Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Grammy Award for Best Long Form Music Video/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by The Rambling Man 16:35, 27 June 2011 [1].
Grammy Award for Best Long Form Music Video (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Crystal Clear x3 22:07, 14 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it meets the criteria. Crystal Clear x3 22:07, 14 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Resolved comments from Adabow (talk · contribs) 02:53, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply] |
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:*There is one dablink and several external link errors.
Adabow (talk · contribs) 01:46, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 16:43, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply] |
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The Rambling Man (talk) 17:54, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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- Comments: References look good. You should use the sortname template in the Performing artist(s) column so that artists sort by last name rather than first name. Also, be sure to watch capitalization based on Manual of Style (see my edit to the list for examples). I imagine some of the nominated works need to be linked. At least on my browser, one or two additional images could be displayed along the side. More thorough review to follow. --Another Believer (Talk) 16:38, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for your edits to the article and advice. I have added several more images to the 'recipients' sections and used sortname in the performing artists column. Crystal Clear x3 20:59, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments: I think it looks very good, but there are some things to do...
In 1993, the name of the video is Diva not Drive
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I think Madonna's videos are very well representated in wikipedia, I believe that you could find the link to all of them.
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In 1998, Steve Purcell is credited as director, along Morissette.
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Jaespinoza (talk) 04:42, 17 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for your input. I have corrected the above problems. Crystal Clear x3 05:24, 17 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Jaespinoza (talk) 23:09, 17 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for your input. I have corrected the above problems. Crystal Clear x3 05:24, 17 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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"The several honored categories are presented...". The grammar here doesn't seem to be as good as what is usually in these Grammy Award lists. I looked at the Short Form list for an example, and it started a similar sentence with "Honors in several categories are presented...". I admire the fact that you're looking for additional improvement in this series of lists, but in this case I think a fix was applied to something that wasn't broken.
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Check the sorting in the Performing artist(s) column. Huey Lewis and the News doesn't seem to be sorting in the proper alphabetical order.Giants2008 (27 and counting) 01:38, 23 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I was not sure how to properly correct that (I tried to sort it like : Huey Lewis and the News - Huey Lewis| and the News) so I just removed the sort template and put them in link brackets. Crystal Clear x3 05:04, 23 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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- I think it will be helpful if you add below the images for which video they got the award. done
- Try archiving the pdf links, they disappear too soon. ..........I do not know how to do that
- The Work column is not sorting alphabetically. The Beatles Love – All Together Now is coming in the second position. fixed
- En-dash for The Girlie Show - Live Down Under. done
- En-dash for Trapped in the Closet Chapters 13-22 done
- En-dash for "Charles Dutoit & The Montreal Symphony Orchestra - The Planets" done
- This is confusing. --> Ella Fitzgerald – American Masters: Ella Fitzgerald – Something to Live For. Isnt the videos name American Masters: Ella Fitzgerald – Something to Live For? So the whole name should be italicized. fixed
- Have you checked whether all video names are wikilinked?
........double checking now Crystal Clear x3 21:55, 19 June 2011 (UTC)done Crystal Clear x3 01:13, 20 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
— Legolas (talk2me) 10:47, 19 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Support, great work and as for archiving the links, I would take that request off-FLC, as it does not hinder me in supporting the article. — Legolas (talk2me) 06:02, 20 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 08:39, 27 June 2011 (UTC)[reply] |
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Comments from Cheesy (only a few)
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done After that, consider my vote a support. Great work. That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 16:11, 26 June 2011 (UTC)[reply] |
- Support - all looks OK to me -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 14:53, 27 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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