Wikipedia:Featured article review/2004 Atlantic hurricane season/archive1

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The article was removed by Joelr31 15:55, 31 January 2009 [1].

2004 Atlantic hurricane season

Review commentary

WikiProject, User:Cyrius, and User:Golbez notified.

The article was featured on October 15, 2006.

The lead is too short.
Most of the article is unsourced, including entire sections. The Records and notable events, in particular, sticks out, with unsoured numerical facts.
The article lacks significant information; the Deaths and damage is only a few sentences long, even though the season was one of the most destructive in history.
Many individual storm sections are not comprehensiveness.
The article is sourced almost exclusively to the National Hurricane Center, with few secondary sources.
Several references are not formatted properly.

–Juliancolton ^Happy ^Holidays 01:23, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

In regard to "sourced almost exclusively to the NHC", why is this a problem? --Golbez (talk) 01:42, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I agree there are too many problems for this to be featured. I personally think the article should be re-constructed along the lines of the other featured seasons from the time period (I am working on one such article now). ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 22:06, 21 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Please no, that format is awful. Titoxd^{(?!? - cool stuff)} 19:42, 24 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

FARC commentary

Suggested FA criteria concerns are lead, citations, and comprehensiveness. Joelito (talk) 22:30, 13 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Remove per above comments by Juliancolton (talk · contribs). Cirt (talk) 10:58, 16 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Remove 1c YellowMonkey (click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!) 05:14, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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