Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Xbox 360/archive2

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted by Ucucha 01:53, 13 January 2012 [1].

Xbox 360

Nominator(s): TrebleSeven (talk) 15:12, 12 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think this article should be really for FAC now. It has tons of information of the page, a brilliant lead, and lots of sources. It has improved drastically since it's last nomination in 2007, and I think this article really does have the potential to go through. TrebleSeven (talk) 15:12, 12 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi TrebelSeven and welcome to FAC! Have you contacted the primary editors on this article to see if they think it is ready for FAC, as is required? Also, I see quite a few problems with this article that make me think it is not ready for FAC, including a cleanup banner in one section, missing references in several places, references missing information, etc. I would recommend that this nomination be withdrawn until these problems have been dealt with. Dana boomer (talk) 15:55, 12 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Please withdraw: there's a Refimprove template, which, if this was a GAN, would've been a quick fail. --Sp33dyphil ©^hat_ontributions 23:50, 12 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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