Wikipedia:Peer review/All Blacks at the Rugby World Cup/archive1

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I'm not experienced at working on lists, especially ones like this. Any comments that can help me improve it to a FL would be greatly appreciated. - Shudde talk 05:56, 4 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

SGGH

  • Per WP:MOS I am fairly certain that it is advised not to wikilink the bold text in the lead.
  • The lead needs some citations, particularly "they have a poor world cup record compared to competing teams..." and the sentence that follows that about ranking.
  • A cite to the 2007 score against France would also be useful
  • The position section, is it possible to include who knocked them out (when they didnt win) and what the score was? And perhaps the venue? Certainly I think there should probably be a dash between the year and the position.
  • Obviously you will need a notes section to include the citations Italked about above.
  • I'm not sure of the layout of each year being 1987 with the link to that world cup right underneath it, but I can't think of a better way of doing it either to be honest.

Hope those comments help! SGGH speak! 12:02, 16 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]