quickly undone by other editors here as well.
I am trying to make sure this Wiki article only states proven, verifiable facts that can be cited by credible, third-party sources. By reading this article's talk page, it's clear that a number of Wiki editors contributing to this article don't like the company and regard them as spammers. But everything I've seen and read elsewhere about this company shows them to be a legitimate organization.
Have you tried to resolve this previously?
I have requested semi-protection for the page, because some of the edits have been made by anonymous users, but it was denied.
How do you think we can help?
I would like a third-party to evaluate the spam criticism statement as well as the statements relating ResearchGate's members to its Twitter following, and to give an opinion on a) are these relevant statements that should be included in the article; b) are these statements properly sourced; and c) are they written in NPOV? If not, I would appreciate advice on next steps to prevent any further back-and-forth edits.
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Opening comments by BlueMoonlet
I am a longtime WP editor and a professional scientist, and I have been watching this page since I received an email from ResearchGate that purported to be from a respected colleague. That is, of course, original research on my part, but for what my word may or may not be worth, the criticism is in fact true, though hard to properly cite. The reason it's hard to cite is, paradoxically, that the company is only marginally notable and thus has attracted practically no critical coverage from reliable sources. The paltry coverage it has received has basically been parroting the company's own press releases. There is a problem here with the WP:RS policy, but I certainly don't know how to fix it.
A number of people have shown up who are more upset about these emails than I am, and who know less about WP than I do, and have added material about the topic. I have mostly refrained from contesting the removal of this material, as I have found it hard to rebut the criticism that it is ill-sourced, but I have to admit that I have been sympathetic. Most recently, however, someone found this source and posted it. I did contest the removal of this source, because I think it fits the WP:RS policy. The fit may be marginal, but this whole case is marginal.
It is inaccurate for User:JNorman704 to call this source "a blog post by someone named 'Erich.'" The author identifies himself as Erich Schubert, a researcher in mathematics and computer science. He even gives his CV, which is modest IMO but at least arguably qualifies him as "an established expert on the topic of the article." I now note that he has added a disclaimer to the original blog post that modestly declines the status of RS for WP purposes, but (as I've just said) I'm not sure I agree with him.
The bottom line is that this is a marginally notable article subject that engages in practices that are questionable to say the least, but about which little has been written. To quote only the mainstream sources, which have not noticed the subject enough to be critical of it, is to unfairly bias the article towards the subject. It's a tricky issue, and I don't know the best solution. --BlueMoonlet (t/c) 02:00, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
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User talk:Medicinechief#Text_in_question
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Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
The editor of the Talk Page is preventing the addition of the content regarding a different theory of Pain.
Have you tried to resolve this previously?
Discussed several times on the Talk Pages
How do you think we can help?
The editor on the Talk Page needs to allow addition of this other Theory of Pain
Opening comments by Doc James
Medical hypothesis has been deemed to not be a reliable source when it comes to discussing main stream current medical positions. Unless these theory is discussed in secondary sources independent of it creator probably not ready for prime time. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 23:45, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
Opening comments by Anthonyhcole
The question is whether to mention in Pain the relatively new theory of pain thoroughly summarised by Medicinechief on his talk page. The theory was enunciated by Omoigui in: this book
Omoigui S (2002). The biochemical origin of pain: How a new law and new drugs have led to a medical breakthrough in the treatment of persistent pain. State of the Art Technologies Incorporated. ISBN0-9650-7676-8.
and these two journal articles
Omoigui S (2007). "The biochemical origin of pain: proposing a new law of pain: the origin of all pain is inflammation and the inflammatory response. Part 1 of 3--a unifying law of pain." Medical Hypotheses69 (1): 70–82. doi:10.1016/j.mehy.2006.11.028. PMID17240081. full text
Omoigui S (2007). "The biochemical origin of pain: the origin of all pain is inflammation and the inflammatory response. Part 2 of 3 - inflammatory profile of pain syndromes." Medical Hypotheses69 (6): 1169–78. doi:10.1016/j.mehy.2007.06.033. PMID17728071. full text
Citations Google Scholar finds no peer-reviewed citations of the 2002 book other than by the book's author, Omoigui.
