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The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 12:25, 29 April 2024 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of Arizona Cardinals first-round draft picks

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List of Arizona Cardinals first-round draft picks (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Hey man im josh (talk) 13:56, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This will be list #8 for me in this series and, hopefully, #28 in the series to be promoted. One of the charter members of the NFL and the oldest continuously run professional football franchise, this most resembles and copies the format of my previous nominations of List of Chicago Bears first-round draft picks (a fellow charter member and second oldest franchise) and List of Detroit Lions first-round draft picks (fifth oldest franchise). As always, I will do my best to response quickly to address any and all concerns that are brought up. Hey man im josh (talk) 13:56, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Pseud 14

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  • In 1960, the team moved to St. Louis -- I think it would be better to write (and link) as St. Louis, Missouri
  • From 1947 through 1958 the NFL designated -- comma after 1958
  • In the table notes: Pick used in 1989 supplemental draft. -- I would remove the period
  • That's all from me. Solid work as always. Pseud 14 (talk) 15:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Image review: Passed

I've implemented all of your suggestions. Thanks so much for taking the time to review and provide feedback @Pseud 14! Hey man im josh (talk) 18:06, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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  • "The team was established [...] and are the" => "The team was established [...] and is the", surely?
  • "where they've played their home games since" => "where they have played their home games since"
  • Jimmy Lawrence's name is spelt incorrectly in the lead
  • Lottery is spelt incorrectly on the 1958 row
  • "Arizona received the Washington Redskins's 1977 first-round" => "Arizona received the Washington Redskins' 1977 first-round"
  • That's it. Great work as ever, Josh!! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:10, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks for the feedback @ChrisTheDude! I've made the suggested changes and boy do I feel silly about the lottery and "Redskins's" one! Hey man im josh (talk) 19:16, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:09, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Source review

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I will taking ref numbers from this revision [2]. At first glance all refs seem to be from relaible sources. I'll begin manually checking themQuestions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 16:19, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  1. Good
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  28. Good
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  30. Good
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  34. Good
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  48. Good
  49. Good
  50. Good Consider archiving
  51. Good
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  57. Good
  58. Good
  59. Good
  60. Don't have a Washington Post subscription I'll have to check the WP:LIBRARY. Regardless consider archiving it
  61. Good
  62. Good. Consider archiving
  63. Good
  64. Good
  65. Good
  66. Good
  67. So I ran out of free articles while checking. So I'll have to check the library again
  68. I initially thought that this was a tabloid sun but unrelated so good. Consider archiving it
  69. Good
  70. Good
  71. Good
  72. Good
  73. Good
  74. Good

Good job on this. I'll try and get access to those sources I dont have to finish the review. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:50, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the very thorough review @OlifanofmrTennant. All references are archived, including reference 67, which should allow you to view the source if you go to the archived version. Hey man im josh (talk) 18:11, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hey @OlifanofmrTennant: Just wanted to confirm whether the source review has been passed or not. As mentioned, all sources should be accessible to you via archive links now. Hey man im josh (talk) 18:55, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support Sorry totally missed you first ping, but yes pass. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 19:13, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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