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List of Music Bank Chart winners (2020)

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Nominator(s): EN-Jungwon 09:15, 18 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This article contains a list of winners of one of South Korea's music programs Music Bank in 2020. I have been working on this article for almost a year now. It has been copy edited and peer reviewed and I believe that it now meets the featured list criteria. This will be my first FL nomination so I hope to do well on this nomination.

Special thanks to Jonesey95 who copy edited this article and Kavyansh.Singh for participating in the peer review. EN-Jungwon 09:15, 18 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Image review — Pass

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Drive-by comment

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Is there a reason why the title is List of Music Bank Chart winners rather than List of Music Bank Chart number ones? We wouldn't have an article entitled "List of Billboard Hot 100 winners", for example...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:02, 19 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I had followed the name of another similar article "List of Inkigayo Chart winners (2020)". I think it's mainly because the artist gets a trophy if their song is number one on the chart. EN-Jungwon 10:53, 19 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:16, 29 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
====Further comments====
  • "The score for domestic online music services is calculated using data from Melon, Bugs, Genie Music, Naver Vibe and Soribada. Starting in November, Soribada was replaced by Flo" - this doesn't seem quite right, as the first bit is in the present tense but includes Soribada, which you then go on to say is no longer used. Maybe try "The score for domestic online music services is calculated using data from a number of services including Melon, Bugs, Genie Music and Naver Vibe. Soribada was also used until November when it was replaced by Flo."
    • Replaced with "The score for domestic online music services is calculated using data from Melon, Bugs, Genie Music and Naver Vibe. Soribada was also used until November when it was replaced by Flo."
  • "despite the lack of promotional activities on music programs." - source?
    • Removed.
  • "Red Velvet's sub-unit Red Velvet – Irene & Seulgi received their first music show win" - source for it being their first?
    • Done.
  • "Girl group (G)I-dle received their first Music Bank trophy" - source for it being their first?
    • Done.
  • "NCT's sub-units NCT Dream and NCT U won their first Music Bank award" - awards should be plural, also sources for them being their first?
    • Removed as I could not find any sources, but checking back the the list of winners from the previos years confirms that this is their first wins on this show.
  • "SF9 (top) and NCT Dream (bottom) received their first broadcast channel music show wins" - source?
    • Source added for SF9. Removed NCT Dream per above.
  • "Zico of Block B (left) and Hwasa of Mamamoo (right) received their first Music Bank awards" - source?
    • Source added for Zico. Removed Hwasa.
  • I'm a bit confused by the August 7/14 situation. You say that episode 1040 was actually broadcast on August 14, but then you list a separate winner on the row below which you say was announced on the website. So were two winners announced for August 14? And no winner for August 7?
  • All the best, ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    Regarding the August 7 14 situation. The episode 1040 was recorded on August 7 but due to some scheduling conflict it was broadcasted a week later on August 14. So during the show on August 14 the winner of August 7 was announced and the winner of August 14 was announced on their website later that day. I hope this made it a bit clear. EN-Jungwon 08:56, 23 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude I have implemented the changes that you have requested. Thank you for reviewing this article. Happy editing and merry christmas. EN-Jungwon 14:58, 24 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Gerald Waldo Luis

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Additionally, this is a source pass; did spotchecks earlier this week and I can't find any inaccuracies. GeraldWL 07:42, 20 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from GeraldWL 16:50, 20 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
* I think the title is self-explanatory, so the short description can be changed to "none"
    • Done.
  • At first glance, paragraph 2 and 3 are too short and warrants a merge.
    • Merged.
  • "number of times the song"-- or the single?
    • Fixed.
  • "Soribada was also used until November"-- what year?
    • Fixed.
  • I think you can digitize the numbers: thirty-one to 31, twenty-four to 24, and twelve to 12. This is because some readers may find difficulty in reading numbers 10 and up in text.
    • Fixed.
  • I'm confused by what note c means, perhaps it can be extended for clarification?
    • Removed.
@Gerald Waldo Luis thank you for your comments. I have made the changes you you have suggested. -- EN-Jungwon 13:56, 20 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support by Nkon21

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Comments from TRM

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  • I find the lead rather lightweight. I know ChrisTheDude has written literally more than 100 of these kinds of lists, perhaps you could work with him to expand the lead a little bit. It would be nice to have a little bit of the history of the chart there as well as some more facts about the artists etc.
    • Done. Expanded from 209 words to 414 words.
  • "digital performance on domestic online music services" what does that mean, number of downloads/streams/combination?
  • I think it would be informative to actually describe exactly how the points system works.
    • Unfortunately I was unable to find reliable sources that explains how it works. The only sources I found were from unreliable websites.
  • "Exo member Suho received his first music show award..." reference?
    • Done.
  • The table is sortable so every linked item in the table should linked every time.
    • Done.
  • "Red Velvet – Irene & Seulgi" (in the image caption) should use an en-dash, not a hyphen.
    • Done.
  • Ref 1 also has a spaced hyphen which should be an endash.
    • Done.

That's it on a quick pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 17:15, 21 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the suggestions @The Rambling Man. Apologies for the late reply. I haven't been feeling well these days and real life has been keeping me busy. I have made most of the changes you suggested. I am working on the lead in my sandbox and will try to get back to you before the end of the month. Thank you. -- EN-Jungwon 11:27, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man, mostly done. The lead needs a lot of copyediting. -- EN-Jungwon 07:07, 2 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 00:14, 8 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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