Among citations of the two 2007 journal articles, Google Scholar finds these 18 articles which appear to have been published in peer-reviewed journals:
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Gur A, Oktayoglu P (June 2008). "Status of immune mediators in fibromyalgia". Current Pain and Headache Report12 (3): 175–81. PMID18796266.
"Furthermore, in patients with FM, the level of pain intensity is related to the spinal fluid level of arginine, which is a precursor to the infl ammatory mediator nitric oxide [...] Mentions that the treatment of pain syndromes requires an understanding of their inflammatory profile."
Ortega E, García JJ, Bote ME, et al. (2009). "Exercise in fibromyalgia and related inflammatory disorders: known effects and unknown chances". Exercise Immunology Review15: 42–65. PMID19957871. Full text
"Based on the hypothesis that the origin of all pain is inflammation and the inflammatory response, special attention has been focused on the inflammatory hypothesis of FM. [...] decreases TNFα production) may block pain [...] It has been proposed that FM is due to neurogenic inflammatory response to allergens, infectious agents, chemicals or emotional stress [...] As reviewed by Omoigui back and neck pain results from injury to the muscle, disk nerve or ligaments, with subsequent inflammation."
Ortega E, Bote ME, Giraldo E, García JJ (February 2012). "Aquatic exercise improves the monocyte pro- and anti-inflammatory cytokine production balance in fibromyalgia patients." Scandinavian Journal of Medicine & Science in Sports22 (1): 104–12. doi:10.1111/j.1600-0838.2010.01132.x. PMID20536907.
"Based on the presumption that the origin of all pain is inflammation and the inflammatory response, special attention has been paid to the inflammatory hypothesis of FM with the implication of inflammatory cytokine involvement in the syndrome. Indeed, IL-6 and IL-8 may play a major role because the former has been associated with a hypersensitivity to pain and the latter promotes sympathetic pain. Besides the generation of pain and hyperalgesia in inflammatory conditions, pro-inflammatory cytokines, such as IL-1β, TNFα, IL-8, or inflammation-associated cytokines such as IL-6, may also induce other characteristic symptoms of FM syndrome, such as stress, fatigue, sleep disorders, and depression symptoms, while the anti-inflammatory cytokine IL-10 may block pain [...] Although the etiology of FM remains elusive, the current hypothesis suggests that inflammatory disorders underlie this syndrome ..."
Lamont LA (November 2008). "Multimodal pain management in veterinary medicine: the physiologic basis of pharmacologic therapies". Vet. Clin. North Am. Small Anim. Pract. 38 (6): 1173–86, v. doi:10.1016/j.cvsm.2008.06.005. PMID18954679.
Shih CM, Cheng SN, Wong CS, Kuo YL, Chou TC (April 2009). "Antiinflammatory and antihyperalgesic activity of C-phycocyanin". Anesth. Analg.108 (4): 1303–10. doi:10.1213/ane.0b013e318193e919. PMID19299804. Full text
"It has been a well accepted concept that all pain, whether acute or chronic, peripheral or central, originates from inflammation and the inflammatory response."
Leichsenring A, Andriske M, Bäcker I, Stichel CC, Lübbert H (June 2009). "Analgesic and antiinflammatory effects of cannabinoid receptor agonists in a rat model of neuropathic pain". Naunyn-Schmiedeberg's Archives of Pharmacology. 379 (6): 627–36. doi:10.1007/s00210-008-0386-4. PMID19152053. Full text
"There is considerable evidence that CNS inflammation plays a crucial role in the initiation and maintenance of neuropathic pain."
Arora V, Kuhad A, Tiwari V, Chopra K (November 2011). "Curcumin ameliorates reserpine-induced pain-depression dyad: behavioural, biochemical, neurochemical and molecular evidences". Psychoneuroendocrinology36 (10): 1570–81. doi:10.1016/j.psyneuen.2011.04.012. PMID21612876.
"Depressed patients and patients with pain disorders often display enhanced cytokine levels including interleukin-6 (IL- 6), C-reactive protein, interleukin-1-beta (IL-1b), and tumor necrosis factor alpha (TNF-a)"
da Silva AG, de Sousa CP, Koehler J, Fontana J, Christo AG, Guedes-Bruni RR (February 2010). "Evaluation of an extract of Brazilian arnica (Solidago chilensis Meyen, Asteraceae) in treating lumbago". Phytotherapy Research24 (2): 283–7. doi:10.1002/ptr.2934. PMID19827029.
