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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:Matthewedwards 15:56, 25 October 2008 [1].

List of D.Gray-man chapters

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previous FLC (20:26, 11 October 2008)

Relisting nomination as the previous one did not garner enough comments. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 07:15, 12 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support as per previous nomination. Dabomb87 (talk) 14:12, 12 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • "The series was put on hiatus twice in that country due to Hoshino falling ill; however, the series continued a few weeks later" seems a bit ackward, maybe something "The series was put on hiatus twice in that country due to Hoshino falling ill; each hiatus lasted a few weeks." or maybe give more specific details on the two hiatus (start/end) if available?
  • "Collected volumes" should probably be tankōbon volumes to match header below (or visa versa). * "is being sold in over ten other countries" - in English, Japanese, or regional languages?
  • "the first chapter appearing on May 2, 2006" - appeared?
  • It seems like this part "D.Gray-man has been licensed for an English language release in North America by Viz Media and is being sold in over ten other countries" should come after the parts talking about the Shueisha volumes, and before the lead into to Viz serializing the series.
  • As with episode list, the "See Also" section seems redundant to the template
  • Sources could use some clean up, in the Shueisha sources the "｜ 星野　桂｜ ジャンプコミックス｜BOOKNAVI｜集英社" part seems extraneous
  • Amazon source (#28) needs clean up to remove ref and extraneous parts - should just be amazon.com/dp/ASIN
  • English tag seems unneeded on an EL, that's a given if not specifically stated otherwise :);

-- Collectonian (talk · contribs) 02:06, 23 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Think that's it. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 17:18, 23 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support main issues all addressed and can't see any other faults. Well sourced and summaries are brief but complete. -- Collectonian (talk · contribs) 17:27, 23 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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