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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

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Five Finger Death Punch discography

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Nominator(s): Pantera5FDP (talk) 04:52, 14 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it now meets featured list criteria. Pantera5FDP (talk) 04:52, 14 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 11:23, 19 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • Lead image caption doesn't need a full stop.
  • "currently" see WP:ASOF.
  • Always curious how a discography can contain videos. Would that not exist in a videography?
  • "The band was started in'.... odd turn of phrase, perhaps "was founded... " or "was formed in..."
  • "The Way of the Fist " why isn't this linked in the lead?
  • " Guitarist Darrell Roberts " just "Roberts".
  • Bitch We Have A Problem is in italics in our article while Family Values isn't, yet both are tour titles. Consistency needed, even if it needs fixes outside this list.
  • " at number 7 on " seven.
  • " It also did well in other countries" hate "did" maybe "also charted well"?
  • 3, 6, 14 -> three, six, fourteen.
  • "II^ This single was only released digitally through iTunes." no ref?
  • What are these "Other appearances"? not mentioned in the lead, infobox and certainly not explained adequately.
  • Check ref titles for compliance with WP:DASH.
  • Ref 8 not direct ref, just links to a database.
  • What makes pasta padre.com a reliable source?

The Rambling Man (talk) 18:37, 14 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from NapHit (talk) 22:11, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "The band began their rise to fame with their debut album The Way of the Fist in 2007." that sentence needs a reference, and would probably not use rise to fame as its POV, 107 on billboard does indicate rising to fame as the sentence suggests
  • References should come after punctuation, you have two (refs 5 and 6) which don't
  • link billboard 200 on first usage
  • last sentence needs a reference
  • The table method you're using is outdated, we tend to use the table method displayed here for discography's now, as it complies with MOS:DTT and WP:ACCESS, that will need changing

NapHit (talk) 18:43, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Fair enough, one more comment ref 16 the hyphen should be an en dash. NapHit (talk) 16:26, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, everything is fixed. Pantera5FDP (talk) 20:49, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Nearly I've fixed the first two tables to meet MOS:DTT but the ones below do not, you'll need to add row and col scopes to make them comply. NapHit (talk) 11:18, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I believe I have fixed it. Pantera5FDP (talk) 21:14, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Is it fine to use a YouTube video as a citation per WP:YT?
  • Not sure why a forum is used for certain Billboard citations. For instance, I searched Ref 24's title and got a direct link to the Billboard.biz website. Should do the same for Ref 25.

Comments

  • "joined shortly after.[1] After searching for" – Unnecessary repetition. Please reword.
  • "...was released in 2007. The album peaked..." – Consider combining these sentences.
  • The lead appears to be written like a history section. It could be made clearer that these events are presented in chronological order.
  • Is there a reason why this article doesn't employ sortable tables?
  • "This single was only released in the United Kingdom." – Please provide links to both uses of this note. This can be done, for example, by using {{note label}}.

I'm still uncomfortable with the placement of the "'—' denotes releases that did not chart or were not released in that country" note in regard to accessibility, but as this objection did not garner consensus support in the past, I won't let it keep me from supporting. I may return with more comments. Goodraise 11:14, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • What makes KornSpace.com a reliable source? Who is the publisher?
  • What makes Metal Hammer a reliable source? Who is the publisher? (Could it be Future Publishing?)
  • Reference titles aren't arbitrary. For instance, I don't see "Australian charts portal" anywhere on the linked page.
  • I'm fairly certain that Chart Stats shouldn't be considered a reliable source. It will have to be replaced.
  • Refs. 19–21 are incorrectly cited. See WP:SAYWHEREYOUGOTIT. Furthermore, the linked pages (on canadianrockalt.blogspot.de) do not strike me as reliable.

I'm not all the way through yet, but at this point, I'll have to oppose. Goodraise 21:23, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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