Jiang D, Chen Y, Hou X, Xu J, Mu X, Chen W (September 2011). "Influence of Paeonia lactiflora roots extract on cAMP-phosphodiesterase activity and related anti-inflammatory action". J Ethnopharmacol137 (1): 914–20. doi:10.1016/j.jep.2011.07.020. PMID21782011.
"Because of the close relationship between pain and inflammation, the symptoms above occurring simultaneously with pain indicate inflammatory conditions."
Martins TL, Kahvegian MA, Noel-Morgan J, Leon-Román MA, Otsuki DA, Fantoni DT (September 2010). "Comparison of the effects of tramadol, codeine, and ketoprofen alone or in combination on postoperative pain and on concentrations of blood glucose, serum cortisol, and serum interleukin-6 in dogs undergoing maxillectomy or mandibulectomy". Am. J. Vet. Res.71 (9): 1019–26. doi:10.2460/ajvr.71.9.1019. PMID20807140.
Ray M, Singhi PD (August 2011). "Complex regional pain syndrome type 1 in a child with migraine". J. Child Neurol.26 (8): 1026–8. doi:10.1177/0883073811398133. PMID21572055.
"Neurogenic inflammation which activates trigeminal afferents and midbrain triggers which include serotonergic neurons of dorsal raphe are said to have a role in initiation and maintenance of migraine."
Murphy DR, Hurwitz EL, Gerrard JK, Clary R (2009). "Pain patterns and descriptions in patients with radicular pain: does the pain necessarily follow a specific dermatome?" Chiropractic & Osteopathy17 (9): doi:10.1186/1746-1340-17-9. PMID19772560. Full text
"Finally, it is known that intense and/or persistent nociceptive input can produce an expansion in the size of the receptive fields of those dorsal horn cells that receive and project nociceptive signals from the periphery."
Odell RH, Sorgnard RE (2008). "Anti-inflammatory effects of electronic signal treatment". Pain Physician11 (6): 891–907. PMID19057635. Full text
"Inflammation has been proposed as the origin of pain. Omoigui and others argue that many of our chronic pain syndromes — arthritis, low back pain, fibromyalgia, interstitial cystitis, neuropathic pain, migraine headaches, CRPS — should be reclassified as variations of inflammation-induced pain."
Grosu I, de Kock M (June 2011). "New concepts in acute pain management: strategies to prevent chronic postsurgical pain, opioid-induced hyperalgesia, and outcome measures". Anesthesiol Clin29 (2): 311–27. doi:10.1016/j.anclin.2011.04.001. PMID21620345.
"CPSP does not always or exclusively match the characteristics of neuropathic pain. [...] This concept supports a kind of algesic proinflammatory priming favoring the development of the syndrome. [...] These situations are in accordance with the hypothesis of an algesic proinflammatory priming necessary for the development of CPSP."
Wang HT, Liu W, Luo AL, Ma C, Huang YG (September 2012). "Prevalence and risk factors of chronic post-thoracotomy pain in Chinese patients from Peking Union Medical College Hospital". Chinese Medical Journal125 (17): 3033–8. PMID22932175. full text
"Based on an innovative hypothesis that the potential origin of all pain is inflammation and the inflammatory response, we tried to investigate the relationship between the extent of inflammatory response and the development of CPSP using the difference in WBC count between pre- and post-operation as a predictive factor for the first time."
Hahm E, Kulhari S, Arany PR (2012). "Targeting the pain, inflammation and immune (PII) axis: plausible rationale for LLLT". Photonics & Lasers in Medicine1 (4): 241–254. doi:10.1515/plm-2012-0033. Full text
"Inflammation has been proposed as the origin of pain. Omoigui and others argue that many of our chronic pain syndromes — arthritis, low back pain, fibromyalgia, interstitial cystitis, neuropathic pain, migraine headaches, CRPS — should be reclassified as variations of inflammation-induced pain."
