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Hi! I created this article in January, and have been expanding it since. English is not my first language, so there might be errors in cohesion. I would like for it to eventually reach B-class status. Help would be much appreciated!
Regards, Bleff (talk) 02:02, 20 March 2016 (UTC)
- Hi there! I read your inquiry on my talk page would be glad to help out. Now college has been keeping me rather busy, I'll see what I can do. In the meantime, here's what I've noticed from the get-go:
- Do not source YouTube videos that are not uploaded by the copyright owners. The channel doesn't seem to either affiliated with either band's record label or the TV channel that uploaded it. See WP:YOUTUBE. Since you already have the TV channel that aired the show cited, you can just remove the url (not all sources have to be online).
- Discogs is not a reliable source as it is a user-submitted website. See WP:ALBUM/SOURCE#Sources to avoid
- More to come'
In the meantime, you can use the articles I helped promote to featured article (Romance (Luis Miguel album), Fijación Oral, Vol. 1, and Formula, Vol. 1, as examples of how an ideal article should look like. Best of luck, Erick (talk) 02:47, 20 March 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you! I fixed those errors. --Bleff (talk) 04:19, 21 March 2016 (UTC)
- @Bleff: Hey Bless, I'm sorry for not replying lately, I've been going through a loss. So unfortunately, I will have to leave the peer review. I hope you can find someone to review the article in my place. Best of luck, Erick (talk) 20:57, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you anyway. --Bleff (talk) 02:31, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
- @Bleff: Hey Bless, I'm sorry for not replying lately, I've been going through a loss. So unfortunately, I will have to leave the peer review. I hope you can find someone to review the article in my place. Best of luck, Erick (talk) 20:57, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you! I fixed those errors. --Bleff (talk) 04:19, 21 March 2016 (UTC)