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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:The Rambling Man 06:57, 12 August 2008 [1].

NBA All-Defensive Team

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I am nominating this article because I believe it should be promoted to a featured list.—Chris! ct 00:22, 2 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments Since I finished copyediting, the only things you need to is:
    • unlinked the relinked on the table
    • if you're going to put Player (X) on the key, you should put it on the table (e.g. Jerry West (#))
    • and finally, put the marks beside the players. (e.g. Jerry West*)
    • if all the NBA Defensive Player of the Year awardees are on the table, add that on the lead and on the table or make it on a note like the NBA Rookie of the Year Award
    • put the notes on the nationality since the notes are talking about their nationality
    • Why does Tim Duncan have a note for his nationality while Raja Bell doesn't. They're both from the same country. -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 22:43, 2 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed —Chris! ct 23:06, 2 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • if done all, i'll support.

-- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 08:53, 2 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done—Chris! ct 20:22, 2 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 18:40, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comments
    • "The team is generally composed of two five-man teams, a first and a second team" team team team!
reword—Chris! ct 04:17, 5 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • "first-team " or "first team"?
Should be no hyphen—Chris! ct 04:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • Ditto for second team.
Same here—Chris! ct 04:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • "forwards, one center, and one guard " probably should wikilink these positions for the benefit of people who don't understand those roles aren't necessarily defensive.
Got it—Chris! ct 04:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • "selected successively since " I get you mean each successive season but it just reads a little strangely to me.
It sounds ok to me. I don't really know how to reword it. Do you have any suggestion?—Chris! ct 04:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • First Team or first team? e.g. "made the First Team eight times each" vs "The top five players with the highest point total make the first team"
Should be in lower case, I believe—Chris! ct 04:05, 5 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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  • I'd like to see an External Links section, and maybe even a navbox. You could use the "general" NBA reference in the EL section
Don't think this is a good idea. All other award pages don't have an External Links section.—Chris! ct 20:14, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Perhaps in the Key you should put "Player (in bold text)" or something to make it a bit more clear
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! Please reply on my talk page. Thanks. 09:05, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • I noticed you didn't overlink players names in the table, but the teams are. Why?
Fixed.—Chris! ct 20:14, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Sort these out and I'll support. Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 08:32, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

OK, Support - Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 20:52, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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