Domingues RB, Teixeira AL (2009). "Migrânea e inflamação." Migrâneas cefaleias12 (3): 126–30. Full text
DiZerega GS, Traylor MM, Alphonso LS, Falcone SJ (2010). "Use of Temporary Implantable Biomaterials to Reduce Leg Pain and Back Pain in Patients with Sciatica and Lumbar Disc Herniation". Materials3 (5): 3331– 3368. doi:10.3390/ma3053331. Full text
"Inflammation and the inflammatory response is the underlying source of leg pain and back pain. The biochemical mediators of inflammation include cytokines, growth factors, neuropeptides and neurotransmitters. The following table includes biochemical inflammatory pain mediators identified in the epidural space in patients with lumbar back pain."
ChowdharyS, Rana AC, Sharma R, Gangwani S (July–Sept 2011). "Emerging interventions in the management of neuropathic pain". International journal of pharmacy & biological sciences1 (3): 356–63. Full text
"Further, various evidences indicates that during NP there is increased expression of Inos...
and one or both of Omoigui's 2007 articles are cited in each of these 3 books:
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Smith BH, Torrance N, Macfarlaine GJ (19 January 2012). "Epidemiology of back pain from the laboratory to the bus stop: Psychosocial risk factors, biological mechanisms, and interventions in population-based research". In Hasenbring MI, Rusu AC, Turk DC. Acute to Chronic Back Pain: Risk Factors, Mechanisms, and Clinical Implications. Oxford University Press. p. 10. ISBN978-0-19-955890-2. Google books
These generally reflect inflammatory processes, and show certain consistency in the biochemical profile elicited between these pain conditions, including important roles for substance P and the interleukins."
Cobo-Realpe BL, Alba-Delgado C, Bravo L, Mico JA, Berrocoso E (June 29, 2012). "Antidepressant drugs and pain". In Ru-Band Lu. Effects of antidepressants. Intech Open Science. p. 149. doi:10.5772/48022. ISBN978-953-51-0663-0. Full text
"Several common biological processes are deregulated in depression and chronic pain, producing [...] increases in plasma pro-inflammatory cytokines"
Huntjens DRH (2008). Doctoral thesis: Beyond relief : biomarkers of the anti-inflammatory effect and dose selection of COX inhibitors in early drug development. Leiden University. p. 10. ISBN9789085703136. Full text
This thesis is premised in part on Omoigui's theory, cites it seven times and in the introduction says: "...we strongly support the hypothesis proposed by OmoiGui, which states that the origin of all pain is inflammation and inflammatory response."
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I have included everything said about the theory beneath each source that I could access, except the last book, a doctoral thesis, which is premised in part on the theory and cites it on six or seven occasions. The sources I have been able to access either use Omoigui's theory as a premise in their argument or simply cite findings mentioned in his papers – none of them is an independent review of current pain theory, or a review dedicated to Omoigui's theory.
Omoigui's theory was first proposed in a book published by State-of-the-art Technologies, Incorporated, which appears to only publish books by Sota Omoigui. It was subsequently proposed in two articles published in the journal Medical Hypotheses, which does not peer-review. The theory has not been reviewed in detail by an independent authority in a peer reviewed journal or textbook. I can't support mentioning the theory in Pain until it has had considerably more authoritative review. --Anthonyhcole (talk) 18:10, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
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Hi there, I volunteer here at DRN. That doesn't mean what I say is more important and carries more weight than others. I'll try mediate this dispute and bring around an amicable resolution. Once the other two parties have posted their opening statements we'll press onwards Cabe6403(Talk•Sign)13:42, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
The theory has not been reviewed in detail by an independent authority in a peer reviewed journal or textbook as pointed out by Anthonyhcole seems to be the kicker here. From a quick peruse it seems that all the sources are primary sources and, perhaps, not up to scratch as a WP:MEDRS. Cabe6403(Talk•Sign)11:41, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
I, like Cabe6403, am a regular volunteer here at DRN and I fully concur that this material does not at this time meet the standards set by Wikipedia policy for inclusion. It may meet those standards some day, but it does not at this point in time. I recommend that this be closed as resolved against inclusion. Best regards, TransporterMan (TALK) 15:11, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
Agree that this should be closed resolved against inclusion. I am in agreement with Doc James, Anthonyhcole, Cabe4603, and TransporterMan that the sources brought for the material do not pass WP:MEDRS. Zad6816:32, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
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Talk:Stack Exchange Network
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Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Multiple users (including myself) has been trying to remove the criticism section on the article Stack Exchange Network on the grounds that it's based only on blogs and other non-reliable sources.
