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Latin Grammy Trustees Award

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Nominator(s): Erick (talk) 21:00, 5 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

With my FLC for Billboard Latin Music Hall of Fame gaining enough supports, I am now nominating this article for FL. Continuing on with my FLC for Latin music, this list is different in that the accolade is for the behind the scenes guys (producers, engineers, etc.). This FLC is based on the Latin Grammy Lifetime Achievement Award which I got FL two years ago. I look forward to your comments. Erick (talk) 21:00, 5 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from BeatlesLedTV (talk) 20:54, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
;Comments from BeatlesLedTV
  • Lead's first sentence needs a ref
  • "Since 2005, the Trustees Awards has been presented to more than recipients" – more than what?
  • Lead should honestly be a little longer. The second "paragraph" only has one sentence
  • Link every country mentioned in the lead
  • Table needs scope cols (you have scope rows but not cols)
  • Link Billboard in ref 1
  • Add author to ref 2
  • Check out and fix these refs

That's all I got. Great job! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 02:17, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@BeatlesLedTV: Thanks for the comments. How does it look now? Erick (talk) 15:27, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah looks better. Also make sure the link to the awards ceremonies aren't redirects. Right now they are all "Latin Grammys of xxxx" instead of "xx Annual Latin Grammy Awards". BeatlesLedTV (talk) 16:02, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@BeatlesLedTV: Done. Erick (talk) 20:32, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Aoba47
  • For this sentence (This can include producers, songwriters, composers, record label executives, and journalists.), I would avoid using “This” in this format”. Maybe something like: “It can be award to…) or (Recepients can include…) to avoid this use of “this”.
  • For this part (a string of galas just prior to the annual Latin Grammy Awards ceremony.), I do not think that “just” is needed as “prior” works on its own and conveys the same meaning in my opinion.
  • I am not sure about the lead’s second paragraph. It seems like it could be combined with the first paragraph.
  • The last sentence of the first paragraph and the first and second sentences of the second paragraph have the same sentence construction (i.e. the “presented” verbage). I would revise to avoid the repetition of this word if possible.
  • I was a little confused by the notability of this sentence (Pierre Cossette was also the recipient of the Grammy Trustees Award in 1995.). Is he the only person to ever receive both? If so, then please clarify this. It seems rather out-of-place in the lead without the full context.
  • You link the countries in the lead, but not in the table. Just wanted to raise this to your attention.
  • According to the infobox, the award as last given in 2017. The lead does not mention that the award is no longer given or why it was discontinued. Can you please address this in the lead?

Wonderful work with this list. Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to support this for promotion. If possible, I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide some comments on my current FAC (Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/All Money Is Legal/archive1). Either way, good luck with this, and have a great start of your week. Aoba47 (talk) 22:54, 26 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: I believe I have addressed your issues. The last awarded is just the last time they gave the award. It hasn't been discontinued. Erick (talk) 21:24, 10 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Aoba47: Thanks for the comments. I have fixed the issues you brought up. Erick (talk) 17:36, 12 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Yashthepunisher
  • The country names should be delinked per WP:OLINK.
  • "Latin Academy of Recording Arts & Sciences" in the general reference is piped to a redirect.
  • You can mention the total number of times the award has been given, in the infobox.

Yashthepunisher (talk) 17:36, 8 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Yashthepunisher: Addressed everything but the last point. I don't see a parameter on the template for the number of times it has been awarded. Erick (talk) 04:24, 22 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
You can take a clue from here. Yashthepunisher (talk) 10:52, 22 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Yashthepunisher: I've added the number of times awarded. Erick (talk) 16:20, 24 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 15:51, 26 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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