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List of Pune Warriors India cricketers

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Nominator(s): ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 07:39, 1 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it meets the criteria. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 07:39, 1 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Quick comments from Harrias talk
  • The dashes in batting average should sort at the bottom, at least for the cases when the player has not batted.
It is already like that.
Do you want them to sort at bottom while in ascending order or while in descending order? ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 10:28, 3 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I think that the best bowling average (40.07) should sort top, then down through the numbers to 0.00, and then the dashes. Harrias talk 10:20, 24 December 2013 (UTC)  Done[reply]
Resolved comments from —Vensatry (Ping me)
Comments from —Vensatry (Ping me)
  • Alt text should name the subject per WP:ALT
  • "Sourav Ganguly had captained Pune Warriors India in highest number of matches" -> Sourav Ganguly had captained Pune Warriors India in the highest number of matches
  • The use of colon in "Ashok Dinda had the best bowling figures..." is wrong, rather semi colon should be used. Also in the last sentence of the first para colon is incorrectly used. There should be a pause between the figure and the following text.
  • It's better to place the last sentence just above the table (in italics)
  • You don't have descriptions for "ave", "Wkt" and "BBI" in the key.
  • You have "Centuries scored" listed in the key but not in the table, though none of the players scored a hundred.
  • In the table yo;ve linked "Bowling" and "Fielding" but not "Batting".
  • Why is ESPNcricinfo (in the publisher parameter) linked in ref #4 alone?
  • "See also" section should be placed above your notes and references.

—Vensatry (Ping me) 18:58, 13 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

 Done ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 12:25, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Additional comments (re-visit)

  • Link publisher (CricketArchive)in ref #8
  • For Batting average, dashes should appear at the top while sorting by descending order
  • The IPL template is not needed here as it doesn't link here.

—Vensatry (Ping me) 06:52, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

 Done ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 15:27, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Zia Khan 15:26, 24 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Comments—on prose only,
  • The best bowling average among bowlers who had bowled more than 20 overs was Yuvraj Singh's: 22.93. No need of column (:).
  • Link bowling figures (bowling analysis).
  • ...while only conceding 18 runs. No need of while only.
  • In the 1st and second Footnotes: This doesn't includes → include
  • inning/s → innings
  • Link not out in the Footnotes.
  • Period at the end of the third note.

Zia Khan 01:01, 24 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

 Done ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 10:11, 24 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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