Discussion of the section and the sources has taken place between may-july 2012, as well as december 2012. I attempted a rewrite of the original section, but concluded that after removing everything not properly sourced, virtually nothing was left. Based on this I removed the section from the article on december 6th, and left a note on the talkpage.
The day after I removed the section, User:Yparjis reinserted a shorter version based on the sources left after my rewrite, I commented on it and questioned the sources further before removing the section yesterday (december 13th), only to be reverted again.
Other users have also tried to discuss the issue only to be reverted when they tried to remove the section.
Asked for additional opinions from other users on #wikipedia-en-help, User:Nathan2055 responded by removing the section citing Completly unreliable sources only to be reverted. User:Dreamyshade didn't comment on the sources, but mentioned that a better solution would be to incorporate the section into the rest of the article.
How do you think we can help?
Take a look at the sources and the criticism section, and see if any of us are being unreasonable. Do the sources cover the issues as described, and are the sources considered reliable in this context?
Opening comments by Yparjis
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Personally, I have been maintaining the entirety of the article. Personal contribution to the entirety of this page can be verified by looking throughout the history of this article, but let me summarize it here to facilitate everyone:
1. cleaned sources in all sections of the article
2. corrected grammar and other language issues
3. removed sections that promote the subject
4. detailed SE history
5. introduced the criticism section
In the past 3 years this article has been attacked a number of times by users , allegedly or admittedly affiliated with SE either by being directly or indirectly affiliated with SE operations. This has been either by:
1. Adding content that promotes SE with the purpose of transforming this WP article into an advertisement post for SE.
2. Removing the criticism section all together without sufficiently justifying in the Talk page.
3. Alter the criticism section in order to impair it.
This is my impression, but I will not try to make a hard case for this.
Specifically, to the case:
1. Claim that : The article in its entirety is based on non WP:V or non WP:RS
(a) "Self-published and questionable sources may be used as sources of information about themselves, usually in articles about themselves or their activities," , clearly source [15] is as such and [16] may be considered.
(b) source [20] is WP:RS and WP:V since it points to cnet.com
(c) source [15] is WP:V and obviously WP:RS since it is a verification of the claim in criticism section from the creator of the website.
sources [21] and [22] may well be removed along with the corresponding claims.
2. Undue weight, may have been true, but the section has been shortened to an extent that now is proportional its weight. Further modifications can follow, given that time permits. It currently takes up 1/4 of the article but may be shortened to 1/5, especially if other sections grow.
3. "A little Googling suggested..." , This is truly an undue claim, google searching cannot stand in a logical argument since it employs stochastic algorithms and personalised searching to present results. This only demonstrates the user's clouded judgement. Finally, I cannot adhere nor deny the validity of the claim as is, since that would increase its information content, and may disorientate from the content of the article itself.
4. Claim: "Sources are outdated". Even if outdated, sources may document criticism past and present. However, most of the sources are currently up to date.
Conclusion : Criticism section is a vital documentation wrt SE as is its history. It is based on WP:V [15,16,20] sources and WP:RS [15,16] sources and some sources that may not be WP:V. In the past there have been links to meta.stackoverflow.com that further documented the claims in the section, but have been removed upon demand of the involved users as non WP:V and WP:UNDUE ( I do not disagree with WP:UNDUE). The latter have been included to present criticism of SE based on user opinions, This may be justified due to the nature of the section itself.
Proposion: 1. Leave the criticism section , 2. engage in a constructive discussion on a source by source basis in the talk page. 3. I would appreciate if the involved users would aid in any other part of the article just to demonstrate that they are not WP:NPOV . — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yparjis (talk • contribs) 13:32, 16 December 2012 (UTC)
Opening comments by Manishearth
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As mentioned, I indeed have a COI here. In retrospect, it was indeed a bad idea to just blank the page (I _did_ plan to rewrite it with better sources, but I couldn't get the time), with said COI being in existence, but I thought that it would be OK (at the time) if I cited the relevant policies. Of course, I was wrong -- I have been semi-retired for a while now (though I never got to updating my userpage), and I'd forgotten the nuances of the policies.
