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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 29 July 2024 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of Mercedes-EQ vehicles

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Nominator(s): 750h+ 17:25, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This is my first featured list nomination. This is a list of all the Mercedes-EQ models, including the production and concept models. If this gets promoted, it will be the first automobile featured list. Thanks, and enjoy the read! 750h+ 17:25, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey man im josh

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I'll do a larger review later on, but for now I want to point out some accessibility issues.

  • You used ! rowspan="1" when you should have used ! scope="row". For instances where a row span would only be 1, do not use the rowspan parameter. For instances where you do need to specify a rowspan, you would do ! scope="rowgroup" rowspan="2".
  • Add column scopes
  • Tables needs a title

Again, I'll be back to a larger review later on. Hey man im josh (talk) 17:35, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

those should be addressed now 750h+ 17:51, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Source review: Passed

  • Reliable enough for the information being cited
  • Consistent date formatting
  • Consistent and proper reference formatting
  • Appropriate wikilinks where applicable
  • Spot checks on 15 sources match what they are being cited for

Feedback:

  • Consider adding the {{Use dmy dates|July 2024}} template to the top of the article under the short description in case anybody else adds references later on and they are not as careful as you've been
done
  • Why is there no body style listed for the concept vehicles?
i couldn’t find any references
  • Ref columns should be unsortable
done
  • Article needs a short description, even if set to none
done
done
  • Ref 16 – Add author and USA Today as the agency
done
  • Ref 20 – Add author
done
  • Ref 38 – Add author
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  • Ref 46 – Add author
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That's what I've got, good stuff! Please ping me when you reply. Hey man im josh (talk) 14:48, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

thanks! All addressed, @Hey man im josh:. 750h+ 15:13, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Hey man im josh (talk) 15:15, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Much thanks for the review! 750h+ 15:15, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Comments from Steelkamp

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  • Should the last sentence of the lead have a reference?
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  • Is it necessary to include "where various other electric cars—including the Opel Ampera-e and a redesigned Renault Zoe—debuted"? This article should really be focusing on Mercedes-EQ, and not feature unrelated cars prominently in the lead.
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  • Why does the concept vehicles table not have a body style row?
I couldn't find any good references for some of the classes, so I just didn't add them
  • Some websites in the citations aren't wikilinked. E.g. two instances of CNET and three instances of The Verge. There might be some others I haven't noticed.
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  • Specifying a px size for images should generally not be done as per MOS:IMGSIZE. It's fine for the images in the table (which is given as an exception in MOS:IMGSIZE), but for the lead image, the fixed px size (340px) should be replaced with upright=1.5.
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That's all. Steelkamp (talk) 08:48, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

All have been addressed. Thanks for the review, @Steelkamp:. 750h+ 10:21, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Steelkamp (talk) 14:59, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you so much! 750h+ 15:01, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@FLC director and delegates: hope this isn't bugging but will there be an image review? 750h+ 05:33, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Featured list candidates don't strictly need an image review, unlike FAC, although someone can do an image review if they so choose. (not a FLC director or delegate) Steelkamp (talk) 11:44, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Oh ok. 750h+ 12:35, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That said, this is pretty image-heavy in an area that I'm not well familiar with, so I'd prefer one. The reason it's not "required" is due to a lack of people actually doing them. I'd give this a pass on the image review though- all commons, all self-uploads by... 3 people? Looks like a whole world of car photography I didn't know we had people doing. --PresN 22:47, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the pass! 750h+ 23:47, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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