Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Guitar/archive1

Guitar

Partly self-nom (I have expanded the Inlays section, but the rest of the article isn't mine.) (However, this could be 'improved' by removing some of the too many external links.)

Object Very far from FA status. Should make a peer review. For the following reasons
- The article is missing 'national guitar'
- The lists Significant Guitarists, Guitar makers and Guitar technique should be transferred to daughter articles and a summary with overview should replace them.
- Guitar etc. is not an encyclopedic style
- Acoustic and electric guitars should be change into something like Types of guitars
- Expand Guitar amplifier
- Expand Guitar festivals
- Reduce the number of external links
- I think the article could be improved by linking the different style of acoustic and electric guitars with significant guitarists who used them.

Vb 13:39, 1 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Object. The image Image:Super400.jpg has no source information. --Carnildo 22:51, 1 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Object the article is too much of a list, lead should be longer and consist of only 2-3 paragraphs. =Nichalp «Talk»= 07:14, 3 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Object I cannot see including an article as featured when it doesn't meet the three pillars, namely Verifiability. Alan.ca 10:39, 21 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]