A little Googling suggested that the other user involved, Yparjis, may be a "disgruntled user" (See the links here), which may create problems with NPOV. Part of the dispute was regarding the need for these links on the page. I'm not insisting that Yparjis is in fact a disgruntled user, but I do feel that these links mean something and ought to be kept there.
In the end, I find myself in agreement with Dreamyshade's comment-- having a section known as "features" with the positives and negatives of each would be a nice idea (and it's OK if some features have only negatives). I would like to help make such a section as well -- except that I'm rather bad at finding good sources (If you check my WP contributions they're more cleanup-oriented). Plus I'm extremely busy for a few weeks.
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Honestly I don't see a huge debate here; I see numerous users trying to remove a section with zero verifiability and major undue weight, and a single user repeatedly reversing multiple editor's edits. The section's just a bunch of blog posts and rants from assorted, non-noteworthy sites. It should have been blanked long ago and would have been if a single user weren't insisting on an edit war. But it's not an edit war I care to partake in, nor do I feel these debates will help much; I'm convinced the original editor will continuously watch the page and edit the criticism section back in (as they have done for months) so I'm more or less abandoning this discussion and dispute. The section shouldn't be there as-is but I have no time to edit war to correct it.--Sirtaptap (talk) 19:59, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
Talk:Stack Exchange_Network discussion
Hello, I volunteer here at DRN and I'm opening this up for discussion. Just because I volunteer doesn't mean what I say has any extra weight over any other editors but I'm coming into the dispute as an uninvolved third party and will do my best to broker a resolution. Cheers Cabe6403(Talk•Sign)10:41, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
As far as I can understand the dispute revolves around the inclusion of the criticism section of the article. When reading the discussion on the talk page this statement jumped out at me: "The current Criticism section takes up half of the page on the network, that is clearly a lot of undue weight". I would suggest that, in that case, instead of removing criticism, expand the rest of the article.
What I would suggest though, as a fair few sources are a from 2008-2009 about a website that has, no doubt, evolved since then would be to rewrite the section including only the facts that are still relevant. I doubt that some of the points people raised in 2008 still exists. Cabe6403(Talk•Sign)10:48, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
I do not completely disagree with this view. Of course criticism may be as well in the past tense, documenting what has come to pass. In my view it would be better to include these, but rephrase the related content such that it is clear that this was in the past. If a source is not longer available then we can remove the content. Regarding WP:UNDUE , the entirety of the article has 20 sources , and 6 of those sources are on criticism, with 4 of those sources being WP:V . I would not say that the article is WP:UNDUE if the Criticism section would be larger than 1/3 of the article, which is the case currently. Nonetheless, if someone wants to improve the section, I would not disagree, but complete removal of the section is in my opinion not the proper action.
Drive-by comment from another dispute resolution volunteer:
Right now the criticism section does not meet Wikipedia's standards, and I am concerned about the fact that this problem was not corrected by the first editor who read it. To be specific, he section says:
"The founder Joel Spolsky recently invited on his blog to make the site a 'welcoming, friendly place'[15], while continuing parenting users with a 'how to be civil' indication [16]."
Really? It's OK to make the parenting users claim in Wikipedia's voice as if it was an established fact? It's OK to present a blog post as if it were a reliable source? whether telling people how to to be civil (something we do a lot here at Wikipedia) is "parenting" is a PERSONAL OPINION. the personal opinion that telling users telling people how to to be civil is part of making the site a more welcoming, friendly place is equally valid.
Everybody involved in this page needs to read WP:V again and to kill obvious policy violations like the above on sight. Criticism needs to be properly sourced, verifiable, and written from a neutral point of view. --Guy Macon (talk) 17:00, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
NOTE: I moved the comment below from the middle of my comment. Yparjis, please don't do that. It violates WP:TALKO. Place your reply under the comment you are replying to. --Guy Macon (talk) 04:32, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
It is a blog post by the founder SE. How can it not be WP:RS , have you read WP:V or should I cite it once more. I Torvlads was out to say that "you know linux kernel sends usage data from every users that uses linux to NSA" on his blog that would be WP:V and WP:RS? right? and that would indeed be an established fact until denied by multiple other WP:RS Yparjis (talk) 13:41, 16 December 2012 (UTC)
First of all, please read WP:VECTOR. Actually click on the link and read the page. Then come back and give us a link to whatever you thought was at WP:VECTOR.
