Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Presidents of Washington College/archive1

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The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 25 May 2020 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of Presidents of Washington College

Featured list candidates/List of Presidents of Washington College/archive1

Nominator(s): Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:51, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

After reviewing a number of FLCs, I feel that it is close to fulfilling the criteria. As a heads up, the article will be on the front page as a DYK in the next week, looking at the queue. --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:51, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 19:38, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

; Comments from Medusa

Why are the Principal and President in bold
- I bolded them because of the standard of bolding the title in the first usage in the leade. I removed them for now. --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Sort categories alphabetically
- Which categories? --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Add alt text for images
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:34, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
External Link → External links
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Citation number 3. Change the website=Washington College to publisher=Washington College
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Consider archiving sources.
Add a short description
The title of the page should be List of presidents of Washington College. Some examples List of presidents of the United States, List of presidents of Brigham Young University–Idaho, List of presidents of Louisiana Tech University etc.
- Done
Principals and Presidents of Washington College → Principals and presidents of Washington College
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:07, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
the Principal of the college; subsequently, the executive officer is the President. → principal and president
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:07, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
President of Washington College → lowercase "p"
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:07, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Current Officeholder → Current officeholder
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:07, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
In the table why are there two breaks tags. <br>. Just use one.
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:07, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
{{Abbr|Ref.(s)|Reference(s)}} → {{Abbr|Ref(s)|Reference(s)}}
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Previous Experience →Previous experience
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Former CEO of DuPont → no need to link CEO
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
In the infobox the President should be Presidents
- The post is the "president of Washington College" not the "presidents of Washington College" --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
date=6 December 2008|website=Washington College|pages=12-13|url-status=live → pages=12–13
- I added the dash, but I don't want to remove the website name or the date --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
wikitable sortable → wikitable plainrowheaders sortable. I think plainrowheaders looks better.
- I can't tell the difference --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 19:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's it from me. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 18:39, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I support this for promotion. I would appreciate your thoughts on Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of awards and nominations received by Scarlett Johansson/archive1. Thanks. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 19:38, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:56, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

;Comments

"negotiates a contract independent with the board" - this doesn't seem to make grammatical sense. Do you mean "independently"?
- Yes, fixed --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:44, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Four of them have been interim presidents." - extremely short sentence. I would merge it onto the previous one as "four of whom......"
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:44, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"A singular president was working in the private sector before their term" - as this refers to one specific woman, I don't see the need for gender neutral language, so I would just say "her term" (I presume this refers to Bair) Also "single" would be more apt than "singular"
- fixed --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:44, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Most of the rest of the presidents" => "Most of the remaining presidents"
- done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:44, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Once the table is sorted on any other column, it's impossible to re-sort it into number order. I suggest using hidden sorting templates to make the dashes sort as, say , 2.5, etc.
- done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:44, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Is nothing known about Stack and Clark's previous experience?
- done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:44, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
On Cater's row, "vice" is spelt wrong
- done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:44, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"But, Dumschott (1980) and primary documents from the era refer to him as the first principal." => "Dumschott (1980) and primary documents from the era, however, refer to him as the first principal."
- done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:44, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Note c is a complete sentence so needs a full stop.
- done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:44, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Gerard E. Stack is referred to as an Interim President by Watts (1894), Dumschott (1980), and Thompson (2000); however, the college's website" => "Gerard E. Stack is referred to as an Interim President by Watts (1894), Dumschott (1980), and Thompson (2000), however the college's website...."
- done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:44, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Think that's it from me..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Can you take another look ChrisTheDude --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 01:44, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:56, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I feel like the first image should be cropped. It's strange when all of them except that one have the same width. ~ HAL333 00:19, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Done --Guerillero | Parlez Moi 15:10, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Support ~ HAL 333 15:33, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Source review – The reliability and formatting of the sources look okay, and the link-checker tool shows no problems. The sourcing checks out overall. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:19, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:28, 24 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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