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- Result: Kept. 💽 LunaEclipse 💽 🌹 ⚧ 【=◈︿◈=】 14:41, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
There are several "non-primary source needed" tags from 2019 that need to be resolved. Z1720 (talk) 15:28, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- Oh wow, yeah, this article needs some cleaning up. I think someone was over-zealous with the tags, but there is a LOT of material that needs outside sourcing. The page also needs to be updated in general. I'm in the process of working on this.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 16:31, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- I've done some work, how is it now?-- 3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 16:57, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- @3family6: It looks a lot better. I added some cn tags. Some of the paragraphs are quite long and should be broken up, like the last paragraph of "Early years (formation to 2002)", both paragraphs in "Style", and the first and last paragraph of "Kekal and Christianity". I think the second paragraph of "Influences" should be removed as it is cited to Pintrest. Are there any more recent sources that can be added to the article, especially to replace social media inline citations? Z1720 (talk) 17:08, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- That one missing citation I thought I'd added. It's done, now. I'm going to work on that "Christianity" paragraph, it is indeed excessively long.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 19:45, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- Done some more work. I'm finding lots of deadlinks, but with Internet Archive having those issues right now I'm having to manually catch them rather than running the bot.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 20:26, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hi 3family6, do you intend to work further on this article? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:32, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- I have. Was awaiting a response from Z1720. I apologize for not following up regarding the deadlinks being resolved and my other cleanup work.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 17:14, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- @3family6: The article looks a lot better. I added some citation needed tags. Z1720 (talk) 21:04, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720: Wow, one of those was a line that got left in from ten years ago when I removed a source that I couldn't verify. Deleted. The other statement I corrected to say that the debut album DIDN'T have European and North American distribution, and provided a source for that. Anything else?--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 22:37, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- I have no more concerns with this article. Z1720 (talk) 23:00, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720: Wow, one of those was a line that got left in from ten years ago when I removed a source that I couldn't verify. Deleted. The other statement I corrected to say that the debut album DIDN'T have European and North American distribution, and provided a source for that. Anything else?--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 22:37, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- @3family6: The article looks a lot better. I added some citation needed tags. Z1720 (talk) 21:04, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- I have. Was awaiting a response from Z1720. I apologize for not following up regarding the deadlinks being resolved and my other cleanup work.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 17:14, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hi 3family6, do you intend to work further on this article? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:32, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- Done some more work. I'm finding lots of deadlinks, but with Internet Archive having those issues right now I'm having to manually catch them rather than running the bot.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 20:26, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- That one missing citation I thought I'd added. It's done, now. I'm going to work on that "Christianity" paragraph, it is indeed excessively long.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 19:45, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- @3family6: It looks a lot better. I added some cn tags. Some of the paragraphs are quite long and should be broken up, like the last paragraph of "Early years (formation to 2002)", both paragraphs in "Style", and the first and last paragraph of "Kekal and Christianity". I think the second paragraph of "Influences" should be removed as it is cited to Pintrest. Are there any more recent sources that can be added to the article, especially to replace social media inline citations? Z1720 (talk) 17:08, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- I've done some work, how is it now?-- 3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 16:57, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- Oh wow, yeah, this article needs some cleaning up. I think someone was over-zealous with the tags, but there is a LOT of material that needs outside sourcing. The page also needs to be updated in general. I'm in the process of working on this.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 16:31, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
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