Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/French fries/archive1

A well-written article on a hunger-inducing topic. (Ibaranoff24 04:41, 26 January 2006 (UTC))[reply]

  • Very short lead section
  • Citations should be added and the dictionary citations should be changed
  • Poor grammer throughout (eg. "Some feel that the word "french" in "french fries" is refers to...")
  • Lots of repetition in the Name and History sections.
  • With a good introduction, History should probably be the first section.
I agree with most of these objections. However, I don't think the topic is trivial. Fried potatoes are part of just about every cuisine, worldwide. If the article were of a higher quality, it would be worthy of 'featured article' status. Zeno Izen 17:39, 17 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]