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The White Stripes

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Result: Delisted. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 12:20, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

I am submitting this on behalf of WP:ALM. Indopug originally submitted it but he got confused and asked me for help. It is a pretty choppy and unsourced article throughout. I've never edited it; however, I belive it should be delisted. Thanks, Burningclean _[speak] 01:39, 13 April 2008 (UTC)

• Delist as a member of WP:ALM. Poorly-written and sourced. Needs a dedicated, interested editor to bring it up to GA standard. — Preceding unsigned comment added by WesleyDodds (talk • contribs)
• Delist Not as nominator, but as inocent bystander that seems to have been hit by a car apon looking at the GA. Burningclean _[speak] 03:49, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
• Delist Yeah, almost the entire article needs rewriting; stubby paragraphs, incomprehensive material, lots of cruft and trivia, and poor referencing. I'm nominating this, BTW, and asked Burning for help. Thanks, Burning... indopug (talk) 04:28, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
• Comment. The article needs rework, per above comments. Majoreditor (talk) 01:50, 14 April 2008 (UTC)