My mistake I meant WP:V , but that was obvious wasn't it? I made corrections only as needed , I hope I didn't break some wikipedia policy.Yparjis (talk) 19:25, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
Second, if Linus Torvalds said that, it would not be a reliable source supporting Wikipedia stating it as if it was an established fact. We could, however, report it as "in 2012 Linus Torvalds said..." You really need to go back and read WP:V and WP:RS again, keeping in mind that at least one experienced editor has told you that you are misinterpreting those policies. --Guy Macon (talk) 04:32, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
From WP:V (formerly erroneously referred to as WP:VECTOR) "Self-published expert sources may be considered reliable when produced by an established expert on the topic of the article, whose work in the relevant field has previously been published by reliable third-party publications" . Now do you think that Linus fits that category ? Maybe you should look up again what is written there before making hard statements.Yparjis (talk) 19:25, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
I am well aware of WP:V and understand it quite well, having followed all the arbcom and medcom decisions clarifying it. Any claim that Linus Torvalds makes about the linux kernel or that Jeff Atwood and Joel Spolsky make about the Stack Exchange Network need to be attributed to them, not presented in Wikipedia's voice as if they were established facts. The relevant policy is WP:INDEPENDENT. Also see WP:ABOUTSELF and WP:EXCEPTIONAL. --Guy Macon (talk) 20:00, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
You shoud not keep removing the section until all opinions have been heard. Didn't you also claim that if I undid you would ask for admin intervention, in case it was reverted. Haven't you seen the status of this WP:DRN that you have initiated? Isn't it only logical to ask for the resolution of this dispute before taking action?
I have read WP:V, WP:RS and WP:VECTOR ( meant WP:V ), could you please read from WP:VECTOR (obviously WP:V) " questionable sources on themselves " and tell under which argument sources [15,16] or even [20] are neither WP:VECTOR neither WP:RS. Yparjis (talk) 17:48, 16 December 2012 (UTC)Yparjis (talk) 19:25, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
If you have read WP:V, you have surely seen section 1? The burden is on the person who adds or restore material, and note 2 in the same article says that
Once sources that an editor believes in good faith to be sufficient have been provided, any editor who then removes the material has an obligation to articulate specific problems that would justify its exclusion from Wikipedia. All editors are then expected to help achieve consensus, and any potential problems with the text or sourcing should be fixed before the material is added back.[12]
After I removed the content I explained why, as have several other users, including another administrator after I asked him to take a look at the section in order to get an additional outside opinion. The burden is on you as the reverting user to explain why the sources are reliable, especially as there has been around 9 other users who have either removed the section, or commented upon it here or on the talkpage. As I've stated before I'm not opposed to having a criticism section, but it needs to be based on reliable sources. As for your analysis of the references above, I disagree. 15 is okay as a source as Spolsky is one of the founders; but 16 is user generated (although Spolsky is one of the posters) and there is no indication that he is parenting users. For me this is no different than the countless number of debates I imagine Jimbo has participated in on WP:CIVIL. Sources 17, 18, 19 and 22 is frankly too old to be an indication of general criticism, as they were all published within two months of the site's launch. User:Snowolf also commented on this on the talkpage[13]. The CNET article is probably the best of the references, but it doesn't say anything about criticism, only that they're operating with a new business model.
As for your proposal, there is another alternative which I have already suggested for you here; move the section into a sandbox and improve it there. If you can find good sources to build the criticism section on I have no problems putting it back in, but until then it needs to be removed. Bjelleklang - talk17:52, 16 December 2012 (UTC)
Yparjis, if, as you claim, you have read WP:VECTOR, please explain what "Vector is a MediaWiki skin and extension that was developed in 2009 with the goal of increasing accessibility. It is became the default skin for MediaWiki in 2010" has to do with what we are discussing. --Guy Macon (talk) 04:32, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
I was asked by Bjelleklang to look into this matter as an uninvolved administrator and came off with the very strong impression that the criticism section is a mixture of irrelevant info, original research and improperly sourced assertions. What user X or Y says on their blog is hardly worth mentioning and is not a proper source. SnowolfHow can I help?07:33, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
REMOVED THIS SECTION HERE as is duplicate of the section below.
