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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because it was recently improved as part of Wikipedia:GLAM/ARKive.
This is my first request for peer review.
Thanks, Andy Mabbett (User:Pigsonthewing); Andy's talk; Andy's edits 22:11, 21 July 2011 (UTC)
Comments from Cryptic C62 · Talk:
- The Distribution and habitat section desperately needs to be expanded. See, for example, Lion.
- The Teeth section should be a subsection of Description.
- The first paragraph of Teeth needs references.
- Question that should be answered somewhere in the article (and also the lead): Do any critters eat African elephants?
- The Feeding section needs to be expanded. What types of vegetation do these critters eat? Do they ever eat meat? Does the type of food vary between adults and young elephants?
- The Behavior section needs more information about breeding.
- The Intelligence section needs to be expanded. If there is an entire daughter article devoted to the subject, surely there is more to be written about it here than one measly sentence.
- Acronyms, such as ICZN and IUCN, should be spelled out upon first usage.
I've taken the liberty of numbering your suggestions; for which, thank you. 2=done 7=done 8=done More to follow. Andy Mabbett (User:Pigsonthewing); Andy's talk; Andy's edits 15:57, 29 July 2011 (UTC)