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A. Leon Higginbotham, Jr.

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I am looking for comments on the entire article. Sorry to not be more specific, but I guess I'm looking to improve everything that I can with it. I can be more specific, now that I think about it. Ultimately I'd like to get this to FA status, so any suggestions for how to improve with that goal in mind are what I'm looking for. Thanks, JCO312 21:48, 17 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

RJH

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Some of the sentences seem a little on the terse side, which (to me at least) hinders the flow slightly. But overall the article seems fine. I only have a few suggestions:

  • The lead is rather short. Could it be expanded to include a second paragraph?
  • Can the long paragraph in the lead of the "Personal life" section be split into two or more smaller paragraphs.
  • The article has plenty of references, but I have to recommend using the {{cite}} templates throughout for consistent formatting and information completeness.

I hope this was helpful. Thanks. — RJH (talk) 17:39, 5 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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