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The list was promoted by The Rambling Man 16:46, 11 November 2012 [1].

List of Rajasthan Royals cricketers

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Nominator(s): ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 16:29, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it meets the criteria and is based on existing FL List of Delhi Daredevils cricketers. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 16:29, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from TBrandley (talk) 21:04, 5 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Regarding the top message, I would add a "This article is about ...", then that for stuff. Use {{about}}.  Done
  • "scored1142" your missing a space  Done
  • "while only conceding" remove only per WP:NPOV  Done
  • This is a big formatting mistake in the players section. So the table and images may should be in same area, make table width or image width smaller
  • "doesn't" avoid contractions  Done
  • Some images don't have alt text

TBrandley 23:23, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 07:34, 11 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose issues with data integrity.
  • Opening paragraph is a little choppy. Lots of short sentences and the rather jarring repeat of "It" or "Its".... makes for weak prose.  Done
  • Perhaps worth noting that Watson is one of the foreign players to have represented RR while mentioning his record number of runs.
  • I think that this will be unnecessary.
  • "the fourth highest scorer" where is this referenced?  Done
  • "most number of wicket for" -> "most wickets for".  Done
  • Chitnis, one match, one inning, 12 runs, average of 6?  Done
  • Watson has 1142 runs in lead, 1242 in table.  Done
  • Watson's top score is 90* but he has no 50s?  Done
  • Overall, troubling that a spot check revealed such data issues...  Done
  • Don't see a need for a number column for captains because the "reigns" overlap in any case.  Done
  • ESPNcricinfo has a small c.  Done

The Rambling Man (talk) 11:49, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have fixed some other errors also, hopefully everything is fine now. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 14:39, 9 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from NapHit (talk) 17:16, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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  • "and then won the final from the Chennai Super Kings, claiming the title of the first IPL winner." and won the final against the Chennai Super Kings to become the first winner of the IPL
  • "was cancelled due to 2008 Mumbai attacks." need to add the between to and 2008
  • "In total, 63 players have played for RR..." In total is redundant
  • "1242 runs" comma after the 1, this also applies to the figures in the tables that are over 1000
  • Align the countries in the nationality column to the left, currently looks messy and hard to read
  • Issue with the captains table, think you have added one row too many on the sort bottom function
  • ref 4, 5 and 6 have differing date formats than the other refs, the other have the month first, while these three have the date first

NapHit (talk) 21:11, 11 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done all. :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 11:02, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Zia Khan 20:16, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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  • "The BBI has not not been provided for those bowlers who have not taken any wicket while playing for RR."  Done
  • Link "CricketArchive" and "ESPNcricinfo" at thier first usage in the references.  Done
  • Same for the BBC Sports.  Done
  • Ref# 5 needs author.
  • Author's name has been not provided in the news articles.
  • Ref# 6: PTI should be Press Trust of India and put it in the publisher parameter, The Hindu should be in the work parameter. The reference needs author, too.

Zia Khan 21:58, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 00:08, 19 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments –
  • No need for multiple Chennai Super Kings links in the lead.  Done
  • Shane Warne photo caption: First name should be included, and "wicket" needs to be plural.  Done
  • Rahul Dravid caption: "with the highest score of 66." → "with a high score of 66."?  Done
  • BBI column has some weird sorting. Uniyal and Warne don't seem to be ordered right, and Jadeja doesn't seem to be in order for the second number.  Done
  • Footnote 4: Should "the" be removed before RR? Also, the comma after the date could be a semi-colon instead.  Done Giants2008 (Talk) 03:25, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 10:18, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Footnote 1: "who have being not out in the inning/s they played" needs a rewrite.  Done

Giants2008 (Talk) 00:08, 19 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Try not to start a sentence with a number, like in "63 players have played for RR".
  •  Done Changed it to alphabets.
Comments by TSU
  • At the top of the article This page lists all those players who have played at least one match for Rajasthan Royals. is satated. While in the body of the article, The first list includes all players who have played at least one match for RR - This is repeating and I'd reckon to reduce the length of the text in the hatnote. Perhaps, please remove it from the hatnote.
  • The portal doesn't seem to be fitting so can you make it inline?

The list and the prose looks good otherwise for the star. TheSpecialUser TSU 07:49, 11 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done all. Thanks for the review. :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 07:55, 11 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]


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