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- In the lead, clarify when W&J was part of DIII. After Division III add since it's formation in 1973. From 1956–1972 Washington & Jefferson competed in the NCAA College Division.--done
- Clarify when W&J joined the Presidents' Athletic Conference in 1958 and prior to, if they were either in a conference or were independent.--done
- "XX head coaches" should be "30 head coaches"
- After "National Collegiate Athletic Association", add "(NCAA)" since you use the abbreviation further in the lead.--done
- Mention why the 1922 Rose Bowl was a notable. After California Golden Bears, I'd add another sentence like ", Neale is the only coach to lead the Presidents to a bowl game appearance."--done
- I've brought it up for discussion on the Rose Bowl Game article's talk page that games from 1902-1922 should be moved from "xxxx Rose Bowl" to "xxxx Tournament East-West football game". "Greasy Neale's 1921 team played in the 1922 Rose Bowl, where" should read like "Greasy Neale's 1921 team played in the 1922 Tournament East—West football game, the Rose Bowl Game's precursor, where"
- Shouldn't it be "since the 1900s." instead of "since the 1890s."--done
- You already linked Sirianni earlier in the same paragraph; no need to link to him again in the last sentence.--done
- Same thing for Greasy Neale and Pete Henry when you get to the Pro Football Hall of Fame sentence.--done
- "A running total of the number of coaches" should have the same footnote found on FL List of Texas Tech Red Raiders head men's basketball coaches for coaches with multiple terms.--done
- The dagger (†) should be superscripted using <sup> to open and </sup> to close in the legend and on Greasy Neale, John Heisman, Andrew Kerr, and Pete Henry. Again, look at Bob Knight's entry at List of Texas Tech Red Raiders head men's basketball coaches for an example of this.--done
- After "Overall games" in the legend, Ties should have the same note found on FL List of Texas Tech Red Raiders head football coaches--done
- Sortable tables - --done
- Greasy Neale's table entry should include "0" in the PW and PL entries. Since he was able to win, lose, or tie the game, all entries were possible unlike others (ex. Ralph Hutchinson never was able to win, lose or tie in a postseason game). If you look at a statistic book for Neale, his postseason record would say "0 - 0 - 1" not "— - — - 1"
- This takes some work because all sortable entries with "—" now become "{{ntsh|0}}—" and all entries with values (1, 2, 3, etc.) become "{{nts|xx}}" (replace the xx's with the value)
- Same thing goes for John Banaszak and Mike Sirianni for ties. Since both coaches' terms started after 1996, when tie games were eliminated, both coaches' "OT" entries should have "—" instead of "0" since they couldn't have coached a game to a tie.
- Just like I mentioned though in Neale's table, the entires should actually have "{{ntsh|0}}—" instead of just being replaced with "—"
- About the whole sortable table with endashes, entries with "0" values should be "{{ntsh|0.1}}0", so that "—" entries will sort together using "{{ntsh|0}}—" and not jumble up with each other. If you don't understand what I'm getting at, look at how it was done on List of Texas Tech Red Raiders head football coaches.
- All instances of J.J. Clark, W.D. Inglis, S.W. Black, and W.B. Seaman should have a space between the two abbreviated letters.--done
- Its not necessary but out of curiosity, why didn't you use John Heisman's picture instead in the lead? I mean he's thee John Heisman.
- Yeah, that's a good point. But, the Greasy Neale picture is of better quality, (plus I'm a huge fan of Greasy Neale--he was elected to the College and Pro football hall of fame, won two NFL championships as a coach, AND a world series!). Truth be told, Bob Folwell is the greatest coach in college history, but I can't find a free picture of him. Plus, Heisman's tenure at W&J was towards the end of his career, and was pretty minor.--GrapedApe (talk) 04:34, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
There's a lot of work left to do here but you're on the right track. NThomas (talk) 04:06, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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