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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Dabomb87 23:31, 25 February 2011 [1].

2010 IIHF World Championship rosters

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Nominator(s): Salavat (talk) 12:29, 7 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Well, same as the 2009 list, and basically the same as the 2007 and 2008, here is the 2010 list. Salavat (talk) 12:29, 7 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 17:20, 10 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
*Link "International Ice Hockey Federation" in the lead.
  • Lead caption - (1) "Arrival of the winning..." (rather than champion) would be better (2) Avoid starting sentences with numbers, e.g. "2010 was..."
  • "A country that had selected fewer than the maximum allowed must have chosen the .." instead of "must have chosen" maybe "were required to choose..."?
  • "to select an additional two players to their roster" this may be an ENGVAR thing but in BritEng we don't "select ... to" we "add ... to" so it'd be "to add an additional two players to their roster"
  • "a maximum of 25 players" no need to repeat players.
  • "Dimitrij Kotschnew " no j in our article.
  • Three Italians with "De" in their surname, actually should be "de" in the surname.
  • ", the sixth time they had done so" why not just "for the sixth time."?
  • "the player would have had to play two " -> "the player was required to have played two..."
  • Two out of four paras in the lead talk about the inclusion critieria and only one talks about the players themselves. Do you consider this a reasonable split?
  • This format has been used on all three previous lists. Both paragraphs dont talk about inclusion criteria, won is basically how a country goes about forming the team for the tournament whereas the other is about the eligibility of a player who wants to play for a certain country. The last paragraph could be expanded if you think it is necessary for example I could mention the players who were included in the Media All-Star team and I could also put a sentence in about Dennis Endras being the first German to be awarded MVP. Salavat (talk) 17:07, 10 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why do we have bold links in the tables? Why aren't the table's contents unbold?
  • Johan Auvitu seems to be Yohann according to us?
  • Pierre-Edouard Bellemare is missing his acute accent on the E of Edouard.
  • Same for the first e in the surname of Loïc Lamperier.
  • Did Ferhi and Lherny really have identical save %?
  • Nicola Fantanive->Fontanive.

The Rambling Man (talk) 18:39, 9 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 17:18, 16 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
*Min is really Min:sec isn't it?
  • And so on. There's a weird tense thing going on in the lead. The criteria are historical so should be referred to in the past.
  • My sense of different tenses is pretty shocking so I read through it and changed a sentence but I couldnt see anything else. Sentence I changed was third paragraph, first sentence. Salavat (talk) 17:07, 10 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The three different tables block out different items, one for statistics, one for positions, and one for the two general items that need explaining. Format has been added to all references mentioned. Salavat (talk) 04:20, 13 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Not that I know of. I'm so far behind that I didn't realize it had been removed.--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 16:10, 17 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
As I understand it, alt text is part of the MOS, so a list that didn't have alt text for its images would be in violation of criterion #5. Powers T 23:53, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Well whether its required or not ive gone and added it in. Salavat (talk) 07:28, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


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