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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to nominate this article for GAN.
Thanks, Meganenohito (talk) 13:22, 24 October 2024 (UTC)
- Some quick tips: The first sentences in Early life are unsourced. Good articles often avoid very short paragraphs. Are you able to find out which part of Bergen he is from?
- Quite many sections start with "On [date] [year]," which might come across as somewhat repetitive and prose that could be improved.
- To conduct a spelling check is another tip. One glaring spelling error I spotted right away (and fixed) is "Muipte sources". Geschichte (talk) 19:59, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for correcting the spelling mistake. Regarding the first sentence of Early life, I could not find a citation from a reliable source. Should I delete Early life in such a case? Meganenohito (talk) 23:42, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
- Probably delete the name of the parents, a real danger here is WP:CITOGENESIS i.e. introducing sources that originally copied Wikipedia. There are lots of sources for his being born in Northampton, though, such as this, which also states the borough of grew up in, Fana. Geschichte (talk) 08:52, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed. Is there anything else to fix? Meganenohito (talk) 14:32, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
- any comments? Meganenohito (talk) 09:25, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Probably delete the name of the parents, a real danger here is WP:CITOGENESIS i.e. introducing sources that originally copied Wikipedia. There are lots of sources for his being born in Northampton, though, such as this, which also states the borough of grew up in, Fana. Geschichte (talk) 08:52, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for correcting the spelling mistake. Regarding the first sentence of Early life, I could not find a citation from a reliable source. Should I delete Early life in such a case? Meganenohito (talk) 23:42, 25 October 2024 (UTC)