you have not "articulated" yet specific problems with the sources. i am yet to cound those 9 other users that have not been WP:NPOV. Your sandbox has been an excuse to remove the section since you left it pnly for a week. The article looks good as is , I do not see the reason for putting it in a sandbox. "too odd" is not articulation. My proposition is to leave the section and improve on sources. I am currently doing this. Maybe you should help in that direction since you recognize the validity of at least a few sources, and if your WP:NPOV, which seems to be doubtful. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yparjis (talk • contribs) 07:37, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
you have not "articulated" yet specific problems with the sources. That sir, is a pure and simple lie. There are no sources supporting your OR in the criticism section as I have explained in detail. Also please note that WP:NPOV doesn't redirect to WP:GEORGOPOV. SnowolfHow can I help?08:02, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
Snowolf, please do not troll be referring to WP:GEORGOPOV . I would appreciate if you keep your temper. If you think that you have done show then this is what this page is for. You can please do it below. Yparjis (talk) 19:25, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
Both myself and Snowolf have commented on the sources, as have others and everyone agrees that they aren't good enough to support the section. The main criticism is based on blogs, which isn't really a reliable source as they may only represent the thought and opinions of individual users. I have also noticed that you tend to accuse others of not having a neutral point of view; including myself[14]. Just to set the matter straight; I was approached by another user (who has a COI and is aware of it) on IRC who first explained his concerns, and then asked for a third and neutral opinion. This is how I got into this, and this is also how Snowolf got involved. There is nothing unusual about it, editors ask for second/third opinions all the time. We're not pushing for a specific point-of-view, we're trying to get content based on bad references removed. Unlike yourself, who is actively protecting said content by reverting and adding additional bad references. Finding good references about Stack Exchange isn't that difficult, even the BBC [15] mentions them related to a story. What is difficult though, is finding reliable sources discussing criticism of the site. The absence of criticism in reliable sources doesn't mean it doesn't exist, but it does mean that we can't verify it, and thus we can't write about it the way you've done. And for what it's worth, I've begun a small rewrite of the remainder of the article based on a recent version using reliable sources only; if time permits I will add my edits to the article sometime today or tomorrow. Bjelleklang - talk08:32, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
I didn't see your comment here before I began my revision; sorry for duplicating your effort! My goal with this revision was to establish a consistent minimum requirement of non-self-published sources with professional writers and some level of editorial oversight. The cited tech blogs aren't great sources since they tend to be enthusiastic, but at least they fit that criteria. Most of the criticism sources are self-published blogs or primary sources so they do not qualify; the "Simple Talk" post does seem to fit the criteria, but the post is discussing StackOverflow in 2008, before Stack Exchange 1.0 or 2.0 existed. I believe that post would be OK to cite on Stack Overflow, but it's not relevant enough for this article. Dreamyshade (talk) 03:54, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
All of the issues I listed in my "Drive-by comment from another dispute resolution volunteer" have been corrected, and the article looks pretty good.. --Guy Macon (talk) 00:09, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
Hello, as you can see in the beginning I was the user who originally removed the section per the request in IRC. I'm also a volunteer here and since there is no volunteer here at the moment I'd like to pose a question. Now that the section has been updated (or merged apparently since I can't find it) and and the main editor arguing for it's replacement has retired, can we archive this discussion as a success? --Nathan2055talk - contribs05:05, 22 December 2012 (UTC)
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Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
I am reporting a violation of AGF.
I am an unregistered user who recently nominated an article for deletion. The rationale was valid, being that the article was created by a vandal. In the AfD discussion page, User Zeng8r called it "bogus" while also suggesting that I am the vandal that created the article.
Have you tried to resolve this previously?
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How do you think we can help?
I am unregistered therefore I am unfamiliar with the details of how WP works although I do understand some of its policies. I think it could be made clear, at least to zeng8r, that it was not proper to use the word "bogus" to describe my WP work, nor to insinuate that I am a vandal and/or a sockpuppet. I, of course, am open to being further educated on WP policies etc. if I am doing something wrong.
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