Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of World Heritage Sites in Argentina/archive1
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The list was promoted by Hey man im josh via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 13 August 2024 (UTC) [1].[reply]
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List of World Heritage Sites in Argentina (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Tone 07:36, 19 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Argentina has 12 WHS, including the Inca roads, Iguazú falls, and old Jesuit missions. Standard style. As the list for Sudan is already seeing support, I am adding a new nomination. Tone 07:36, 19 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
edit- MPGuy2824
- wikilink "calves".
- "The missions have different layouts and are in different states of conservation," End the sentence here.
- "around the spectacular Iguazu Falls" - Use a number (length/height/other) instead of "spectacular".
- "On the Brazilian side".
- "created by the hunter-gatherer communities." Remove "the".
- "In additional to" -> "In addition to"
- "The oldest art in the cave dates to the 10th millennium BP, while the youngest traces of inhabitants at the site were dated to around 700 CE." Since you are using an actual date in the end, I would suggest that the "10th millenium BP" be converted to "8th millenium BCE".
- "It is a breeding ground for the southern right whale and the conservation efforts have helped the recovery of the once widely-hunted species"
- "valley by the hunter-gatherer communities and early farmers," - Remove "the"
- "as movement
sof messengers," - "Clandestine Centre of Detention, Torture, and Extermination." - no need to capitalize any of those since it isn't part of the name.
- "and then by communities that engaged in agriculture"
- "of a 100 million year
sold" - That's all that i got. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 10:28, 19 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed all, thanks! Tone 12:05, 19 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- "served as the clandestine" to "served as a clandestine" - unless you are sure that there was only one.
- Support in advance, since the above is a minor point which I'm sure you'll fix. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 14:26, 19 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed that as well. Thanks! Tone 14:40, 19 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed all, thanks! Tone 12:05, 19 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
edit- "at the 5th session of World Heritage Committee" => "at the 5th session of the World Heritage Committee"
- "and the works of Le Corbusier with six coutries" - last word is spelt incorrectly
- That's it :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:20, 20 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed, that was easy :) Tone 23:02, 20 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:18, 21 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
AK
edit- "Argentina accepted" I'd use ratified.
- "Argentina, and a further" Comma unnecessary.
- "ESMA Museum, in 2023" Comma unnecessary.
- "missions are listed as this World Heritage Site" to "missions are included in this World Heritage Site"
- "Iguazu Falls, spanning over" to "Iguazu Falls, which span over"
- "and the...widely-hunted species" to "; conservation efforts in the peninsula have helped the recovery of the once widely-hunted species"
- "245-208" en-dash.
- "include the early dinosaurs, such as the Eoraptor" to "include early dinosaurs such as Eoraptor"
- "plant species were identified" to "plant species have been identified"
- "unique insight into the life in the Triassic" to "unique insight into the life of the Triassic"
- "South America, that can" Comma unnecessary.
- "show only little erosion." either "show little erosion" or "show only a little erosion."
- "Ground sloths are a particular group represented." to "Ground sloths, in particular, are a well-represented group."
- "by the Russian Jews" "the" is unnecessary.
- 'literally "river of paintings"' Should be right after Pinturas River.
- That's what I got. AryKun (talk) 12:14, 27 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks, I fixed those that I agree with, I think the others are fine ;) I've had ratified in some previous lists but reviewers preferred accepted, so I'm using that one now. Tone 09:49, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. AryKun (talk) 11:12, 11 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks, I fixed those that I agree with, I think the others are fine ;) I've had ratified in some previous lists but reviewers preferred accepted, so I'm using that one now. Tone 09:49, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- EN-Jungwon
- Archive ref 18
- Ref 17 is showing a blank page for me. If that's the case then change the url status to dead.
That's all. -- EN-Jungwon 02:07, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed, 17 was the tentative site which is now obsolete. I left it on the list back then because the new page has not been updated yet. Thanks for checking! Tone 09:40, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hey man im josh
editSource review: Passed
- Reliable enough for the information being cited
- Consistent date formatting
- Consistent and proper reference formatting
- Appropriate wikilinks where applicable
- Spot checks on 15 sources match what they are being cited for
Good stuff. Hey man im josh (talk) 19:44, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Hey man im josh (talk) 19:44, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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