Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Obsessed (Olivia Rodrigo song)/archive1

Obsessed (Olivia Rodrigo song)

Featured article candidates/Obsessed (Olivia Rodrigo song)/archive1

Nominator(s): N Ø 11:41, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Moving onto a (somewhat?) bigger hit from Guts to spice things up, here is "Obsessed" from the album's deluxe edition. The song was a major highlight from her Guts World Tour and a fan-favorite long before she finally got around to releasing it as a single. There is something about Rodrigo's music that can make one feel like an angsty teenager no matter how old they are, and this song is a good example of that! I am sure reading it will be just as fun as it was writing it. Thanks a lot to everyone who will take the time to give their feedback here.N Ø 11:41, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

NegativeMP1

I'll review this one as compensation for failing to review Can't Catch Me Now when it was at FAC. I'll get to this when I clear out the backlog of other articles I'm reviewing at the moment, shouldn't take any more than a few days. λ NegativeMP1 22:52, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Medxvo

"two minutes and 50 seconds long" - "2 minutes and 50 seconds long" / "two minutes and fifty seconds long"—MOS:NUMNOTES
"He plays guitar; St. Vincent plays guitar; and Garret Ray plays drums" - "played"?
"Obsessed" is also about insecurity, channeling the negative inner voice in teenagers' minds and their persistent obsessive and envious thoughts" - shouldn't there be an oxford comma here? otherwise it's kind of confusing
"described "Obsessed" as a "banger" ..... added that it was a "banger" like Katy Perry's song ..." - too many bangers here? :d
"Miss Still His 'Closest Friend'" - "Miss Still His 'Closest Friend'"
"It concludes with her cleaning up ..." - "The video concludes with her cleaning up ..."
"On the Guts World Tour, "Obsessed" appears ..." - "On the Guts World Tour (2024–2025), "Obsessed" appears
"the "most badass moment" ..." - "the show's "most badass moment" ..."
Why are we not including the certifications in the lead?
Check if you can use this source instead of the YouTube reference

That's all I've got, hope the comments are helpful. Best of luck! Medxvo (talk) 17:45, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much for the helpful comments! All of these should be addressed now. I hope you are enjoying the weekend.--N Ø 06:29, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Medxvo (talk) 15:54, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

""Obsessed" became Rodrigo's seventh song to reach the top 10 on the Pop Airplay chart and ninth on the Hot Rock & Alternative Songs chart. " - given that these charts don't have "country-specific" names and you just named a load of different countries, maybe specify that these two charts are American.....?
"Dan Nigro produced every single track on it" - the word "single" is redundant and can be removed
"12 of the 25 songs recorded made it onto the standard edition of Guts" - probably not technically wrong but I always think that a sentence starting with a number written in digit form doesn't look great. Any way to reword....?
"St. Vincent played guitar" - link St. Vincent, who hasn't been mentioned at this point
"It later incorporates ripped guitars, warped vocals" - not sure what either of these adjectives means in this context, is there a link or an alternative explanation?

There is no relevant wiktionary entry on either, unfortunately. I have swapped out "warped vocals" for "distorted vocals", but replacing "ripped" with "shredded" like the Billboard Philippines source states might hurt rather than help so I have kept the current wording.

"He and the Official Charts Company's George Griffiths described "Obsessed" as a "banger"" => "He and the Official Charts Company's George Griffiths both described "Obsessed" as a "banger""
"it was a good song like Katy Perry's "I Kissed A Girl" (2008) and Charli XCX's album Sucker (2014)." - this wording is a little odd - the writer thought that "Sucker" (an album) was "a good song".....?
Not critical to this review, but bear in mind that the various present tense verbs describing her performances on the Guts tour will need to be changed to past tense once the tour ends
That is what I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:14, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the great review, as always, ChrisTheDude. All addressed!--N Ø 07:08, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:24, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]