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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Matthewedwards 02:04, 10 March 2009 [1].

List of Popotan episodes

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Nominator(s): じんない
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I believe the last of any signifigant issues have now been resolved. じんない 20:10, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from NocturneNoir

Comments from NocturneNoir (talk · contribs)

  • "The DVD box cover of the Popotan anime." from the caption, is not a sentence.
  • "The anime, which features character designs by Haruka Sakurai based on the original concept by Akio Watanabe[2][3] under the alias of Poyoyon Rock,[4][5] was developed by Shaft, directed and storyboarded by Shinichiro Kimura, and written by Jukki Hanada." is very convoluted. Try splitting it up into multiple sentences.
  • "They originally aired on TBS's satellite station BS-i from July 17, 2003 through October 2, 2003" needs a comma before and after BS-i.
  • "From August 15, 2003 through August 17, 2003 the first episode of Popotan, "Secret House", was shown for free at Ishimaru Electronics in Japan." needs a comma after the second 2003 and personally, I would use "to" instead of "through" or just exchange the whole intro for "Between August 15 and August 17, 2003,".
  • "At the same time Bandai released DVDs without the figurines at a lower cost." Needs a comma after "time".
  • "The discs also came with a promotional figurine of one of the girls." I assume you mean "Each disc also came with..."?
  • "[11]Geneon USA licensed needs a space between the ref and the next sentence.
  • How come only the opening theme is mentioned and not the closing theme? More detail could be given here, including the name of the artist.
  • EP# should be bolded. Other lists tend to just use # as well, so you may want to consider that. I personally don't care either way.
  • Do "mansion" and "ghosts" really need to be wikilinked? Same with most of the other wikilinks in the episodes; I'd assume most readers know what "Christmas" is.
    • I removed ghosts as it's not that pertinent to the story. Christmas, or rather the idea of Christmas, plays a somewhat more important role in the anime and while most people might be familiar with it, it is also relevant to the topic, especially as it relates to 1 episode in particular.
    • Mansion...well...i could remove that one. While it is a central location not knowing about it would not inpede one's reading of the list as much as Christmas would.じんない 03:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • On that note, can you wikilink to List of Popotan characters more often? I have never seen this series, so I had no clue who the characters are.

I trust Malleus Fatuorum (talk · contribs) did a good job copyediting, so I won't even look at the episode list for errors I won't find. Good job on the list overall. And why yes, I stole this comment layout from Matthewedwards (talk · contribs). I quite like it. ɳOCTURNEɳOIR ( t • c ) 01:14, 3 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Wow, I really dislike the formatting of some of the citation templates... Anyway, I did a minor c/e and tweaking, so I will support. ɳOCTURNEɳOIR ( t • c ) 04:21, 3 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: instead of using multiple sources for the Japanese epsiode titles, I believe it would be better to use a single source (perhaps http://www.b-ch.com/cgi-bin/contents/ttl/stry_list.cgi?ttl_c=601) as a general reference, as many other animanga FLs do. —tan³ tx 10:05, 3 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Another comment: per WP:MOS-JA#Titles of books and other media, "S・U・K・I" is styled inappropriately, and should probably be "Suki". —tan³ tx 10:11, 3 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Did this myself. —tan³ tx 03:57, 9 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Done...took me a while to figure out what was the actual "title" and was was the "work" it was published under.じんない 10:19, 3 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
No other problems I can see. Support. —tan³ tx 03:57, 9 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Rambo's Revenge (talk · contribs)
Sourcing

It was mainly by concerns with reliable sourcing that held this back on the two previous occasions, and my previous concerns have now been satisfied.

Other Comments

Rambo's Revenge (talk) 22:58, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Support My concerns were resolved in previous FLCs.

Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 02:14, 10 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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